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Mbali Nyabane
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Get well soon,and continue writing us amazing stories Mbali,remember that we love you a lot and you're our favorite author ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
The previous month and this month have been horrible to me, I have been in and out of hospital, the doctors can't find what's wrong with me but they are doing some tests, while that waa going on I have neglected my writing because I had to choose one thing to focus on and I chose to give my full focus to my health and stress about that the journeyyo recovery it hasn't been easy but I am picking up where I left off, I'll be continuing with A daughter of a kidnapper on the other news I want to publish I'm in love with my kidnapper, but the name will completely change, I am half way through to editing it, I wanted to keep this to myself but I thought that I should share the news with ny Fundza family first, the audiobook is on pause for now as I am still in the process of publishing a whole book!!! The book will be R140 excluding courier charges but once it is ready 2 or 3 of my readers will get the book for free, it will be my way to thank you for your support and love, that is all for now and thank you for the wonderful messages, I truly appreciate them๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
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๐๐ญ'๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ฆ๐๐๐ซ ๐ง๐๐ฑ๐ญ ๐ฆ๐จ๐ง๐ญ๐ก,๐๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐ข๐ซ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐จ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ฆ๐๐๐ซ.๐ ๐๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐จ๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐๐ข๐๐ง๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ซ 2 ๐ฉ๐ฅ๐ณ
@Nqobile Khuzwayo, No it's not Mbali said it will be published next month.
When are you gonna start to make the audiobooks
Is part 2 of"A daughter of a kidnapper " published?
@Mbali Nyabane, แดสษชs ษชs แดส ษชแด
แดแด าแดส าสษชแดษดแด
s แดกษชแดส สแดษดแดาษชแดs 2
So......Dineo and Menzi are still like in love,they are happy.Okay but then There come a time when Menzi goes "Dineo since the first time I saw you in the club my heart skipped a beat,I have never seen such a calm,beautiful and humbled lady like you. You made me fall in love with you without even trying,even though I did that too.This thing started as something of us having fun but now you made me fall in love even more,So Dineo( her surname) Will you make me the happiest man by becoming MRS (Menzi's surname).
or sum like that
She says YES they get married, after some months of marriage in ther HONEYMOON Dineo get Pregnant obvious.But she has a miscarriage (sad),they are devastated but they are with each other.She gets Pregnant again with a boy the boy is born,then yah khona lapho I will think of something else kxx.
They live in a big house kinda rich
"I'm in love with my kidnapper" for the audio book plzโคโคโค๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐
Now I have read all your work. I must say you are a wonderful writer. And you are true to your word. I trust you will deliver part 2 of Daughter of a kidnapper. Just like all your other stories that needed part 2... you truly are gifted๐ซก๐ซก๐ซก๐ซก๐ซก.
Now husband will not be on my case about reading all the time. Cishe wangiqedela umendo weMbaliโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ
Is part two of"A daughters of a kidnapper"released
Wow Mbali I love your stories ๐๐ธ๐๐ธ๐๐๐๐ซ ๐ซ โค๏ธ๐๐๐ธ๐๐ธ๐ซ ๐๐โฅ๏ธ๐๐ฅนโฅ๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐ซ ๐ซ โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐWhen are you gonna write the another part of"A daughter of a kidnapper"Love you ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐโฅ๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐ฅฐYou are the best๐ฅฐ๐๐๐๐โค๏ธ๐๐๐Keep shining you are God given ๐ฅนโค๏ธ๐๐๐ฅฐ๐๐๐โฅ๏ธ๐๐ฅน๐โค๏ธ๐๐ฅฐ๐ฅน๐ฅน๐ฅน
@Aldrina Mayer Thank you so muchโฅ๏ธ๐๐ฝ
Secret of the night ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐prt 2,3,4,5 pls
Mbali..... You are one talented lady....i read 1 of your books last week and u have had me in a choke hold ever since.... Wow... Words can't describe how much I love your work... Dont let writer's block get u down dear... U r good at what you do... Damn...You envoke really emotions and realizations through your work... Your writing is relatable in so many ways... May the ink in your pens never run dry.. Love you lots๐
Aww thank you Floโฅ๏ธ Secrets of the night was a piece I did with Fundza when I was in the 2023 fellowship and I haven't thought about it that much, but the rest that you have mentioned I can look into them, but next month I'll be releasing A daughter of a kidnapper abd we'll see after that what should come next, @Nqobile, that is definitely on my list, I'm not yet done with Bavumile
Mbalzz you can also write The secrets of the nights part 2 I just want to know what happened to they friendship will they reunit or it is just the end of it , a daughter of kindapper part two , Timeless bones chapter and friends with benefits part 2โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธmbalzzz you are amazing you are gifted .I have all of your books I mean I started reading your books when I was 13 doing grade seven I mean that's three years back .I almost readed all of your books the is still one book which I can't bring myself to read Tender love it got my heart felling into peaces when I was reading the warning but anyway let's leave that I love your work and also I love you . keep doing that nice work you are such a nice author โค๏ธ๐ฏ๐ฏ
Part 2 for"I fell inlove with a convict" please and ASAP
I see that some of you want Friends with benefit 2, I honestly thought that I was done with it, what would part 2 bring, if you have some suggestions feel free to sprung them on me
Next month I'll be releasing A daughter of a kidnapper, I'm still busy with it since my writer's block is gone now
Yeah,when will you publish part two of "A daughter of a kidnapper " I am now starting to get impatient
@mbali Nyabane I am patiently waiting for A daughter of a kinapper part two when will you publish it โค๏ธ
@Mbali Nyabane -please start with "I'm in love with my kidnapper" if you were to make an audiobook. Pretty please ๐ฅบ with a cherry on top๐๐โค๏ธ
Guyz is Fundza only on Moya app or what coz mina I'm using Moya app
@Mbali Nyabane..... I was like Okay khuphuka MELOKUHLE when I was reading I'm in love with my kidnapper and I was so happy the my name was There in the story.I was bragging to my friends who I said to them they must read your stories.
That My name is famous
@ Snikeziwe Gumede .....Can I ask how old are you mina I'm 11 this year
Mbali please neh I beg please come back and write another part of Friends with benefits please and A Daughter of a kidnapper or start with A Daughter of a kidnapper.And never stop writing I don't know what
FUNDZA would be like without you ๐๐Love you to the moon and back ๐โฅ๐
@Mbali Nyabane ....Friends with benefits and next will be I'm in love with my kidnapper
Friends with benefits
@Mbali Nyabane - "In love with my kidnaper"
@Mbali Nyambane.. Friends with benefits but they're all great eyy.โค๏ธโ
Just hypothetically speaking, if I were to make an audiobook, which one of my books would you like me to start with, obviously it will be rewritten with no errors and more words will be added in the process, sooo which one would you like as an audiobook?๐คญ
I stay in Tembisa, like how most of my stories set place, Tembisa is in Gauteng, it is in the East of Johannesburg, why do you ask?
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh woooow that's it thanks mbalz ๐บ๐บ๐๐๐Mbali I have question where do you live?
