It could happen to you …

Sounds interesting lemme dig in

Evah Ngobeni · 4 months ago

Interesting

Thapelo Matemane · 5 months ago

Very interesting

Omphilwe Letsoalo · 6 months ago

Interesting

Thandy Pilusa · 2 years ago

Mnmk

Florence · 2 years ago

Hooked already

Kue_M . · 2 years ago

Interesting

Gugu Sikhakhane · 3 years ago

this story is so so good

Lieghona · 3 years ago

I take it back I’ll finish the book today

Piper · 4 years ago

Wow 🤩 it has so many chapters it will take me 3 weeks to finish trust me 🤞

Piper · 4 years ago

Let's find out more 😯

Thilisanai · 4 years ago

Love that you put alot of chapters show commitment and a great story plan thank you 💕 💜

DeathAvoCat · 5 years ago

Too many chapters will not read them allļ

Bontle2004 · 5 years ago

heyyyyyyy

yorlorkarzie · 5 years ago

Si many chapters but then lemme read it

slindo_thando · 5 years ago

I think it will be fun

Funny mkandawire · 6 years ago

Hmm Well I Think It Will Be Intresting

FRAN FIYDER · 9 years ago

hi

00ff00*...RAINDROP+QUEEN* · 9 years ago

It could happen to you ...

qondi · 9 years ago

Oh, it's happening to me alright. No stories all over Fundza :o(

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++. · 9 years ago

It could happen to you ...

givendineo77 · 9 years ago

Its great

Mercy+gal · 11 years ago

/oh dis wz a gud stry i ever read /

(H)sese-africn-grlsh(c) · 11 years ago

Dat was dope

#ff8080*LADY+P*:-) · 12 years ago

Invyt minnie at073023776112 or minentle5509

Minentle;-) · 12 years ago

It was a great story, romantic and brdathtaking. I luv it and i wud lyk 2 repeat it sumtyms.

Linda+aka+mrs+popularity · 12 years ago

I really liked the story: Sumthng lyk dis once hapened 2 me. It realy hurts knwin ur best frnd is doin dis 2 u. :'(

Lira · 12 years ago

Its a great stry:):)

…@RbIe+bItCh · 12 years ago

I lyk tht

P-man · 12 years ago

I realy liked the story.it just showz u wht people wl do if they wnt sumthng u have

:)"mIsS+mC":) · 12 years ago

I really love it it rockx really bigup 2 the wrttr nd the pubblishrz 100 nd 10 percent

MBALIE · 12 years ago

The storie is great i enjoyed it a lot

DÂ…@+chÂ¡c · 12 years ago

!ts a great story...e!sh anthr chaptr

Equation+x3 · 13 years ago

THIS IS THE 'IT' ROMANTIC STORY I HAVE EVER READ...I JUST WISH THE AUTHOR COULD DO A MOVIE ABOUT IT..*THAT WOULD BE $AWESOME$!!!!....KEEP IT UP GUYZ!!!...U ROCK!!!!

(H)…@Â¿(H) · 13 years ago

It wz de mst heartfelt story i eva read plz brng another part

PRINCE+J · 13 years ago

Wow! Wht a wndrful rmantic stry. I realy njyd it.

$Â¤MR+GIZ+(*)+100%+PUREÂ¤$ · 13 years ago

I lov d stry nd it rock bt i ddnt lyk its endn,i thot d a sm chptr bt i dspnt wn i gt dat ws endn.it lvz m wth mny q.

Gremah · 13 years ago

This is a really great story! A 10 out of 10

(*)pHat_pRinceSs+0f+Fabul0siTy · 13 years ago

Realy aws0ome story, but im sad because there are no more chapters:(

8|=)(^-^)[:$][(H)]rEtArD.nErD[ · 13 years ago

It was awesome:~

Yasmine · 13 years ago

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Beryl · 13 years ago

W0W:).. I can actually say this is my favourite story. As I saw in chapter1 Carly meeting the Holly Wood teenage tv star Taylor, It just brought my wish and hope that one day what happened to Carly might happen to me. But putting friends like Crystal aside.. As the title say: IT COULD HAPPEN TO YOU.. It will totally happen to me one day;);)

Candy · 13 years ago

It wsnt dat convncng phela dats 2 gud 2 b true,de stry nids mre spicyz it ddnt gv me dat vava vam

Candy+gal · 13 years ago

It wsnt cnvncn phela dat is 2 gud 2 b true,de stry nid mre spcy it ddnt gv dat vava vam

Candy+gal · 13 years ago

its was great cuz i knw hw she feelt cuz momys baby always knw what 2 do 2 get things they way

KILLER+IS+BACK+4RM+HELL(G)(G) · 13 years ago

It rocked.....suberb...loved it...bt i wanted to knw how their date went????n n n wat happened to da awesomes n sisters????we waitin here...bt keep it up yoza

:P\>>..Â£il...$exI...Mama..< · 13 years ago

I love this book! I could read it over and over!

