I stared at the fresh cut, the crusty scabs.
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The st0ry was just a piece 0v me,DARK!Bt the 0nly pRblm is tht it sh0wcases a lie.I wl always b dark,my anger is tha 0nly thnG i cn dpnd 0n.nyc st0ry
Ths story was gud i knw the thng of cutng i do it to gt rid of pain the gv me at hme kep it up guys i wld lyk mre story ly ths
De story itz 2complicated nd itznt str8 2de point nd hv short chapterz,nxt tym mke de chapter lng de is no vibe in dis story i almst felt aslp whn busy readin it nd it tym m lng tym 2finsh it cz in sum chapterz u wl jst find dotz......
It realy means sumthng nd it shws sumthngs in lyf general nd i thnk dat it shuld be more realistic.keep it up
Omg.dis story iz so satanism i mean skul shuldnt be boring alny stupid ppl think so i cnt rl8 2 dis story it devilish
that was good...it dfferent frm othr strys tht hv read bt honestly t z good coz tx nt evn boring...m intrstd in readn more stories lyk ths 1
I cn rela8t wit da cutn bt bt da skul n (H) no coz i maclf m addctd in2 cutn maclf t da mst peaceful thng eva n hi m nt weird
Diz story is cruz nd nt scary, bt i rly dnt c a nid 4 havin it pblshd, if it wre a buk, i swr i'd neva buy it.
Ths story or poem remind me of the heta ad on tv! lol weird bt its okay... glad he found love instead of the grim reeper a.k.a DEATH
What the hell! This is totally some kind of poem and besides, i think it's for kids. Aowa, get rid of it Hle!
Chapters are too short,but the story is nice.Plus i love the pictures.Good use of vocabulary as its easy to understand.Wow this is stupendous!I love it and i cant wait for the next sequel.Do make your chapters longer though.Peace!
I cant say if its a poem or a story. But i think if you realy read it with a open mind it u can analize it like a poem, u fit all the puzle piecer together and see the true meaning of something like this story like you can find love in the weirdest places and u never realy alone if you search long enough there will always be some1 for u. Well the story was different but still good. Thanks yoza for trying something diferent and ignoring the critics