A writers block isvwhen you can't think of anything to write about, or you can have the vision of the story in your mind but failing to write the story
Helpโ ๏ธ what's a writer's block and what happens when you experience it
Woooooooow I missed this ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The matter have been resolved, thankfullyโฅ๏ธ๐
Still same prob๐ฅบ๐ถ๐โน๏ธ
Sikhosana mbalenhle No it's not your phone, I'll send an email to Fundza but in the mean time you can search my name or any of the story you want to read
Sikhosana mbalenhle me too but still mbali said it's no problemo
Mbali ur stories are not here I don't know wants happening or is it my phone
Mbali ur stories are not here I don't know wants happening or is it my phon
Hey mbali yeah you're right at first I wrote for the people but eventually I did write for my self and people started enjoying my stories and if maybe I continue I might get good at it right now I'm working on a story called kill or Die thank you mbalz I love u so much yet mbali your stories keep me awake until 1am ngcele ubthongo bam mbali , yeah I got a bit irritated are they that stupid they should read the comments section be4 writing down
Sinikeziwe Gumede ๐ I learnt not to mind the negative comments, as long as I told them that I made a mistake and that I was busy with I'm in love with my kidnapper while writing Friends with benefits then I don't know, it was an honest mistake Menzi and Melusi are a bit similar... People should learn that mistakes happen๐คฆ๐ฝโโ๏ธ
Nikky R your first mistake was that you write for people, write for you, write what you like and what you would like to read, if you love what you wrote then people will naturally love reading your stories
Mbali it's Sinikeziwe Gumede ( snike) I'm so confused I like to write stories when I write I get this electric current that tickles when my story has been published but I'm always scared that people will say my stories are rubbish I don't know whether to give up writing or not writing is my passion but people maybe don't pay attention to my stories I work hard day and night I'm confused should I give up or not ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Hayi bayacika laba Ku chapter 21 at friends with benefits are they so stupid ababuyele Ka grade 4 shame ai you made a small mistake ai they are now confused xem ai shame mbali you're so great but that doesn't mean you don't make mistakes also xem they write like they are stupid ๐ค๐
I'm surprised too, but when you search my name they'll still show
Mbali I have a huge prob I can't see all your stories in this page๐ญ๐ญ
Keep up the good work mbhaliโค๏ธ
MBALI I'M IN LOVE WITH MY KIDNAPPER IS AWESOME I BOW TO YOU YOU ARE AMAZING! ๐ And yeah just waiting for the years to pass so I could fulfill my dream imagine earning 73k each month ๐
@Sinikeziwe Gumede I did hear about him, but I don't know the depth of Shembe, I just know the basics
@Melokuhle Nhleko Your name caught my attention, you made me think of Melusi and Melokuhle๐ and thank you for the idea, ideas are always welcomedโฅ๏ธ๐
๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฌ๐ ๐ ๐ก๐๐ฏ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ค๐๐๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐จ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐๐ฆ๐ .๐๐จ๐ง'๐ญ ๐ ๐ข๐ฏ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐๐.
๐๐ฒ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐จ๐ ๐๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐๐ซ ๐จ๐ ๐ ๐ค๐ข๐๐ง๐๐ฉ๐ฉ๐๐ซ
-๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐จ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ค๐ฎ๐ค๐ก๐๐ง๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ซ๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฌ๐๐๐ซ๐๐ญ
-๐๐ก๐๐ง ๐๐๐ค๐ฎ๐ค๐ก๐๐ง๐ฒ๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ข๐ญ๐ฌ ๐ฌ๐ก๐ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐๐ฅ๐ฐ๐๐ฒ๐ฌ ๐จ๐ง ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ฉ๐ก๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐๐ฑ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐จ.
-๐๐ก๐๐ง ๐๐๐ค๐ฎ๐ค๐ก๐๐ง๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ฌ๐ค๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ "๐๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ซ๐๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐๐ฒ๐ ๐ฎ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฒ ๐๐๐ฅ๐ฅ ๐ข๐ง ๐ฅ๐จ๐ฏ๐ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐๐ฆ ๐๐ฌ๐ค๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐๐ซ๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ก๐จ๐ฐ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐๐๐ฅ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ฐ๐ก๐๐ญ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐๐จ?".
-๐๐ก๐๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐๐ข๐ซ ๐ซ๐๐ฅ๐๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ๐ก๐ข๐ฉ ๐๐๐๐จ๐ฆ๐๐ฌ ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ข๐.
- ๐๐๐ค๐ฎ๐ค๐ก๐๐ง๐ฒ๐ ๐๐ซ๐๐๐ค๐ฌ ๐ก๐๐ซ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ซ๐ ๐ข๐ง๐ข๐ญ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐๐ญ๐ก๐๐ฆ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐จ.
๐๐ฆ ๐ฌ๐จ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ซ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐ซ๐ข๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐ข๐๐๐ ๐ก๐๐ซ๐ ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ.๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ก๐๐ฅ๐ฉ๐ฌโบ๏ธ
Yeah and I've also dreamed about making my dreams come and also be a part time writer and maybe own a flat or hotel but lots of the doctor I want to be is a neurosurgeon it earn 73k every month like wow I attend at Ka Shembe church in Jerusalem or Emzokhanyayo base nhlanhleni and I did offer 6 Rand to God and it's said that if you believe in Shembe then whatever you wanted will come true so I asked something I also want my dreams come true you know Shembe miracles right?