Nyarie · 13 years ago

I real lyk de ryter. Your story iz so wow!!

Mr+piano · 13 years ago

It was of da hock.js wish it told us wat happend afta dat

Pro…@ · 13 years ago

I LOVED THIS BOOK

<:-):SPONTANUS+GAL:-):-),/ · 13 years ago

It was a good story i really like it alot

Cute-thulza. · 13 years ago

Wow dats realy true coz my frnd ws jelous lyk dat 4 me 2 bt nt a lunatic.bt who knws mybe it wud have cme 2 dat point

Da+goddes · 13 years ago

Luvd t..enjyd t..kp t guyz..(F)(F)

Lil-Shawty · 14 years ago

I lovd da storie it ws gr8 n romentic

(x)+Sunshine(x) · 14 years ago

Wow yoza has 4gtn dat it has readers, yal dnt care bwt us

Ms.Thally · 14 years ago

i lyk da story it teaches us abt da reality of lyf n smtyms we need to learn dat ppl we love are those who hurt us da mst

Lesedi · 14 years ago

Wt ive found out "Yoza u rock each an stories i red hear are smthng might b happend or had hppend... Its great 2 read stories an anx 4 ur support stories on da cellfhone Yoza u r the best.

G.unit · 14 years ago

I jst wish thr was part 2 of the story..*I LOVED IT*

Dark+dindy · 14 years ago

I think der shud b a part 2,with a mor mature version,horror,suspense,drama n de teen thing'z nt workn try 20 sumthin 2 30 bt kip it young coz its gt a tough title

Ju'lee · 14 years ago

Wow great story,more lyk a fairy,so dnt u(the author)make a film.

Ju'lee · 14 years ago

Too damn predictable. Horrible charachter sketching. Bt overall i kinda enjoyed reading it.

BushieÂ©Â® · 14 years ago

It waz grt nd vry emotional

Mis+carvela+victim · 14 years ago

I really loved the story kip it up yoza

Snitch+bitch · 14 years ago

I hope tmrw we'l get the sisters nd the awesomes.

.+.+*SLENDALICIOUS*.+.+ · 14 years ago

It was a gr8 strie bt y dd yoza post 2 of da same chpterz in a way url robbd us!n wat happnd 2 sisterz nd da awesomes?yoza cum on nd url r makn us w8 2 lng 4 new stries cum on guyz url used 2 b gr8 bt nw gettn a bit lame plz yoza post more intrestn stries o kp up da previous stries!:(8o.{12K}.{15N}

· 14 years ago

Nice

Rene(x)Nene · 14 years ago

very long

*sw…@ngel* · 14 years ago

A nice story

Cute+-+gal+-zn · 14 years ago

Wow.i nvr thght it culd b ths entrtng.THY LVD HAPILY EVR AFTR

Sh:x07 · 14 years ago

It was fabtebulas and i would love t0 read the whole t4ghng plz

blauqash · 14 years ago

It was a great story

Lick+me+lyk+i+lolipop · 14 years ago

It is very atractive 60%

PRO-UNITY+WA+LEHIPI+KID · 14 years ago

Hey i realy,realy enjoyd ths story,i wsh tha yoza crew cud cum wth many romance stories,and comedies,BG UP TO THS STORY-Yobza(young dk in plakas)

Bazooka · 14 years ago

Wel da stori ws knda intrestn,t ws tht mavrlous typa stories.luv tc climax whn da ada frnd z jelous,tc twist n da tail :}kp up da gd wrk Yoza

Funky+g · 14 years ago

yo yoza gr8 story love it, i wouldnt mind meetng a teen movie star. i lovd the endng it made me want mre of the story.

Â®FACE+DROP · 14 years ago

Ths story ws doofis realy njoyd it,bt xpectd mre at da end...cumon guyz mke it interestin...stil waitin on da awesumz!!!!hpe 2 gt sum soon

(*)…@.R.n.Â¥(*) · 14 years ago

De story ws gr8 i really luv it bt we wnt sum mre it can’t end lyk dat

ESSENCE · 14 years ago

Different!

