Love life

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Love life

Love is not fair
Love has not been fair
Love has not been enough
Love is unpredictable

Love, love, love

Love is not fair
People hurt each other
People are killing for love
People keep loving each but
that love is not good enough
And is not fair enough

Love, love, love is not fair

Love is feeling that you feel
Love is not fair
Because other people
do not deserve this love
Others do not care about love
Love, love, love

11 Responses

Critics will always be there. I loved it , it's very beautiful, focus on the positive and keep going ❤️!

Bathabile Khuzwayo · 2 years ago

I guess I expected more on this poem and to be more interesting

IRISH · 5 years ago

Good work

Teekaysa · 5 years ago

I'm sorry I didn't like it. It's just too busy I must say.

Luyahr43 · 5 years ago

This is so amazing

Zimaseka · 5 years ago

Superb

Zimaseka · 5 years ago

love love LOVE ••

keitu93 · 5 years ago

Amazing poem

scelosethu · 5 years ago

How does love end easily more specifically in high school students

Jonesmudenda · 5 years ago

What a lovely poem🤗😍

Passionate · 5 years ago

Wow this is amazing,I love IT ❤️

Qhama-ni · 5 years ago