Sinikeziwe Gumede A good thing is that dreams can be achieved, if you are dedicated enough... I mean I'm trying to push my dream of being a professional writer/Author, it's hard but I won't give up
I'm sorry but I don't use FB it FORBIDDEN at home ๐ but you do remind me of my sister she's in UJ it's too far from home but I'll keep talking to you here when your not busy I love your stories I'm reading your other stories that I don't know I know it hard but hang in there I wish I was fulfilling my dream of being a doctor in LA or California and study in the university of Havana๐๐ in Cuba
@Andโฆ@gmai... Thank you so much๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝโฅ๏ธ
@Nikky R I am still here, trying to think of stories I'll be writing going forward, I don't give out with my number but you can search me on Facebook, Mbali Nyabane - Author from there on its easier to find my personal page and I am in varsity, just hang in there before you know it you'll be done with school, but if it were up to me I would rather turn back the clock and be back in school, life was easier then
Mbali I love amabali akho, nam ngk ndizowafunda and repeat others coz I can't get enough โค๏ธโฅ๏ธ
Hey mbali I wonder where you are I've been looking for you I looked under my bed and under the table just jk I hope you are not gone anyway I'll text you on Friday or Saturday anyway it's Sinikeziwe Gumede I just changed my name on the comment section I don't have WhatsApp messenger so I rather sometimes chat with people who I might know or don't know but I'll just say I have a friend request for you will you be my first author friend if your full name is mbalenhle then I'll like to call you Engle if you don't like being friends with kids or strangers it fine I won't judge love you and your books mbali best author don't worry I'm a girl ๐ I'm quite embarrassed to say this I just know you might say no but hey chances are still on ๐๐๐
Hi mbali are you still in fundza I hope you didn't vanish I even looked under the table and the bed I didn't find u just jk I hope you are still here oh and Sinikeziwe Gumede I just changed my name on the comments I'll see text you on Saturday or Friday school is just a sick joke if it were up to me whoever named school would make him a vetkoek any which grade are u in and I don't have WhatsApp messenger I just text on fundza but I do have a friend request for you so do you agree to be my friend เฒฅโฟเฒฅ(ยด . .ฬซ . `)
I wanna step away from romance a little and do a little thriller, you'll get to hear the villain's side, there's always two sides of the story right? You have to keep in mind that there was something that made the Villain to become heartless and unforgiving. I don't want you guys to be surprised when you read the horror part of my stories, I had written a story 4 months ago and it was in the villain's point of view and why she did what she did, and someone commented that I am hurt and in need of a therapist, that made me realise that many people don't read books, they don't realise that there are all sorts of genres out there, it is not only romance... So be prepared, because I am sick of love, it is time we change and allow me guys to bring you evil characters ๐ ๐คฃโค๏ธ
Thanks mbali you're the best I love you and your stories just know that you have a new friend and fan chat later school is around the corner no it's sitting next to me ๐คฃ yaz ngyavelelwa min back to school this back to school that ngikhathele ๐คฃ๐ค
Sinikeziwe Gumede Thank you, I'll go and read it, thank you so muchโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ and don't think too much about your pain and what you are going through, you are still young, don't let pain and sadness consume you because that will eat you up, I hope happiness finds you everyday and not sometimes, I was once broken, hence the poem but I have worked through my pain and depression and I am happy now, i have found my own happiness in which I hope the pain leaves you and you continue being the happy, bubbly and talkative person that you are, don't let anything pr anyone dim your lightโฅ๏ธ๐
Mbali I've left a thank you comment on I'm in love with my kidnapper 7 and I did read your poem broken I wish I was your friend but that wouldn't but might make you forget I'm talkative and sweet and a bubbly person but I'm scared of life so yeah I wish I had a friend like you maybe I would forget about my sometimes pains I remember imagine an 11 year old have some pains it unbelievable but yeah it's true
You're the best mbali
Sinikeziwe Gumede I definitely will, but don't mind the mistakes half of my work is filled with grammatical errors, as long as the story flows the mistakes will not be that noticeable, but I will definitely check your workโค๏ธ
Thuli Dweku That will come because I will be revisiting all the unfinished parts
Please mbali can you read my stories sometimes if you are free where there are mistakes plz๐ฅบ as an 11 year old I might make mistakes where I didn't mean it plzz๐ฅบ๐
Hey Mbali thanks for da gud books...kuzona zonke ayikho engiyilinde njenge KNIGHTFALL 3, Patiently waiting dear. Daughtr of a kidnapper was out of dis world. Actually all da storied r wonderful kip up da gud work cc.๐ฅฐ๐ฏ
andโฆ@gmai... Honestly it was done by Fundza but I think the more you upload your work, that will be then your name turns blue
Hey Mbali how did you make your name to be logged in for us to see your stories ๐ฅบ
Sikhosana mbalenhle I didn't, it was put there by Fundza
A daughter of a kidnapper, has been releasedโค๏ธ
Mbali how did you make a cover page on a daughter of a kidnapper help plis
Sorry for the late replies guys, it has been a little hectic on my side, I'll hopefully see y'all when A daughter of a kidnapper is releasedโค๏ธโค๏ธ
The last message was directed to Someleze dumezweni
I have already sent in A daughter of a kidnapper, I'm still brainstorming on I fell in love with a convict 2, as for now I don't have any ideas on how to go about it
nikโฆ@gmai... When you publish more of your work, your name will be blue
Itz Enhle Yoy can message me on Facebook, search Mbali Nyabane-Author
Mbali I think we should create a group where we can talk and share ideas on a new story.we should create it on Moya
Patiently waiting for daughter of a kidnapper
Nice job Mbalz โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ค๐ปlove your work keep it up girl you got this
Me too Mbali plz help me too
Hi Mbali absolutely love your work and I would love to know howdid you make your author profile y'know with the blue name ๐ I'm kinda a new writer please and thank you xoxo
hey mbali , i'm a huge fan , can we please have a daughter of a kidnaper and i fell in love with a convict 2 . โค๏ธ
Hi Mbali
Can i plz ask if i fell inlove with a convict 2 is going 2 be released..
Cos im so eaerly awaiting it
No pressure just a fan loveall ur stories
Refilwe Thank you๐๐ฝโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Love your work Sisi๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅโฅ๏ธ
If you mean part 2 then no not yet, I am still busy with A daughter of a kidnapper and some gangster story (I'm not yet sure about the title) But after these 2 I'll start with it
Hey Mbalz๐โค๏ธhave you started writing"I fell in love with a convict"or are you with
I fell in love with an abductor is out!! โค๏ธ๐๐ฝ
@Bokang Sedutla I haven't written it, I am still busy with I fell in love with an abductor but after that I will write it, but in the mean time you can read the story on F.B before I can upload it here, just search I fell in love with an abductor
Mbali where can I find the DAUGHTER OF A KIDNAPPER becos i don't see it here
@Boki, Thank youโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ
Sjabu Gumede you can just search me on Facebook, Mbali Nyabane (my personal fb) or message Mbali Nyabane - Author
Greetings Mbali Nyabane and the others its been awhile since I visited FunDza due my phone being broken but I'm back to being one of ur biggest fans I'm srry to hear that someone had stolen ur work hope karma gets to him
I love you Mbali Nyabane can I get your contact details please ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅบ
I fell in love with an abductor will be released on F.B please check it out
Desmond had removed I'm in love with my kidnapper๐๐ฝ
DONT WORRY MBALI I'LL TAKE REVENGE FOR U ON THIS 'DESMOND๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คฎ๐คง๐คง๐ค๐ง๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐บ๐บ๐น๐น'HES A REAL DEVIL FOR STEALING YOUR STORIES GOING RIGHT NOW TO FRAME HIMMM.
Yeah, I guess I should ๐
thanks for the advice. I think it'll help A LOT๐๐๐๐Thanx!!
Take a break, it happens to the best of us๐ Take a breath, unwind and go do something other than writing, there are many stories here that I have written that I ended up not liking them when I was half through with them, what I do is that I take a break or I watch a movie or a series they usually spark some kind of inspiration, you can do that - if it doesn't work just force yourself to write after a week or so and when you read it, you will end up liking it that's what I usually do, hopefully this will help youโค๏ธ
Plzz help out, it's a kind of bookworm emergency ๐๐
Nice...so, I actually wanted to ask for advice from you Mbali. I'd like to write a lot of stories cause I have a lot of ideas, but I keep getting in the middle and when it's almost done it all feels like a waste. You've written so many incredible stories ๐๐๐and I'd really like to hear from someone who has a passion for writing
Yaaaay๐๐๐
I fell in love with a convict is out!!!!!
Olwakhe Tembe I won't stop, will push throughโค๏ธ
Srry Mbali this is why I only published one poem I am scared of exactly that , mara pls don't stop publishing pls we luv it n une paki himi nabanye we all know that ur the wonder working women (WWW) pls we (I) LUV BOTH U N UR WORK ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ธ๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ป
@Mbali Nyabane sorry Mbalz๐ฅ I feel your pain๐๐ญ
Nothing hurts like seeing someone stealing my work and posting it as theirs, ai guys after I fell in love with an abductor is released, I'll no longer be writing stories for a while now...
