Bathong where's the story!!!@ ???????????????????????????????
Bridget ·
9 years ago
No story, AGAIN. :o(
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++. ·
9 years ago
Wake up ppl, this's real life you're reading.
This is the kind of stories we need to spread awareness.
It's an amazing story & I completly got it.
I'm happy for him that he found someone who loves him and who he can share his feeling with.
Best story on yoza ever.
~BLOOD~ ·
12 years ago
(H)
Romieo+(F) ·
13 years ago
Lovely
Slate ·
13 years ago
School in not borin,its jct dat u dnt knw y u r in school.read ur bookc n pray u will get a point.
Luhle ·
13 years ago
for my syd i ddnt find it interesting bt anyway it was nt dat bad
(H)GLAMOUROUS+BARBIE(H) ·
13 years ago
This story is boring,it does'nt make sense to me
2Hot2Delete ·
13 years ago
Jst wna say tht, i hv a prob wth many o4 tha stries here! Thy dnt open so hw is it pssbl 4 me 2 read em??:(
Kaidy ·
14 years ago
I cn actualy relate 2 it lyf z a drag n physical pain z beta thn emotional pain.i cut maslf 2 2get awei 4rm lyfz reality
Mischivious+angel ·
14 years ago
I loved it so much.im even thinking of cutting myself!.(G)Jj
Sweet:-)NIKI ·
14 years ago
Masochism is not boring! Just because u live a happy life doesnt mean we all do. I know that sometimes physical pain feels better than emotional. I bet all of u know of someone who has tried or succeeded in killing themselves. This story tells the truth of what happens in real life
*...honeyBee...* ·
14 years ago
Was interesting bt confusing at da same tym, still dnt gt da last part, adawise í njoyed it even da way it was structured... was a thriller!!
McQueen ·
14 years ago
Make beta stowis man,its borin
(*)(x)MiSs+PiNk+MiNaJ+b(x)(*) ·
14 years ago
Seriously dis is borin. It sucks.
Indenial+girl ·
14 years ago
Dis story ws awsm i need more lyk dis
ΦMΣΠ·
14 years ago
Wenz da next insert cumin?
ecliptic+rebel ·
14 years ago
w0w diZ iz v3wI boRiNg lYk H0w couLd a P3rSoN hAt3 lYf S0 muCh!!.. Path3tic anD RaTha DULL!
(x)Toxic+Candy(x) ·
14 years ago
It born
¤Qteeli¤ ·
14 years ago
:-)its a gud story,it jst nid a focusd mind 2 undastnd dat lyf cn f*** u dat it dasnt always hav happy endings
:-)Butterfly ·
14 years ago
Wow guys u realy dnt read de whole stry i realy love de way de writer writes total rubbish
Mr+porpula ·
14 years ago
This story really suckz. .try something. .more interesting and good
<…@ncy(F)D3lîcîöus(*)K>> ·
14 years ago
Nt conforming 2 standards of thots, speech en actions while at oDD w/t the majority it portrayed...UNUSUAL to steady minds! It's of no wonder most of yu found it BORING, url minds r NUMD, url wnt fantasy crap, well wlcme 2 this sucky vortex called LIFE!!! Truth is that which is true, whether u know it or not, whether u like it or not...Story was nothing short of VUKKN GR8[(_o)]
:eking_koek-a-moer:e ·
14 years ago
Nt conforming 2 standards of thots, speech en actions while at oDD w/t the majority it portrayed...UNUSUAL to steady minds! It's of no wonder most of yu found it BORING, url minds r NUMD, url wnt fantasy crap, well wlcme 2 this sucky vortex called LIFE!!! Truth is that which is true, whether u know it or not, whether u like it or not...Story was nothing short of VUKKN GR8[(_o)]
:eking_koek-a-moer:e ·
14 years ago
Waz at da beginng awaz lyk neh maan wat da hel iz diz bt i kept on readin borin as itiz bt dn as i kept goin on i startd findin da story mre intrsting...pipz read wit mre andastandin en big upz 2 da author 4 such wandaz
Mimzo ·
14 years ago
U no although pain killer has a kinda happy ending. Masachism is a very real issue nd shud b addressed in society 2day. I myself used 2 cut myself nd iv realised that 2 cut isnt the answer
fluffy!! ·
14 years ago
Ag yuch wat a borin story y dd u evn write it wer u jus bord o u wernt thnkn straght if u wana hav a novel jus quit itz nt worth is lyk a borin thng itz so borin n it sucks lol dnt gv up fanie
"lady+dërulo" ·
14 years ago
Yo!it wz so nyc,i relly lyk it, keep wrytng nd plz jst try 2 myk ur chapters long.i support.
