Benard is a 17-year-old who lives in a in Old Block Stallian in the small RDP houses of the area. He’s just passed to Grade 12 remarkably well and he’s likely to get a bursary and go to varsity, as he’s just got this year left to pass his Matric well. But little does he know that this is going to be his toughest year, a year coupled of misfortunes, betrayal and courage.
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How great it all sound,i like it. Thank you for such a theme,i hope this one moment can change so many people's lives.
Vhuthu zees iz nt ay0bA man plz hury up zees iz torchure...by zee wae we adore zee buk zaats vy we urge u 2 hry up
Y xuld we w8 4 d nxt chptr so lng?ds stry is gr8 bt if u myk us w8 lyk dst we gna lose intrst crusly!
Dis iz 1 of ma favr stories' eva publishd on fundza I tyk ma hat off 4 da authr, @ sch a young age bt his a gr8 story tellr his surely goin far in life. Cnt w8 2 fnd out wat hpnz next since derz neva a dull moment.
HaiBo c'mOn u guyZ givE the guY a brEaK, the sToRy iz reALly COol so it'll take time. I'll even reAd it over from the begGining everytime a new chapter is publisheD. . .thats how much of a good story it is. If u guyz dont wanNa read it keep your stUck up comments to yourSelves and dont read it! Ai BIG UP to a young and insPiratioNal auThor:)
Hey guys... glad you're so impatient to find out what happens next. Chapter 7 is there now - so the waiting for the next chapter is over! Remember though that good writing takes time to create and perfect. It is a process, so please be patient!
Well nna i quit..im no longer interested dude,im tired of waiting its like we have to beg you for more chapters..um thats unprofessional dude...im done with this story from now on im gona stick to stories that are delivered on TIME:......unlike this one
Hw lng's dis wrk gonn' b in progress,cum i brrw u sum of ma scripts man....u lettn yo province down....jst quit
Hai dudE u g0nna l0ze fans thIs wae, itZ eitha uw puBliSh the st0ri wen itz awl d0ne or u write chApteRz nD publiSh them faster c0z the waiting is boring us and sum of us hardly stilL reMemBa the stoRyline and charaCterz coz we've beEn waiting since 4eva:[
m inspired,ths is such a great story...so whrz chaptr 6 ?,we've bin waitin 4 so lng ,or is dat the end...
Just starteD reading the boOk and im realy liking it hey. I knOw how the auThor fEels, im also in gradE 11 so therez alot of streSs in examz. BiG up to the auThor and i reAlLy hope i doNt have to wait toO loNg 4 the next chapter. Whens it coMing owt?
NO NO NO NO NO!! THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE... WE ARE WAITING SO LONG FOR CHAPTER 5... The story is great and everything but why spoil it.. We will have to read it from the begining to keep track once the next chapter is published
Wow it hard whn thngz a fre coz ppl jst abuse de supplyer. So guyz let us appritiate da gryt wrk 4rm da guy n try 2 nt rush coz rushing wil disrupt our funny
Hi there - Vhuthu's getting the chapters out as quickly as he can... but he's writing exams right now. Glad to know that you like it and want more though!!
Why don't you publish the whole story once because it seems like when you publish chapter takes you a life time. Hw lng does it take to publish you one chapter
Wow! Wow! I looove it x10 big ups 2 Vhuthu! Yo man 4rm nw
0n am ur bigGEST fan!!:D ../BRING THOSE CHAPTER CUMIN IN /..I LVE THS ST0RY 2 DA UNKNW LEVEL OF LOVENESS...
Dnt rush da chaptr u guys 4 t 2 b nyc t nidz 2b well written nd wrtn with passion dnt rush da guy,batong ninjan kant,js appreciate a gud chaptr wen ts thr nways ts cuming alng vry wel ts nyc tanx Vhuthu big up boy
Hi guys... the next chapter is on its way! Vhuthu is sending them through as quickly as he can given his school work and commitments. And, we should have the next one out tomorrow. So, hang in there - it is coming soon. And, it's great to know you're enjoying his story!
Hai i dnt realy get hw it works to jst get a decent chaptr,lyk realy nw afta hw lng do u put a chaptr
Why aint u publishing evryday i dnt get it, why u take dayz 2 put each chapter its lyk u writing it nw or wat y make us wait ths lng 4 anada chapter?
Wen r u releasin da nxt chapter?its bin 3 days nw.its a vry nyc story cnt wait 2 read da nxt chapter
Find myself sympathizing with the hero and hoping things turn out better for him. It's such a good example how sometimes things just go wrong for no reason at all.
Keep writing and never mind typo's other see. Tell them to write something themselves instead of sitting commenting as onlookers and critics.
Much better to create than to criticse Ha ha!