Not anytime soon, I only wrote like 2 chapters and haven't visited it since, but for now I fell in love with an abductor will be released, but I will write when I get tge energy to do so
Happy new year to you Mbali I just want to know when is a daughter of a kidnapper going to be published
Happy New year everyone๐โค๏ธ
Merry Christmas to all
MEEEERY MEEERY MEEERY MOTHER OF JESUS (CHRIST)MAS from ur girl lwax to u with lots of luv ESP to my favourite writer ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐๐ค๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐ค๐๐ค๐๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐งกโค๏ธ๐โค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐
Merry Christmas guys
What to expect in the year 2024, are new stories from me. I will have a series of I fell in loveโค๏ธ - currently I have, I fell in love with my kidnapper, there will be I fell in love with a convict and I fell in love with an abductor and another brand new story it will be A daughter of a kidnapper and then a part of Shattered Hopeโค๏ธ๐.... I can't wait for you guys to see what I have in store for y'all๐๐โค๏ธ The stories this time won't have any grammatical errors I pinky swear๐
๐ค๐ฝ๐ But be sure to wait cause yeah editing takes a looot of time and energy. Have a safe and wonderful festive season, I'll see you all next year๐โค๏ธ
I forgot to say that part 7 is out, it has been out for a week nowโค๏ธ
I have read the comments and I'm happy to say that I can't wait to read your books. So I'll just start with the one on the top. @Mbali Nyabane
It starts with Rise, late rise and then Night rise
Mbali how do the ...rise books work / go
You definitely should, I agree with Christyโบ๏ธ
I wanna do that, hopefully next year I will be in that process of doing that๐โค๏ธ
Hi cc,your writing is splendid!So like your stories online right.Then do start by writing it down with a pen and paper then publish it or....
I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 is out!!!โค๏ธ๐
@Mbali โฅ๏ธokay thank you so much๐๐ฅ
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Ok after Dusk 5 it is Dusk 6(Finale) Then after it is Dusk (1) Vol 2 Dusk (2) Vol 2 Dusk 3 vol 2 (I forgot to put brackets so it does nkt follow along the lome you have to scroll down a little bit and then the last one os Dusk (1) V 3
@Mbali Nyabane...so I read Dusk1-Dusk5 already and now I'm confused as to how I now read the Dusk Volumes๐คplzzz help๐ฅบโฅ๏ธ
@Mbali Nyabane much love sweetie โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
Pinkk Pantherโฅ๏ธ Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me๐ค๐ฝ๐๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ โค๏ธ
Hey Mabliโฅ๏ธgreat job hunn๐ฅบ๐ฅ you're such an amazing writer...your work is flawless and exceptional๐๐keep up the great work and keep on blessing usโฅ๏ธ๐ฅบyour stories inspire me and keep me going... especially after I read "If love was easy"...it was so moving and I relate to some parts of the story...big ups to you girlโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
-PSโฅ๏ธyour most devoted fan/reader๐ฅบโฅ๏ธ
Sneak peak of Shattered Hope 2 is up on my page Mbali Nyabane-Author โค๏ธ
Morgan Rice ๐คฃ๐คฃ Yeah, writing is something I love doing more than anything in the world, it is my passionโค๏ธ And thank you๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ I will keep the stories coming๐ค๐ฝ
Sithembiso Dube I didn't think people would like it, I was also testing the waters and seeing if I can write about our problems that we face, without adding fantasy parts or whatsoever but if you guys enjoyed it then I'll start with the part 2 right away๐๐ฝโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Yho you have been writing half your life ๐โค๏ธ You truly are an inspiration, I can't wait to read more of your stories๐๐
When will it be published I can't wait ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
Mina I'm waiting for part 2 of Shattered Hope plz be fast Mbali ๐ฅบโค
And I started writing actual novels when I was 14, that's when I decided to push my limits and I haven't stopped ever since actually I did stop when I was in grade 10 until matric but after that I carried on... I over explained๐คฃ but it's fine๐คฆ๐ฝโโ๏ธ๐คฃ
I started writing actual stories, which were short stories at the time when I was 13 but my love for writing started when I was 10, I started off with Poems and I felt like poems weren't enough for me then I ventured into writing short storiesโค๏ธ
Mbali may I ask.At what age did you start writing stories?
I have already sent part 6, I just have to be busy with part 7 now๐ If you have not joined my facebook page you should do so, I posted a small peak of part 7 and also a chapter from part 6โค๏ธโค๏ธ
I can't wait for all your new stories and part 6&7 of I'm in love with my kidnapper๐๐ค but I'll try to stay patient ๐ค๐
Shattered Hope is out, thank God๐คฆ๐ฝโโ๏ธ Fundza makes me so anxious sometimes... I will now start uploading my new stories on Visionary Writings and Tapas, they'll come to Fundza after a while, possibly after a few weeks of being published on other sides. After I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 and 7 I'll focus writing on other platformsโค๏ธ
I'll also start uploading my novels on Royal Road
I just sent the I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 to Fundza now all we have to do is wait for them to release it probably next monthโค๏ธ
I released one chapter from I'm in love with my kidnapper 6, just so you know what to expect it is on my facbook page called Mbali Nyabane - Author go check it outโค๏ธ I know I took a while to finish it but I hope this will make up for the fact that I took a whole month๐ญ but anyway you can go check it out
Good news I am done writing part 6, all I'm left to do is edit it
I thought the I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 would be the last one but I am thinking of bringing part 7๐คฃ I live for for drama, part 7 will be filled with shocking news plus drama which equals to fireworks ๐
I'd like to address something, when I say there's a book coming I'm not saying I will write it in two days and finish it in 2 days and after release it, I have days where I get unmotivated to write, where there are just no ideas and no inspiration and NO I won't force myself to write cause I know I won't like it, when I say I am writing I am but don't expect me to make miracles and finish in just a few days, there are stories where I can't stop writing but there are some where I can't carry on until I am motivated to write, don't rush me, good things are meant to be waited for, and since I'm in love with my kidnapper is going to be the last one I am trying to make it to have everything that I want it to have, I want drama, tears, laughter and magical moments... You will get it when I am done with it but don't put me under unnecessary pressure to finish it, I don't wanna have to skip certain parts just cause I was desperate to finish it, I hope you understand๐
Congrats on being ranked no 1, I haven't read all of your books, I just read 2 which was Time and Time 2 you are good and if the rest of your stories are as good as the last two then you sure as hell deserve that๐๐๐๐ฅณโค๏ธ
It is ranked no 1 on Wattpad and it is on New and Trending on Visionary Writings๐ญโค๏ธ If you get a chance please check it out cause it will take time for it to come here
Exciting news๐๐ If you have Wattpad please check out my new story called I fell in love with a convict, it is fairly new but it's moving like crazy, or if you have Visionary Writings please check it out๐๐ฝโค๏ธ๐ญ๐ฅฐ
But I had sebt a story called Shattered Hope end of Juky and I have been waiting ever since for it to be publish but then๐คท๐ฝโโ๏ธ They said I must wait until mid October so be prepared to wait for I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 until November or December
Anonymous Girl I'm currently a little bit sick but it's almost finished it I'll probably by next week I will finish it next week
Mbali I have been waiting for I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 and I'm starting to loose hope now
Micayla Swartz Yes, absolutely. There is a story that is supposed to come out but I don't know why it is taking this long for it to be released it will be almost 2 months now but anyways the story is called Shattered Hope
@Mbali, will you be writing more stories? Please do, cause I can't get enough of your stories๐๐๐ค๐
Time 2 is out!