Nicky · 14 years ago

Nt bein bad bt i did nt lyk ths st0ri

Â¥$/THUG+LOVIN/Â¥$ · 14 years ago

It was s0 c00l n gr8 i mean c00l n gr8 r nt da perfect w0rds 2 describe hw it was... But then u left every1 wit a question mark! Mara anyway keep it up y0za,keep 0n duin da gud wrk

Lil+sexy+bitch · 14 years ago

Wel da stowi was nxa reali fun n intrstin kina missd da end tho. Plz dnt b so lng hurry up. U rock:)

*Â«Gu&$$Â»* · 14 years ago

It was awsome loved it

Gold+diamond · 14 years ago

Tws kwl evn thu it lft evry1 wit q's. Well dne yoza

Lebogaile · 14 years ago

it ws a gryt story indeed but da end ws quite borin thumbs down i thnk we stil need mor chapters....Hey watsup wit latoya nd da awesums giv us mor guys big up yoza u rock (*)

;)MIDNIGHT+SHOPPER;) · 14 years ago

the stowi was nt that bad..it was nt acualy mnt 4 teen it soundd mre the a disneyJnr tipa thng ..it was alil disapnting.what happnd 2 the awsmes?nw that was leke excting nd orgnal..plz dnt kp us wting so lng 4 the awsme..nd a horror tipe thng wld be fab..or a supernatrl thng..gud job yoza nxt tym try alil mstry bt u awsme kp it up..nd try nt 2 kp us waiting so long 4 the nxt stowi UR THE BEST:):):)....YOZA.{1GD}.{PL}

!!!!Â?Ã?Ã!!!!!!!! · 14 years ago

the stowi was nt that bad..it was nt acualy mnt 4 teen it soundd mre the a disneyJnr tipa thng ..it was alil disapnting.what happnd 2 the awsmes?nw that was leke excting nd orgnal..plz dnt kp us wting so lng 4 the awsme..nd a horror tipe thng wld be fab..or a supernatrl thng..gud job yoza nxt tym try alil mstry bt u awsme kp it up..nd try nt 2 kp us waiting so long 4 the nxt stowi UR THE BEST:):):)....YOZA.{1GD}.{PL}

!!!!Â?Ã?Ã!!!!!!!! · 14 years ago

The story rock! but how can that be the end?? But otherwise I LOVED IT!

!?...100%+BOERE+GAL...!? · 14 years ago

Gr8 story..i rly enjoyd reading it..kip it up!

Lady+tkz · 14 years ago

Wat cn i cy?wel its gd...bt its lyk one o4 da story wer knw dat da bd guy gna.....da hpy eva afta thn..its 2 much 4wnd...2 da wrta pls twk 2 da sistas wrta 4 mrd advic

Miss+al+dat! · 14 years ago

Awes0me story!:)

](z)[*~VicIoUs+AnGÂ£|*~](z)[ · 14 years ago

Big up 2 y0za twaz a gr8t st0ry vry intstng bt it waz inc0mplete mwah dats me

:-)Bby+lee;-) · 14 years ago

The story was okay bt a little too straight foward. The only original part about it was that it was in SA.

(G)…@$$+#Â£rÂ¤(x)(G) · 14 years ago

Oh my...dz story z lame,fairytaled, t aint gt depth...wel mayb 4 a 10yr old t wl do, 2 teach em 2 read englsh...as 4 yoza, uv lost ur plot, i used 2 luk 4ward 2 readn ur stories bt nw....damn t suckz...dz story hs a strong title, i thot t wl tackle real issuz that r facing thousandz of million teenz out thre...bt yoh...tz a double thumbz down, 4 both da story n yoza

LadyP · 14 years ago

Dis story ws amazing nd i wud nva leave a guy dt rly care4me 4a craze frnd,i wnt2c mre strys lyk dis(G)

Electra · 14 years ago

Realy luvd the cpt version of cindarela.

