Like life, you’re my everyday need.
From breakfast, lunch to dinner,
Whatever the weather,
I am always yours.
Evolved to fit creation,
Quality in every sense,
Leading generations now and then and designed to conquer.
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Dah speaker compare a life wth brakfast,lunch to dinner .whn mean life it too complicated.we dnt need someone to gve us direction while we knw we need to take dah right
I am sorry to say this but criticism can also teach us. I believe it would have been pleasant if the title was included in the poem it self I see you ending with an adjective and again the sentence started verb following by an adjective. Then again if its all you had to say about love then its as good as written than just kept secret :)