I don't know yaz, I am currently busy with I fell in love with a convict but as soon as I'm done with it, I'll continue to write it
Mbalz I am waiting for ( I am in love with my kidnapper chapter six ) when will it be published
I have created a Facebook page it is Mbali Nyabane - Author it has whatsapp group link we can talk there about upcoming books, anything you may want to know about me
I recently posted just search : If you have a problem with me text me (and after click on posts you'll see my profile at the top)
On my profile pic I have an afro, my bio I have written visionary writings and Fundza only
Mbali I looked for you how am I supposed to tell which one is you
Olwakhe Tembe๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ Aww thank you.. And I'm just an ordinary person kanjan, I'm always indoors, I'm veryyyy shy lol until I get to know someone, and I like my space... For now you can see me on Facebook just search my name๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
2 b honest Mbali ur like a celebrity 2 me , 1 that I am longing deadly 2 c ngi ya ku luva Mbali ๐๐๐๐๐
Luv u dress Mbali , akekk obala nje ngawe u r my no.1๐๐๐ค
Which is why I wanna create a Facebook or Whatsapp group, so that I can share samples of the other stories and update y'all on whatever I'll be busy with when I'm unavailable here on Fundza. Just a place where you will be able to share your opinions, what kind of story lines you may want to read etcetera
It's Visionary Writings but the stories on that side will still come here - What is needed is for me to send a story that has not yet been published anywhere else so that they can put it on premium selection that's why I'll be taking a break here but it will only be for September maybe till October then when the books are added on the premium package I'll publish them here
Which one Mbalzโค๏ธ๐ญ???
Yeah there are๐, there are always stories coming but after I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 I'll be taking a break from writing here on Fundza just for a little while and I'll be writing on another platform
Mbail Nyabane are there still more stories coming I love your stories
Zanele Nhlapo, I really hope that happens yaz Zee, one day is one day โค๏ธ๐ค๐ฝ
Olwakhe Tembe Fundza removed that option but I may create a page a F.B page and you guys can be able to see me and get updates on upcoming stories
Love your work Mbalz please continue writing โค๏ธwishing u all the best in the industry hope they get to c your work and appreciate it cos gal can't wait to c u collecting awards for best story , writer you truly deserve it๐ฅโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
@Mbali Nyabane pls put a profile pic of urself pls๐คฒ n luv all ur stories specially if love was easy โค๏ธ๐๐๐งก๐๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐ luv u n wish u all the best
I'm in love with my kidnapper 5 is out๐
But it's just copy and paste books from here but soon I will stop here at Fundza for a little while so that I can do original stories on Visionary Writings I'm just waiting on Fundza to publish the other 3 remaining books so that I can write on that other side and not just copy and paste
Visionary Writings
Hi Mbali,may I ask which other platform do you use to write stories?
Dusk 1 v 3 is out!
Expect nothing but drama๐๐๐ฝโโ๏ธ
Hi Mbali ๐ Are we be expecting a little Melusi or a mini Melo in I'm In love with my kidnapper 5???
Morgan Rice Every story that I write there are bits and pieces pieces of my life๐โค๏ธ
I am curious @Mbali do all of the books that you write have any kind of connection with your everyday life?
That's like waiting a whole month๐ญ๐ญ
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ญ๐ญ Your comments are really touching and inspiring. Thank you guys๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐ญ they really mean a lot to me๐ค๐ฝโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
I am done with I'm in love with my kidnapper 5โค๏ธ, come check it out after 2/3 weeks it shall be released then by Fundza
Mbali๐บ๐บ . Friends with benefits really touched me when. I LOVE l๐ike in literally LOVE๐ all your books . They is no book I get tired of which you write. I've read your books for so long over and over again but it feels like I'm reading it for the first time. Your work is truly amazing โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
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Yoh Mbali you out did yourself with Friends with benefits shame jealous must fall down๐๐๐๐
@Mbali Nyabane aii shame I love all your work.I wish to be a writer like you one day.Keep on writing!
Did you guys see Dusk mara on the Fundza cover page๐คญโค๏ธ
Sesona Cunge ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝโค๏ธ Thank you so much
Lilly Mbuli If you have any ideas for part 5 you welcome tell meโค๏ธ
Love your work Mbali.My fave is I'm in love with my kidnapper โค๏ธ๐ซ
Thank you Mbali ๐๐๐โบ๏ธ for releasing the book ๐ now let me sit back and read ๐๐คธ๐ฏโจ
I can't wait๐ฉโค๏ธ
Stories soon to come out are Friends with benefits, Dusk 1 v 3 and then after it will be I'm in love with my kidnapper
Okays
I love her stories shameโค๏ธ
Queen lender K1 visa ๐ซฃ๐คฃ At least you won't get bored yabo mara
Hebanna so many stories hayi sham my holiday is going to be lit with these stories
I'm in with my kidnapper 4 is out!!!!!!! Go check it outโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
๐คฃ๐คฃ YEAH I might have an attack, I'll also be keeping my fingers crossed๐ค๐ฝ
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๐คฃ๐คฃ You worried you will have an anxiety attack, is there even such a word. But I understand where you are coming from hunโค๏ธ let's hope today they don't disappoint๐ค๐ผ
I have no patience to be honest it is really hard for me to be patient๐ maybe it is because I am always here and I constantly see the stories maybe that's making me more anxious๐
but if one of the stories is not published today I am seriously going to pull them down. Fundza is kinda having a lot of stories to publish or something along those lines, I get that but my anxiety just doesn't get it.
Noooo, please don't๐๐ญ I was really looking forward to reading them
Today I will be pulling down both Friends with benefits and I'm in love with my kidnapper 4. I have sent Friends with benefits 2 weeks ago next week it will be 3 weeks and I'm in love with my kidnapper 4 about 3 weeks ago, next week it will be a whole month since I last sent it and they are both still yet to be published, I'm honestly tired of waiting. You will find the stories on Visionary Writings (it is not data free though) I'll try August or September to publish them here again
I know hey, but I am waiting on Fundza to release them, the delay is on their side, hopefully next week they will be outโค๏ธ
When are the books coming out, I have been waiting since forever๐ญ
Can't wait ๐๐๐๐
Update : I am done with the story I have been telling you about of Friends with benefits, I have also sent it to Fundza so you will be lucky if they both come out same week but different days.
I am crossing fingers that they will be out next weekโค๏ธ
Yeah๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ the book is finally finished. Thanks Mbali๐บ๐บ
Search for 2023 Fundza Fellowship / 2023 Flash Fiction๐๐ฝโค๏ธ
Lilly Mbuli Of course, you guys inspired meโค๏ธ After you read this part maybe you can give out more ideas for part 5 on what you may like to see or something
If I may ask did you use the ideas we gave you โบ๏ธ
Asbonge๐๐๐๐๐โบ๏ธ
Where can we find them
I am done writing I'm in love with my kidnapper 4 I just sent it to Fundza so now all we can do is wait for them to release itโบ๏ธโค๏ธ
Hey guys, I am part of the 2023 Fundza Fellowship programme and I have 2 stories under it which are called, A Second Chance and The Secrets of the night I would really appreciate it that you read them and also take a look at some of my fellowship companions storiesโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ
Yeah I can actually see that happening, I have already started writing and I have implemented the ideas you guys have gave me so if there are more ideas please free to tell me I will make sure that I write them down the best way that I know how
Yeah and also if Melusi falls for this woman let's say and she confesses but Melo doesn't know until she finds out and Melusi freaks out knowing he impregnated this woman
Twilly Sweet You not budging in at all anyone is welcome to share ideas, have you got anymore of the ideas?