Tsaki · 14 years ago

Yoza.. cud u pls giv us sm more horror.. its more interestin.By d wy d story.. fantabulas

…@r.Bï¿½ï¿½ · 14 years ago

Yoza the story was very good it was very supa.i enjoyed every sentenc

Cute+p+ · 14 years ago

its a realy nice story but the ending we dnt realy knw what happnd next but big ups yoza u guys rock

(x)GUCCI+BABY;) · 14 years ago

Twz a nyc story bt i felt dat da end wz a bit boring... Wat happenz nxt???? We rly need 2 knw ey... Bt ey big 2 da auther

Gossip+gal+(G) · 14 years ago

Ovr da pst few mnths u hve given us gr8 stories nd m nt c0mplaining,bt i thnk its tym 2go bwk 2 s(*)s stry i kinda ms latoya.... Ths 1stry 4 1mnth thng s**ks wat ar we sppsd 2read 4 da whle 20days ha.a its nt fair

Chommie · 14 years ago

Wer r da kontax ?

$Â®Mv-boyÂ®$ · 14 years ago

It was a new refreshing story. Nice

Perfect+(F) · 14 years ago

It waz gr8 bt left me wit a question mark wat hppnd ta carly wen taylor leavz tl us mre gv us mre juicies

Lady+lartorche · 14 years ago

This story was good..but i needed a bit more. Like, what am i supposed to read for the rest of this month? And what about the other stories, i've been waiting for Latoya's story for a while now? Keep them coming guys!

(*)LÂ¡llÂ¥(*) · 14 years ago

Luv da story,ws xpectn mre n ddnt lyk da ending it lyft me hanging

Drama+queen · 14 years ago

Waz totall a gr8 stori...t waz sumtng owt of da box simply da impossible mde possible...mor lyk da cinderella drama Crystal az da crazy step sistr..evritng abt dis stori mde senc...tng iz da rest of us wid kill - Carly'z xprienc which will nvr cme(sad) bt then again da story waz fairytale nd a vry fantabulous fairytale..big ups 2 da writer

E.N.H.L.E · 14 years ago

I thnk it was gud 2 read nd it taught me neva trust sum1 completely nd it also showed me 2 take chances wen it cums 2 love...

lee · 14 years ago

Very predictable... We waited a month for this? Teenagers need more substance,not unrealistic silly stories.

Nicky · 14 years ago

Yoza g8t story kep it up, i wsh my lve lif could chng 2:-(

'My+Angel' · 14 years ago

A comment means to gv out ur opinion nd ur own take of the story..evryone has their own tke on the story,sum of us wer nt that impressed nd we were nt mean bt honest..dnt shoot at us bcos of ur tke on the story..

khisa · 14 years ago

I loved it and im giving it 10/10 it is a good story

Justin · 14 years ago

Was okay. A bit unrealistic tho?? It makes it difficlt 2 connect with the story. Keep on writing!

madJazzhatter · 14 years ago

It wz gr8 jst dt i ddnt lyk da endng ts stll lft me wit sm questnz of wt hppnd nxt, hp de z anothr story followng ds 1 2 mk us c wt hppnd nxt!

Sngl+lady:-) · 14 years ago

The bad thng is dat we dnt knw what hapnd when taylor left

Breezybabe · 14 years ago

At 1st i though it waz a gr8 story bt nw aftr d end mmm mh it sucks, ther r 20 more chapters needed.

(G)J+&+B+MANAGER+(G) · 14 years ago

Woow wat lovely ending big up yoza cnt wait 4 de nxt chaptr

Micra · 14 years ago

Wow. . . It is indeed a great story. . Thou its 2 gud 2 b true. . Big up to da author. . Great job nd kep it up. .

Peace!Â¡! · 14 years ago

Ja the story was great bt nt mind blowing...it was nt put in2 mre detail..it was a good read frm my syd..i felt like lyk there ws sumtng missin and tht cud hv bin added.it didnt suck bt i ws nt tht anxious abt it..the story line was a bit dull n3eded sum colour,bt hey it was kinda nice.i didnt like the ending-sorry-i didnt get to know much abt the character's.i didnt connect wit all of them..bt hey kip it up-wink-

Khisa · 14 years ago

Yoh n0 offence bt thz st0ry ws whack:{its just al over e place,i ddnt quite nj0y it 2 tel da truth,wats up wth latoya n the awes0mes?8ooh cnt w8 to read em

(F)(*)*sweet+angel*(H)(x) · 14 years ago

Its so interestn t says read me

Sethudacious · 14 years ago

Yoza m very cr0ss @ u y bring us a gr8 st0ry n thn repeat chptrz heh y? Dnt do ths 2 us plz,try n luk 4da prblm nd fix it...ths stry is wndrfl n educati0nal:) biggup 2 u guys...wndr wat hppnd 2 latoya nd ha tr0ubld lyf:?.