AmaHustler++++ ·
14 years ago
FrEaKy!
...«mIsS~cLaIrE~bAyPe»... ·
14 years ago
GUYZ DAT STORI WAS REALI SIK NS SADISTIC..OH ND DISTURBIN!!
<<…@beEhA+¤>> ·
14 years ago
It was boring and what kind of a msg is it sending:-(
Ice+princess ·
14 years ago
Guyz it waz boring........!!!!!!!
Mugabe ·
14 years ago
Well, i didn't like this story at all. It felt like i was reading a very long poem... I think if it could be more developed then it could hold much more substance other than just blood. I didn't like the ending either. This story is definately postmodern. Everyone knows at least someone like these two characters and i'd like to understand why they'd do that..
$=THE~QUEEN~PIN=$ ·
14 years ago
The story is supposed to inspire teens but what kind of message does it carry? That we should cut ourselves up cause no one understands us? Its not exactly a good morale booster. These stories should help us in givind advice on how to get through hard times. And the chapters are too short!
Cynthia ·
14 years ago
It boring and has wack pictures
*$NICKLASS$* ·
14 years ago
The story ws awesum cz i cn relate 2 it..its a reminda dat we teenz r veri sensitiv nd sumtymz we so lost,we turn 2 da wrng thngs...wel lovd it nd i want m0re..peace. nd TO GOD B THE GLORY..
ecliptic+rebel ·
14 years ago
Gud story. The way i andastnd da story dat its bout a boy wuz trouble n haz alot of anger.he haz no slf confidance n haz lost interest in skul. The graffiti carvings in the skul desk reminds hm of da cuts on hs arms. The boy has emotional pain n 4 hm 2 4get bout it he hurts hmslf physicaly n dats the painkiller. The grl wants 2 hlp hm n so she cuts hrslf 2 show hm far shez willing 2 go 2 hlp him. I lved the story guys concerntrate whn u read the story ;-)
2~Sweet(x) ·
14 years ago
This is such crap honestly.... Sorry if i offend anybody but it was really not cool
...BALLAS.... ·
14 years ago
Yall r watchng 2 much soapies n u fantasize a lot,u wnt happy endings always...get a lyf n start reading real stuff
Royal+highness ·
14 years ago
Word power,nw this is it,tired of all the soapy riting...read this a lot of tyms n i am hooked like a junkie
Royal+highness ·
14 years ago
gud story made me realise dat der is ppl like dis around us... da end was little confusing y did it end der mr. author? ;-)
*rOsEbUd* ·
14 years ago
I love the story..plz rite m0re darkside stories its cool dude
(f)T+(H)+O+(x)+X+(H)+I(x)+C(f) ·
14 years ago
This is the most original & thought provoking story. I totally loved it.
Tse ·
14 years ago
M nt gna cmmnt man i jst wna say its awesum,kp it up sir.