Sorry to budge in but Lilly mbuli has got a point. Ok so in love with my kidnapper let's say they are in a honeymoon and stuff maybe let's say Paris and a woman secretly falls for Melusi or a guy who falls secretly for Melo and can't get his horses and befriends one of them and confess knowing that Melo is pregnant but Melusi doesn't know
Lilly Mbuli Yes please
Hi Mbali should I continue were I left off???
Masego M I'm surprised you still remember it but it is half written I just need to finish it. I kinda pushed it back because people showed lack of interest in it but I will definitely get on with it
Mbali are you going to release another part of Knightfall because we need to know what happened to Zobuhle and Londisizwe
It is actually pretty good
I'll continue were I left off now tell me what do you think???
Ok since they are now married take us on a ride on their honeymoon think of places like Paris, France New York, Mauritius etc and of cause add the juicy details then they'll come back then months later drop the bombshell... MELO IS PREGNANT but she doesn't know how to tell Melusi the news because she doesn't know what reaction she'll get from him, but eventually she'll tell him... Melusi will be over the moon but their happiness will be cut short......
Ok since they are now married take us for spin as we explore their honeymoon think of places like Paris, France,New York, Mauritius etc ... From there the juicy details, then they will come back,then drop the bombshell "Melo finds out months later that she's pregnant"... But she doesn't know how to tell Melusi the news because she doesn't know what reaction she'll get from him but eventually she'll tell him ... Melusi will be over the moon but their happiness will be cut short........
Hi Mbali eish my Facebook doesn't work
Lilly Mbuli I do wanna carry on with it but eyy inspiration dololo but you can tell me those ideas maybe they might spark some inspiration which I desperately need feel free to facebook me
I've got a lot of ideas that you can use... Just say the magic word ๐
What happened to what we discussed about I fell in love with my kidnapper???
Lilly Mbuli I am here I just don't have much inspiration to write anything lately but I am still here
Lilly Mbuli When you scroll down you will see my facebook name account the only thing I didn't leave was my number but you can message me on my facebook and it is been a while since i last saw your messages I was wondering were you went but please check on facebook my name is Mbali Nyabane my profile it is me wearing fundza clothes
Hi and how are you ....you been missed hope you been doing great. Phela update me ๐
Hee wee Mbali and you forgot about me your number one supporter ....I'm so disappointed ๐โน๏ธ๐
You should have a message by now
Yess if understood them then yes
Hey flo the numbers they are exactly like that?
But my email is not working so I can't message you......sorry๐guess there is no hope left ๐
Yeah of course
May I help as well cause I also need help with my writing skills as I'm feel like I'm lacking ๐
Understoodโค๏ธโค๏ธ
And remember I will not be putting all the ideas, I will just pick with what I would feel goes well with my writing so don't feel left out if I don't use many of your ideas
And thanks to those who wana help โค๏ธ๐๐ฝ
This is getting too big but what I want is for you not write for me, I just need ideas on what you would like to see or read on the book and I will try to incorporate them with my writing I just wanted to make that clear enough and I want you to help me edit since I can't read my own work no matter how much I try that's why I have so many errors. But even if you have no ideas just to help me edit will be just fine๐ right now I am busy with Timeless bonus chapters so you can help me there, it is not much it will only have maybe 3/4 chapters nothing to big and if I like your ideas then you can help with the main story that is currently pushed back because of my writers block which is Friends with benefits but your ideas may help me a lot
Okay my email is mbali nyabane 68 @ gmail . com fundza does not allow us to send personal numbers or emails but leave no spaces when typing the email
My messages are no longer getting through here but I'll try to find a way for you guys to help โบ๏ธ
This is amazing, can I hop in too??
I wanted to help you out Mbali but unfortunately I don't use the social media platforms you have mentioned below
Okay it's 0GA GFE ADEE
Yeah I understand
Well I can give you my number but I'll put it in a form of letters if you understand what I mean?
Ahh mara how did you propose we do all of this?
I don't have Insta as well๐ฅ๐ฅ I'm sorry
I can't give out my personal number herr but you can search me on Instagram, Mbali P Nyabane. I am wearing a cropped shirt and have braids, you can send me a message
Don't have face book ๐๐๐๐๐
And maybe we can help each other out plus I have bonus chapters of Timeless that I want you guys to help me edit and maybe add a few other stuff that you may want to read on the story
Hi guys for those who want to help, you can search my name on Facebook which is Mbali Nyabane, my profile picture it is me, I am wearing Fundza t-shirt and their bucket hat you can hala at me thereโค๏ธ
Hi Mbali. I am also a writer and it will be an honor to help you out .I am honest and I promise I won't steal your work and make it mine. So if you haven't found someone who will help you,I am available.
Ncooh man baby girl u are such a amazing author you are hearing this straight from Tee-sixx โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ฅ
May I help pls cause I want to also write a book and I also need help with my writing skills as well๐๐๐๐so if you don't mind may I help?
I need one person who will help me edit and read my stories before they can be published here on Fundza and I need someone who won't steal my stuff and publish it as theirs, I want someone who is trustworthy and I need an honest opinion not someone who will sugarcoat the truth, basically you will be a beta reader ... So who can help me out?๐ฉ
Yessssโคโคโคโค
Yes, I accept๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Mbali love your stories ๐๐๐you know what I've never had a favourite author.....but now.....will you be mine ?โคโค๐๐โคโค
Wow Mbali Nyabane I don't know how to praise you but you the best amazing ๐๐ author ever ... your books are amazing
Thanks Morgan๐๐ฝโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Thanks Mbali, for always coming through with the stories๐๐ผ๐๐ผโค๏ธ
Timeless is outโค๏ธ
Florence Ingwani Thank youโค๏ธ, It will probably be out this week
When are you realising the timeless or I just missed it โค๏ธโค๏ธ
Mbali you books are amazing.. You are one of the Authors ๐คโค๏ธ. I love all of your good works
So there's a book that I am writing but before it can come here to fundza I'll write it on Facebook book first it is called Friends with Benefitsโค๏ธ Maybe you will enjoy it
Thandy Pilusa Thank you so much๐๐ผโค๏ธ
Hy Mbali i am a big fan of your work and i am obsessed with reading all the stories you write
Masego M Thank you๐โค๏ธ and High fiveโ๐ผ
Florence Oppong I write about what I fantasies about the most, how I would want my life to be like you know and how my boyfriend will be like, maybe sweet and caring, overbearing or kinda both
And I write what I wanna read, many books that I wanna read are not they I would want them so I write what I want to read but I also add some personal things. You should ask yourself, what types of books you want to read then you'll flow in whatever you decide to write
Mbali I love your books you should really consider publishing. I am now your new fan โค.High five Mbalz๐
Mbali your books are so cool ๐ญ๐ญโคโคhow do you write books help me pls if you don't mind -โคโคโค
I'm not even sure how Timid love came out so fast but anyway I have already sent Timeless it will probably be out next week maybe, maybe not but if not then try be ready for Tender loveโค๏ธ
๐๐๐asbonge!!! โบ๏ธ
โค๏ธ๐๐ฅบ๐โค๏ธ๐๐ฅฐ๐๐
Have you ever considered publishing? I for one will buy your books ๐ค๐ผ๐ค๐ผ
I love all your stories โค๏ธโค๏ธ
can't wait!