(x)(F)CuTe+AnGel(x);) · 14 years ago

Wel i loved the story.it realy interesting i couldn't stop reading from ernest

Bar…@nk · 14 years ago

It b so kwl if they got bak 2gethr!:}

ÃrÃ«Ã£mgÃ®rÂ£ · 14 years ago

Keep it up yoza

(c)TYRAWILLION-LAVA(x) · 14 years ago

So much for a happy ending:(

(F)…@bÂ¥ï¿½;)(F) · 14 years ago

Its a great story!

kay · 14 years ago

WoW tHts A gReAt stOry yOzA U gUys rOcK MwAH loTsa lOVe 4rM me;) cNt w8 2rEad tHe odA CHaPtErS

2[]8 · 14 years ago

D story ws gr8 wanna knw wtz gonna hpn nxt,

$MRS;-)HARRIS · 14 years ago

U guyz r realy arrogant 2 CHAPTERS A DAY TILL THE 10TH means EXACTLY THAT stop pretending like u ddnt knw its gana b like that i doubt u guyz cn do any beta! KEEP IT UP YOZA neva mind these arrogant ppz

:P�…@Â¥@:P · 14 years ago

Crystal is one jealous frnd, frnds like ths arent needed,crystal cud hav killed carly n 4 wat? A famous hot boy? Neh man crystal has gone realy mad now

Mbuso · 14 years ago

I like the storyline but the way its written isnt very good. It lacks detail and it doesnt realy flow into eachother but i like the storyline and cant wait to find out what happened to carly

…@+d!v@ · 14 years ago

Soapie,fairytaile,sisie,chick flick, almost r0mantic..:?I GUESS THOSE ARE D WORDZ SUMPPL USE 2DESCRIBE THIS STOWI. Well i'd say its "NON-REALISTIC".:e. WHO SAID TEENZ DNT KNW HW 2THNK?

$MR.CONGENIAL$ · 14 years ago

Hu wud hv thot dat d best of ur frnds cn bcom d worsd of ur enermies.. bt dese things jst happn, it aint lyk its writtn on d forehead dat a person is a brainless zombie.

…@r.Bï¿½ï¿½ · 14 years ago

Sane Ths is a great story,nd im dying 2 knw wts gonna happen in da end..Keep up da gud wrk guys!

Sane:)++da+divae · 14 years ago

Wow wat a wndrful story...cnt wyt 2 check out the othrz....i wndr watz gna hapn???

…@bÂ¥+k · 14 years ago

Marvellous stori cnt wait 4 da nxt chapter ahooy! 2 da ryta incredible

*Lady+Naturalle* · 14 years ago

This story is based on a true story it means u mst love dm all bt trust n01 n it rockd!!:)

White+chick · 14 years ago

Chapter 13 and 14 are the same thing

Naughty+angel · 14 years ago

What the hell? Yoza, chapterz 13 and 14 are exctly the same, word for word. I'm sure this was not intended? Please fix this!

Saber101 · 14 years ago

Dud the writter cn u c dat chapter 3an4 12&13 ar de same thng if u ddn't gt a chance 2write 2chapter jst post 1instead of fooling us around.ITS A G8T STORY SO FAR CNT WAIT 2HEAR MORE

Reginaldion · 14 years ago

U guys shld stop complaining m jst a greatfl cnt u c dat ths pepz r tryn.big up 2 u guys 4 al da effort n its funny coz reveal stories dat happens evryday whr ur best frnds becum ur worst enemy

(H)ROXY(x)GIRL(*) · 14 years ago

da story was totally amazin..really ayoba

(F)MALICIOUS(F) · 14 years ago

Y did da chapters hv 2 b so short nw im left in suspense:(

@R!…@ · 14 years ago

Wow wat a beutiful story.cnt wait 4 da nxt chapterz

Mr+flirtatious · 14 years ago

Wats up wit da same chptrz nxa u startn to annoy me yoza

Naughty+DEE · 14 years ago

Wat happened 2 the many stories we used 2 hav. We nid more, i havent been impressed at ol. Bt nyc story thou

Michaelangelo · 14 years ago

Kwl,awes0me.bt y r 2day'z chapter'z th same8o??

U+++ME+=WE · 14 years ago

Thz story z great it z a must read 4 evry1 its bwt d betrayal tht we al once in a while experience cnt wait 4 d ending bet its gonna rock

Crazy+Babe · 14 years ago

Da storie is grt kep it up yoza

'My+Angel' · 14 years ago

Nuc story n h8 carly'z frnd .... But guys plz give us @lst 2 Stories wat we suppose to read after da 10th wen dis ends plz just add one mid month so dat after readin da first one u read da second one OTHERWYZ BIG UP TO ALL UR WRITERS THEY KNOW HOW TO KEEP US HAPPY

Luv+Child! · 14 years ago

Dis story's getn evn mre intrestn,n i lyk it.