C+A ·
14 years ago
therz no wordz 4 it bt dat it SUCKZ SUCKZ SUCKZ ND TERREBLY SUCKZ¥
$D.MONEY$ ·
14 years ago
Its me again,been readin ur comments n wat i realized ir dat mst of the ppl who say the story suck didn't evn read half of the story n r complain bwt the short chapterz. If u read correctly thz nuthn sayn read chapter 1, its jst writen read 1, to show that those r scenes so they wnt b as lng az chaptz8o. I lv u yoza! Keep on bringin da gwd stuff n stil big ups 2 the story.:)
(c)Mis+sexy+by+nature(c) ·
14 years ago
Bloody hell. That was too awsme for words. Wow. Wow. Beautiful i tel u
<*+Ozil's+#1+Fan+*> ·
14 years ago
Ha HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA..........!!!!! What's ths....? Is it really a story or something else...? Ooohh...! Ths one's so boring...! I gv ths an award of being *THE WORLD'S BORING STORY...!*CUM UP WITH SUMTHIN MORE INTERESTIN PLZ. PUL UP UR SOCKS WEL DONEU
...mhm... ·
14 years ago
The few sentences per chapter are turning off, i couldnt even read to chapter 10
Lv-ls ·
14 years ago
Read the story as a graphic novel (or comic strip). It is published as pages in a book, not as chapters - that is why it is so short.
For complete views of the pics, visit the Painkiller (or Pynstiller) groups on Facebook. Read about other people who have a problem with cutting and how they faced it.
painkiller ·
14 years ago
I love stories that are unpredictable and this story is all of that and so much more.. Wow, it was unbelievable, rather strange bt never the less awesome.. looking forward to more stories that will get me so excited.
Ms+independent ·
14 years ago
stry r0cks
StUbBoRn+GiRl ·
14 years ago
Not my kind of a story, vry diffrnt bt excellent. Th end ws th wonderful chapter of al! I am deffntly voting u th best authr, coz u manage 2 twst up a few strngz nd turn it 2 sumthn gud. U nailed it man!
LuVzz ·
14 years ago
WOW...I WAZ TOTALLI IN THT STORY...I waz jst focuseD! Da end waz...I dnt knw. I thought it waz goin 2 b a happy ending or sumthn dramatic..Kwl Story!
MISS+AMAZING ·
14 years ago
i like the style of the story,it was refreshing to see something vey different
Emmy ·
14 years ago
Well that was...different:?
((JuLiA...*)) ·
14 years ago
Crazy dope story... The pictures did most of the story line. Wonder who wrote it?... N will we be hearin from him again?:?
Pandora ·
14 years ago
Yoh......nw dat is wat i cal EXCELLENCE (*)(*)(*)(*)(*) 5 Gold stars(G)
<> ·
14 years ago
After reading d story nd d "about the author", I can definatly c y he has won so many prizes 4 his books! Fantastic story, one of d best I'v read so far. It seemed long, bt is very short, yet it contained so much in it. WOW!
Loza ·
14 years ago
I was so tauched by this story u rock joo jst do ur thng
Zeey ·
14 years ago
Wow wat a short story at the begining of it i thought it was boring bt the end it rocked bt why stop there cant u write another series of it starting from da end....i want to knw wat happens next :D
$«¤lil+miss+adorable¤»$ ·
14 years ago
Ai sowi mr.author, u dDnt nail it. Wt wr u tnkn mara?
ãbÃ! ·
14 years ago
Well, just reading one sentence makes one wana move to the next. Awesome story line & the images are extremely cool... Keep up e good work!!!
Royal+chick ·
14 years ago
Thz stry sucks...i cnt say more cz it drained al th energy tht i had....al tht i cn say z..boring ,boring and boring
Poizon+kez ·
14 years ago
Different.
Would like 2 no wat inspired it mr.author?
Siete ·
14 years ago
Joh dis story sucked...
*rOsEbUd* ·
14 years ago
okay so it wasnt bad although it was quite short, we kinda got used to longer stories. anywho its touching how the authour depictd the boy and hs ways to deal with his life, its like he doesnt wana die maybe for hs mom or some but the thought of it doing it eases hs mind, although wouldve loved to know how his life would change with a gf who gets hm
Mrs+gareth+Cliff ·
14 years ago
the begining of this story was my life in school not "fitting in" with the "normal" crew.so i kind of gret this guy and how he feels.