So I am about to put up a story that is totally differently from my point of writing but I love it and I enjoyed writing it hopefully you will also enjoy it
It is called Tender love, so be on the look out for that oneโค๏ธ
Pastry lover I don't know, I already sent it to Fundza, it will be upto them but hopefully next week
Thanks Mbali ๐คฃโค
When is timid love coming???
Ps. Love your books
Masego M Lol ofcouse๐, Dusk 1, 2, 3 , 4, 5, ^6 which is called Hunt in the dusk and then there is Volume 2 Of the Dusk which is Dusk 1 vol 1, 2 and the last one is volume 3 I hope that helps โค๏ธ
๐๐๐asbonge!!!!
Mbali Nyabane :Hey please explain the dusk series in order because I am stuck I don't know which one is after what pls explain them in order ๐
Lilly Mbuli It is out๐๐
Lilly Mbuli I sent them an email, and they said they have a backlog so I guess there'll be a lot of waiting I guess
Mbali I'm extremely disappointed ๐even words cannot describe how I'm so disappointed I'm losing hope
Lilly Mbuli Me too
I'm so disappointed ๐๐ค๐
Yhooooo mbali Nyabane mina I love you and your stories. Angisena skhathi somjolo lately like your stories are keeping me busy shem. Since am doing matric, after studying and all shit ngiyaz ukuthi around 19:00 I must read your stories since it's a habit. Am now becoming a book worm. Ngapha nomumtu wam ucabanga ukuthi ngiyamjolela ngoba am frequently busy with my phone. Just wanna say we are all here for you. Please continue writing. I fuck'n love your stories.
Inam Inam I'll try to write it, maybe something will come to mind, probably soon.....
Lilly Mbuli I don't know why it is taking so long but what I know is that they don't work on public holidays so maybe next week but I am already losing hope cause well๐คทโโ๏ธ but with I'm in love with my kidnapper I don't know basically my mind refuses to function when I see that there are parts of my stories that Fundza don't want to publish for some f'ed up reason๐ once they release that story of Time I can then allow myself to write the other parts of the stories, but I'll send them the email maybe after they will publish, but I'll be keeping my fingers crossed in the mean time
Ay ay ay Mbali! When is Time being released we are dying for it to be released and what are you going to do with I'm in love with my kidnapper will you continue writing it or part 3 was the last one? ๐ค
Inam Inam you must be patient
Mbali can you plz release ๐ Part 4 of I'm in love with a kidnapper
Ok Mbali ๐๐๐๐
Lilly Mbuli There is still another part of Knightfall I just haven't had the energy to write it not until they publish all the stories I have sent to them. After all the new stories then I'll be able to focus on the parts of other stories
Okay thanks for the explanation I get it now ๐...knightfall ended so unexpectedly so after finishing Time will you continue where you left off???
Lilly Mbuli I had an exam and I wanted to figure out what to write about and if I wanted a little bit more of a series type of stories like Dusk, or just standalone stories that kinda meet somewhere but even if the other part was not there it will still make sense you know... Basically the break was about that, but I'm back now๐โค๏ธ
๐๐๐I'm over the moon โบ๏ธ I'm so glad to hear that you will stick with us iyoo imagine the pain and boredom I will be feeling it's a no no.... What was the break about???
Bokang Sedutla Hopefully this week, but when it is out I'll post here
Lilly Mbuli I was on a break for a little bit, but I am not going anywhere not anytime soon I promise
Mbali when is the next book of broken vessel going to come out???
Yoo Mbali you don't know how glad am I that you are back I thought I've lost one of the greatest authors in fundza geeez ...
Yoo Mbali you don't know how glad am I that you are back I thought I've lost one of the greatest authors in fundza geeez .... plz check out the comments below the broken vessel
Lilly Mbuli Hey eish I know but I have managed to publish Blood Vessel 3 weeks back and I sent through another story cakked Time just waiting for Fundza to publish since it will be almost a month now since I sent the story, hopefully they'll soon publish
Hi Mbali โบ๏ธ how are you I hope you are well it's been a while since you last released any books and I am wondering when will you release books I'm dying of suspension and curiosity. Please reply and I have a lot of things that I would like to discuss with you ๐
Hi Morgan, Eyy not anytime soon. I am currently busy with my upcoming exams but after that stress of studying then I'll writeโค๏ธ
It's been a while, are you writing anything or you waiting for the book to be released???? ๐
Search Mbali Nyabane
Yeah I do
Thanks mbals you are a great author
Thank you hun 2 books meaning I need to get comfy cause I about yo dive in right now!! ๐
And so is Knightfall 2, what a nice way to start a new year ๐ Be ready for more stories โค๏ธ
Night rise is outโค๏ธ
I'm in love with my Kidnapper 3 is outโค๏ธ and happy holidays ๐โค๏ธ
Fundza is understaffed, So don't come for me, I already sent all 3 books that needed to be sent, starting with I'm in love with my kidnapper, The night rise and Knightfall.. So bear with me but hopefully soon they'll publish one of the 3โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Okay Lilly, I'll be waiting
Thanks alot your reply means the world to me... I'll try writing according to how you advised me to then I'll get back to you once I made progress โบ๏ธ
@LilyMbuli When I write I don't plan I just write, everything will come on my mind as I type, and I become the characters that I am writing, I bring out my feelings at how I would feel if such and such happened to me, If the character had to be sad then I become sad and so forth but mostly I write what I would want to read or see on TV and I try to relate to people.
I have read so many books about Americans and I wanted to write about our daily lives to be honest there ain't many books about SAns. I can suggest that when you write don't think too much cause you will end up not knowing what to write next, let the words come to you and if you are stuck take a break and do something else or read a book, watch a movie or something and you will get an inspiration and you will write again and put emotions in your story don't write for the sake of writing, write something that YOU would also want to read or possibly see on TV and don't try and copy other people's styles bring out your own, when you pen everything down put you in it and you will see that the stories will become much much better and you will flow more as you write and sorry for the looong text ๐๐ผ๐ But I hope this will help you with your writing โค๏ธโค๏ธ
@LilyMbuli to be honest with the Night Riss I have started writing it but I don't know how to continue with it I have a writers block๐ญbut I'll try to write it๐ค๐ผ As for the fan you will see when it is published I have mentioned their nameโค๏ธ Knightfall 2 is coming just that Fundza is slow at publishing they can spend a whole day without posting the stories which will mean I will have to wait another day or perhaps even another week, but I check every single day if they have published, because I want to be done with writing before Christmas, I'll continue again next year but I will push into making sure that all is written before next weekโค๏ธ๐ค๐ผโค๏ธ
Hi Mbali โบ๏ธ I wanted some tips and advice on how to write stories just like you do, how do you do it I've been trying to write my own stories but I just end up being clueless... You see I told you that you inspire me so much that I want to become a great writer just like you ๐ผ๐....