:-)i'm+me;-) · 14 years ago

best friends doesnt do THAT to each other! how could crystal have done that with a smile, she's an ass, i realy feel carlys pain bcuz sumthng similar hapnd 2 me

{L!Â£â¬} · 14 years ago

No it not to late

(c)Wind-hoek(c) · 14 years ago

It was ok

Buster · 14 years ago

Ag plz just grow up,stop wit da borin stories,gve us a story wit hot passionate romance,or a horrified horror story

hu$…@be · 14 years ago

Shoooo the story is out of this world.i am enjoying every word of it.i am going to read it again.thanks yoza u rock

Cute+p+ · 14 years ago

Wow...wat a story

(H)C(H) · 14 years ago

The chapters r realy short and leave the story's climax on the air. It would b btr if thr ws mre action... Mre lyk a dscrption of how a gal would rli fyt 4 hr man... Bt the idea bhind it is nyc

Mrs... · 14 years ago

Cmon yoza da story iz kwl bt we thirsty u cn do betr dan dis 2 chaptrz a dae plzzz.

Fab(c)ano:O8o+Millano:P(x) · 14 years ago

Sum 'fwndz' cn b real b*tch$ u knw

<<[100%BÂ¡tc#]>> · 14 years ago

Its sooooo...exciting, cant wait to read further!!!

JÃ¸rÃ°Ã¤Ã±+JÃ¶Ã±Ã¨$ · 14 years ago

Mxm, az if anythng lyk dat wud eva hapn in real lyf... C.rusly imagen cris br0wn cuming 2 j0zi nd asking 4 ur numbr... Jea ryt

$Â…@Ce(F)Â§Â«$ · 14 years ago

Tjeban nw diz iz getn interestin kip em cumin

(*)ANGâ¬Â£IC+VIâ¬W(*) · 14 years ago

Nyc story i lyk da suspense. Bt hw do i gt my storiez publishd on Yoza?

MKHUTHUZI · 14 years ago

I think she shud seek revenge

Lexie+M · 14 years ago

U say its nt realistc? Read the dmn name.u say its entertaing? Read the damn book. Cmn yoza is ths the best u cn do?really!

Rockergirl · 14 years ago

Oh guyz gve mi mre i knw u cn du beta dan dat.u left me hangin n des no ending.

FancyLicious · 14 years ago

Love this story...keeps me wanting more. Oh and the two chapters per day was the smartest thing YOZA has done. Love it

Â«*M$.DIMPLâ¬Z*Â» · 14 years ago

This story is gettn more interestng.. Sad its endng on the tenth

Breezybabe · 14 years ago

B

...Emo+kid... · 14 years ago

The is rily interesting

Crazy+mich · 14 years ago

4 now it livs me wit a big WOW, cnt wait 4 d nxt chptr.

(G)J+&+B+MANAGER+(G) · 14 years ago

Dc st0ry z such a fairytale! I want smthng real, smthng a cn rel8 2, bt its a gud read anyway

(…@NÂ¡LL@(F) · 14 years ago

I cnt w8

(F)cute+angel(F) · 14 years ago

Wagagagagaga tjoo yoza ur readers can be a bit slow sumtyms..guys its 2 chapters a day stop throwing tantrums! @ yoza great story guys im loving it,bt suspens iz kiln me guys i got ulcers cmon ...bt big up guys ur on point...

Gojus · 14 years ago

Daz da story end de helo u cnt leav us hangin lyk dis

Trisher · 14 years ago

Wow.wat a gr8 piece.n crystal is nt a fwnd bt a bck stabbr

Lucious+candy · 14 years ago

I thnk z gtn hot hey bt i wish da chptrz wr lng enuf

True · 14 years ago

Oh my god u jst left me wt a qstn mark.....m askng maslf mny qstnz i wndr wt wl hpn 2 carly

2+hot+2+handle · 14 years ago

Gud bt quiet predicteble..anyhu yoza hs dne an undastandable deal of 2chapters bt dy r hillariously short..it felt lyk readin my star 4rm a newsppr bt ida dan dat its acceptably gud

*toxic.candy* · 14 years ago

Wow,how interestin.i wonda wats gona happen 2 carly !