This story is happening everyday this story is teenage sucide.
it was a good story and it was different bcoz it give details abt the mind,cuts,how it happens.
like i said this story is ok to read its just too graphic
Aamena ·
14 years ago
Mxm,url guyz who r criticizn dnt undrstand the story, ths z lyk a poem in sum wae so if had read correctly u'd undrstand. I stil say big ups 2 it.
(c)Mis+sexy+by+nature(c) ·
14 years ago
Nw dat ws a damn good, if i may say so meself. Wat capturd was da way it tld it was more like a poem then a story (narretic poem) n dat is y i enjoyd. Agn da author is nt afrd 2 liv unda hr own face. UnLike da people wh judge ths story, bcos if u urself by da amount of praises u gt frm ur peer, thn satisfactoin wud b a dat wud nt exist in ur vocabulary.
Malcom+W ·
14 years ago
D støry waz døpe(*) bt i mu$t cømment abt ts ending:o(:o( nø ts nt ayøba. . .
(x)$8-)Ã+mÃ+ÃÃ+MÃrÃ8-)$( ·
14 years ago
Cnt blv yoza publishd ths story:|.its scary..wat r we suppose 2 learn in it?hay man plz khanibhale ngezitory ezisengqonden ezimnand hay ezi peanuts..
Gorgeous+grl ·
14 years ago
Damn good
Malcom+W ·
14 years ago
Ppl hu actualy thnk da st0ry is gud,ar t0taly blind nd stpd,dis was da best borin st0ry iv eva heard in mi intire lyk,4rm ur gal G,
Da+dragon+lady ·
14 years ago
Hai hai hai! Cum 0n gve us a brk da st0ri line is gr8 bt da chapterz thy 2 short thy mke n0 sense at all if da author wrkd 0n it wel it wuld hav been gr8 bt n0 it suckd... Sori
:…@iler+Tr@sh:P ·
14 years ago
HEY HEY HEY...WENA! KENG SE? LYK REALY NW WHAAT IS THIS COZ ACCORDING 2 ME ITS NT A STORY.
Dr+black+(H) ·
14 years ago
Itz b0rin,disgustn,bad,h0rrbl,terryfn,disastrous,it makez me sick yuck,da auth0r hs n0 taste,lyk hez in grade 3 y0h:-x m u embrassn me hle
Da+dragon+lady ·
14 years ago
Amazing story ,totaly beautiful captured me itz a pity that otha ppl cnt crawl owt frm their shells 2 read it they so ignorant alota ppl fl lyk ths and n0bdy does ntn abt it :(cz u al 2 afraid dnt judge otha itz coza ur judgment ppl bcum depro thnk b4 u speak and stop judging try hlpng.thumbs up 4 ths 0ne
Angel ·
14 years ago
The chapters are too short. I think the story is boring and not interesting..RATED 2/10 sori it didnt cut it 4 me
MJERERE ·
14 years ago
*tjo wat a kwl storie hai t rockd j.d ppl besmnandi ..cld hve used a betr ending thou mara t stl rockd []impresd[] big up 2 authr ..u knw ur stuff*
(x)Queen+of(F)da+ringz(x) ·
14 years ago
Wat a boring story,hw dd dis kind of a story land here in yoza.hai man pls ditori tseo di publishiwago mo yoza e be tsa ba2 ba go ba le experience eix:o(
Hopy ·
14 years ago
Da Stori S.U.C.K.S!
Lady(H)t33 ·
14 years ago
Ths was quite an amazin story,very touchn i lvd it although it endz confuzn>in tearz< its touchn.:'(
(c)Mis+sexy+by+nature(c) ·
14 years ago
Hw d u get 2 read ths..cz it sounds quite interestng