โบ๏ธ happy ๐ but why so long, wasn't it supposed to be the night rise first then the nightfall??? And if I may ask who is that fan please let me know I'm dying to know... Sorry I didn't great you first it's the excitement kicking in you know me and books are best friends... I hope that you are okay wherever you are โบ๏ธ๐โค๏ธ
Just a quick side note- I am excited to announce that there will be a 3rd part of I'm in love with my kidnapper, hopefully it will be out sometime this week, it has been inspired by one of the fansโค๏ธ
Lilly Mbuli, Okay, The night rise will be released after the Knightfall, it has been way over due๐
Hi Mbali โบ๏ธ how are you hope that you're doing great.๐ผ๐ Eish sorry for the mistake it's a typing error... I left a comment under I fell in love with my kidnapper 2 tell me what do you think.... And if I may ask when are you releasing the night rise I am dying for it to be released ๐ข๐ข๐ญ๐ญ๐
Hi Mbali โบ๏ธ hiw
Otshepiloe Rearabetswe Moeketsi โบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธโบ๏ธ Me too, It's one of my favorite tooโค๏ธ
Emihle Maqoqa, โบ๏ธ Don't worry soon probably next week or a week after, I submitted right this second, so there will be no more waiting โค๏ธโบ๏ธ
Part 3 of I'm inlove with my kidnapper โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐Pleaaase๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
@Mbali Nyabane I love dusk ๐๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
Hunted 2 is outโฅ๏ธ
It is Knight fall๐, Hunted 2 will be out this week I am waiting for Fundza to release it and Knightfall will follow right afterโค๏ธ
Hello Mbali ,
When are you going to post hunted 2 and also that story about changing kings i forgot the name . Thanks
I used I'm in love with my kidnapper
Thato Bokgobelo Awww thank you โค๏ธ which story did you use
You're so talented I used one of your stories to retell at school and got full marks
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ I saw them @Lilly Mbuli and tgey are really amazing
Hi Mbali how are you, hope that you're good.. No problem if I could do more to show my appreciation I would ๐ Yesterday you replied to my message so I left ideas for you to see under the comments of I'm in love with my kidnapper 2 tell me what you think about them
Love your no.1 fan
Lilly ๐ผ
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐ฅบ You going to make me shed a tear, thank you for the kind words โค๏ธ๐๐ฝ
Oh thank you you're the best you don't know how much I've been dying to hear this I'm so glad I love books so much and yours are the best you're talented shame ๐ ๐๐
Lots of love from your number 1 fan
Lilly
Lilly Mbuli,๐๐ Soon I promise, I will release both of them๐ค๐ผ
And part 3 of I'm in love with my kidnapper please ๐
Please release the night rise๐ณ๐ณI just can't wait any longer ๐๐
Which part 3 are you talking about
Bokang Sedutla ๐๐๐๐ I'll definitely check it outโค๏ธ
Seems like a lot of people want part 3, I'll consider writing it but I don't know how to start or where to start, since this story is for y'all I am open for any kind of opinions that you may have and I promise to write the book based on them, so how do you want it to be like? And no opinion is too little or too unimportant ๐ค๐ผ Besides this story is for all of youโค๏ธ
@Mbali Nyabane remember when u said i must tell u ify poem is published well it's out and it's titled "bophelo ke ntwa"
Wow you're really talented โฅ๏ธ
Morgan Rice, I don't know, when I write I be the character that I am writing in that moment, if at the moment the character is sad I shall bring out my own sadness too and so forth, I don't just write I become the whole book and see myself as the characters I guess that helps in a way I suppose ๐ I hope this helpsโค๏ธ
How do you do it? Bringing each character to life, It's like I can see the characters and what they do, wow you are awesome ๐ฅบโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
I'm in love with my kidnapper 2 is out!โค๏ธ
Thube Mbhele Shabangu ๐ญ๐ญ Me too, I'm crossing my fingers ๐ฉ
They must hurry I'm waiting for it
Lusy, I'm waiting for fundza to publish it hopefully during this week๐๐ฝ
@Mbali Nyabane , when are you posting I'm in love with my Kidnapper Part 2?
Usually I wait a week but if I opened it and edited it then I'll wait another week on top of that, so possibly I can say approximately 2 weeks the latest can be 3 full weeks, but if it takes longer than that I'll suggest you email them and they will publish it.
For it to be published
Wait for?
Mbali I have review a story how many weeks should I wait
Thanks
Sinikeziwe Gumede ๐๐๐ I'll definitely do that
Mbali I also write stories you can search my name โบ๏ธ
Can we please have the night rise.when is it coming ๐ญ๐ญ
Retshepile Masiteng, Probably next week or week after that depending on Fundzaโค๏ธโค๏ธ Aww mara thank you๐ฅบ๐ฉ
When I 'm in love with my kidnapper part2 realised I am yearning for it anyway I love you the best writer ever after William Shakespeare
Sinikeziwe Gumede ๐๐๐ You making me blush yaz mara๐คญโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ Thank you
Thank you Mbali you are the best I am looking forward for your new stories I am a big fan when you publish a story just know I will read it and comment and like๐
Sinikeziwe Gumede sorry I missed your comment๐๐ฝ, no I write everything at once like I start a book from chapter 1 till the end, the chapters you see here are made by Fundza somehow I hope this helps I don't know how to explain it better
Mbali please answer my question
@Bokang Sedutla They take time to publish, it may take a week or two weeks depending on your luck, but they'll sure publish itโค๏ธ when it is out please tell me I'll be happy to check it out๐
@Mbali Nyabane i already did that about a week ago and my poem is still in review so I'm wondering why it is taking so long. Pls continue I'm in love with my kidnapper and dusk cos i love them and if u continue writing such good stories i will support u cos u are now one of my favorite authors โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Mbali Nyabane I love your stories you are awesome I am looking forward to your stories I want to ask you how do you do this do you write all this chapters and write again your stories?
Thube Mbhele Shabangu ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฉ hearing such words keep me going don't worry I'll keep writing, hoping to see your name in my future comments โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ
โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธMbali you're so talented but my favourite stories are: Dusk and How u fell in love with my kidnapper. Continue writing and I'll continue supporting you โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
@BokangSedutla click on menu you will see love writing and click on it and right at the top right corner you see start writing
I hope this helps
Mbali I love ur books, especially Dusk โค๏ธโค๏ธ. How do we get to write and publish books on FunDza?
๐๐๐โค๏ธ you so talented , I'm a huge fan of your work ๐ฅ๐ป my fav is Dusk ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ you really went all out there!
I wonder what you have for us in store now? I love all your books โค๏ธ And I will definitely read another one if does come out โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
for me it's all the parts of Dusk and If love was easy๐๐๐๐ฆ
Dusk 5 please ๐
Dusk 5 plzโค๏ธ๐ฅฐ
Lovely workโคโคโค
I really love your pieces ๐๐ plz give us part 3of "If love was easy"