<$$…@be$$$> · 14 years ago

It had 2 be beta n hv mre chpters bt da jelous frend ws nt a gud frnd

Lady+gaga · 14 years ago

I lyk kpn me in suspense cnt wait 4 da others

BUBBLES · 14 years ago

Awesum so far! She got lockd in. . . .i wna knw wat hapns nxt! Its a great story, big upz 2 da writer

(hâ¬Â¥ · 14 years ago

Gr8 stori. Wow! I wondr watz gon happen 2 carly

:PXhosaliciousss:P · 14 years ago

This is such a cool st0ry. ..cant wait 2 read da next chpterz

!..…@nTa$Â¥+G · 14 years ago

Atleast u've shwn sum progres aftr da disastr n 1 story 4 1 mnth sucks big tym plz do sumthng bt nonetheless big up 2 u guys

(H)ROXY(x)GIRL(*) · 14 years ago

uuuh,creepy!So far,its bn gr8,i lyk mystery mixd wit suspnse,actualy,its ol mixd wit dfrent mvie/story categories,n i lyk dat

:-)i'm+me;-) · 14 years ago

Itz 2 short nd i wana knw wat happnd 2 carly

(*)Baby+g(*) · 14 years ago

We waited a month for a new story.guys dnt do ths to us. Great story by the way

Breezybabe · 14 years ago

So far i gv da story 2 thumbs up.{3S} and i really cnt w8 2 read da nxt chapters!

Vixen · 14 years ago

Its a g8 story so far so gud

Adorable+Lady · 14 years ago

Mpillion 4 june 2011: it great keep it u guyz, cnt w8 2 read mor chpts

Mickey+mouse · 14 years ago

"it sucked" tjo bg tym

(x)cutty+lipz+(x) · 14 years ago

Whr do u guys c dat chptr 3 nd 4 r da same?nd btw yoza u r geting boring!whts wit da 2chaptrs per day neva less 1story a mnth!cme on whts hapning 2 u?

Layla · 14 years ago

So this counts for a story nw, im nt seeing the substance in it, the chapters are too dry and it doesnt make u anticipate what wil happen next. Its too pretictable

Mrs+gareth+Cliff · 14 years ago

YOZA THANK U FINALY SUM REAL ENTERTAINMENT

(*)ANGâ¬Â£IC+VIâ¬W(*) · 14 years ago

Its surprisin hw sum ppl jst ignore notices nd go rantin bwt da story bng short.2 chapterz daily ppl,its nt lyk yoza ddnt notify us,cmon

Blazin'+Bee · 14 years ago

Itz a really gud story 4 us az teenages mwa i cnt wait 4 the nxt chapters

YOUNG+MONEY · 14 years ago

Jst dnt tell me dats really da end cos den its a crappy ending bt furthr den dat i liked da start

BUBBLES · 14 years ago

It seems unreal, i mean what are the chances that a famous guy will suddenly take interest in any girl on the sidewalk

$(*)*Tatie*(*)$ · 14 years ago

Wake up therz still chapters comin!! U guys shud stop stressin so much damn......

#CJ# · 14 years ago

m readn d story...jst wen thngz get interestin zap! t endz! i mean W.T.F!!

Ayobanes · 14 years ago

I dnt want it 2 end,it gt me bitn my nails lol

2+legit+2+quit · 14 years ago

i wldnt mind havin coffe wit a famous prsn ,wow i lyk dis story n hope shez nt dreamin

Luv · 14 years ago

If u guys have read the story 4rm the begining u wouldve seen that it says there would be 2chapters publised per day and the story ends the 10 of june which means there s gna be 2 chapters every day till that date cumin guys read 4rm the top

`DIZM` · 14 years ago

Really?! Like really really? Ur pulling ma chain, flushing my toilet, plucking my feathers...sigh...dnt get me wrong, it has the makings of a great story but 3 short chapters? #deathbyDISAPPOINTMENT

blaq+Heiress · 14 years ago

yoZa..u gUyS ARe kiLliN mhE. .i wAIteD uP tIlL 12o'cLoCk laSnYt soO i cn rEaD thE nEw stoRy..nW i oNlI geTa rEaD 2SHORT chApTeRz a daY...wHy!!? i wAnT moRE:'(

:~(H):P*NÂ¡3(y+|>iEtZ*:}:$(x) · 14 years ago

Whts up

gud$hit · 14 years ago

da storx waz grt jst needs addin.wel done guyz

Luv · 14 years ago

Wow i lyk it i also wish 2 meet da guy of my lyf

Luv · 14 years ago

Yoza dis is sch a turn off wat happnd 2 dat hip n happnin stories u had,dis 1 sucks wit a capital S

Cute+2+b+true · 14 years ago

Maaaan! Read it in unda 2minz cnt wait 4 m0re these st0riez r wat help kp me up at nyt i read basicly evritng xpt clasicz

â¢..â¥~â¥~â¥...TeViNz+LiL+ · 14 years ago

It was awsome but it has to have more at

..Candy~kisses.. · 14 years ago

I think it kind of sweet,i mean meeting a guy u always drool over on tv!its lyk a dream come true.it rocks

SWITBITCH4 · 14 years ago

Cha yoza seniphelelwe ushatini. Ayikho phela lento yestory enisfakile mxm:e:e

Ngeneyintweni · 14 years ago

ITS A GREAT STORY BT IT WOULD B NICE IF THE CHAPTERS WERE ALL THERE FOR DA READIN... THIS 2 CHAPTERS A DAY THING SUCKS!!

BABYdoll · 14 years ago

finish it up please!

Â�…@TT!S0N.(2B)"Â®(H) · 14 years ago

It was so awsome,lekker, the most interesting thing ever8-)

Sweet:-)NIKI · 14 years ago

I 2nd dat q y r chapters 3 n 4 da same n y is it inc0mplete?

$:PInVsIbLe(*)w0mAn:P$ · 14 years ago

Hah YOZA!i cnt bliv u guys.u said a chaptr evryday,n i knw i shld b hapy 4 getng 2 ich day,bt thy'r so nt wrth readng.i ws so :D,bt my mood hs chngd

:-)i'm+me;-) · 14 years ago

Swt..evry gals fantasy..bigup 2 da writer

Divine+diva · 14 years ago

Nt only is it 1 story per mnth bt an incomplete 1 2?wat the hell??!?

(*)SUGA(*) · 14 years ago

Its a lovely story bt it cud hav bin more interestin if it gt mor chapters

Kerileng · 14 years ago

Is that it? *jubbi*

(F)(x)BITCHY+ANGEL(x)(F) · 14 years ago

Ohk plz explain y chapters 3 n 4 is da same!!!!

Snazzy+girl;) · 14 years ago

I dont understand..was she dreaming?

Peach_BabeÂ® · 14 years ago

Da story iz so short n borng

yummy · 14 years ago

If this was da whole thing it sucked! i doesn! i cnt belive u guys r doing this 2 us! ur faithfull readers!! pls help n sort out wateva problem there is!!!!!!!!!!!

Snazzy+girl;) · 14 years ago

i thnk tht they could hve made the story longer nd coz i wnt 2 knw wt hppnd next

Wild1 · 14 years ago

I dont thnk its such a great story it does'nt even have a end

Plus · 14 years ago

Chapter is repeatd

(x)Â¿;)Â§'Hope'Â§;)Â¿(x) · 14 years ago

Yoza u cud've dne betta. I mean, the story was 4 chapters long, thats 2 little. I love reading, nd i've read all the action books, love-story books, all those happily-ever-after books, this 1 jst cnt compare wit da rest of dem.......

babidolphin · 14 years ago

*/W0W W0W W0W.WHT THE* ST0RY I LVE IT ND IT Z S0 ROMANTIC.

J7 · 14 years ago

Mmm vry intresting story i wuld lv 2 hear more.i wondr wts wrng wth hr friend z t jelousi?cnt w8t 4 da nxt chapters.

Connylicious · 14 years ago

Uhm...s0 fAr s0 g00d:?

[8otrauma(f)tized8o] · 14 years ago

C met the guy 0f her dreamz...but that came between ha relati0nship wit ha best fwnd

(F)+CARLY+BABY(F) · 14 years ago

Wheres the rest of the story?

Euphonik · 14 years ago

Nyc story bt wer r da ada chapterz i wz startin 2 enjy it wyl it ended

*1st+class+queen* · 14 years ago

Dis z a nice story, 1stly d tittle is attractiv nd i thnk m gona enjy it a lot. Its gr8 cnt wait 4 d folowin chrptr

Dark+Angel · 14 years ago

Gr8 start cnt w8 4 da nxt chptr

(x)(F)CuTe+AnGel(x);) · 14 years ago

Is ths da whl story or thrz moe comin?

$*|…@+R!|\|GZ*$ · 14 years ago