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Mbali Nyabane
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Hi Mbali absolutely love your work and I would love to know howdid you make your author profile y'know with the blue name 😂 I'm kinda a new writer please and thank you xoxo
hey mbali , i'm a huge fan , can we please have a daughter of a kidnaper and i fell in love with a convict 2 . ❤️
Hi Mbali
Can i plz ask if i fell inlove with a convict 2 is going 2 be released..
Cos im so eaerly awaiting it
No pressure just a fan loveall ur stories
Refilwe Thank you🙏🏽❤️❤️
Love your work Sisi🔥🔥🔥🔥♥️
If you mean part 2 then no not yet, I am still busy with A daughter of a kidnapper and some gangster story (I'm not yet sure about the title) But after these 2 I'll start with it
Hey Mbalz😇❤️have you started writing"I fell in love with a convict"or are you with
I fell in love with an abductor is out!! ❤️👌🏽
@Bokang Sedutla I haven't written it, I am still busy with I fell in love with an abductor but after that I will write it, but in the mean time you can read the story on F.B before I can upload it here, just search I fell in love with an abductor
Mbali where can I find the DAUGHTER OF A KIDNAPPER becos i don't see it here
@Boki, Thank you❤️🙏🏽
Sjabu Gumede you can just search me on Facebook, Mbali Nyabane (my personal fb) or message Mbali Nyabane - Author
Greetings Mbali Nyabane and the others its been awhile since I visited FunDza due my phone being broken but I'm back to being one of ur biggest fans I'm srry to hear that someone had stolen ur work hope karma gets to him
I love you Mbali Nyabane can I get your contact details please 🥰🥰🥰🥺
I fell in love with an abductor will be released on F.B please check it out
Desmond had removed I'm in love with my kidnapper🙏🏽
DONT WORRY MBALI I'LL TAKE REVENGE FOR U ON THIS 'DESMOND🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤧🤧🤒🧐💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩👺👺👹👹'HES A REAL DEVIL FOR STEALING YOUR STORIES GOING RIGHT NOW TO FRAME HIMMM.
Yeah, I guess I should 😅 thanks for the advice. I think it'll help A LOT💗💗💗💗Thanx!!
Take a break, it happens to the best of us😂 Take a breath, unwind and go do something other than writing, there are many stories here that I have written that I ended up not liking them when I was half through with them, what I do is that I take a break or I watch a movie or a series they usually spark some kind of inspiration, you can do that - if it doesn't work just force yourself to write after a week or so and when you read it, you will end up liking it that's what I usually do, hopefully this will help you❤️
Plzz help out, it's a kind of bookworm emergency 💙💙
Nice...so, I actually wanted to ask for advice from you Mbali. I'd like to write a lot of stories cause I have a lot of ideas, but I keep getting in the middle and when it's almost done it all feels like a waste. You've written so many incredible stories 😍😍😍and I'd really like to hear from someone who has a passion for writing
Yaaaay🎉🎉🎉
I fell in love with a convict is out!!!!!
Olwakhe Tembe I won't stop, will push through❤️
Srry Mbali this is why I only published one poem I am scared of exactly that , mara pls don't stop publishing pls we luv it n une paki himi nabanye we all know that ur the wonder working women (WWW) pls we (I) LUV BOTH U N UR WORK 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😸👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻
@Mbali Nyabane sorry Mbalz😥 I feel your pain😓😭
Nothing hurts like seeing someone stealing my work and posting it as theirs, ai guys after I fell in love with an abductor is released, I'll no longer be writing stories for a while now...
Not anytime soon, I only wrote like 2 chapters and haven't visited it since, but for now I fell in love with an abductor will be released, but I will write when I get tge energy to do so
Happy new year to you Mbali I just want to know when is a daughter of a kidnapper going to be published
Happy New year everyone🎈❤️
Merry Christmas to all
MEEEERY MEEERY MEEERY MOTHER OF JESUS (CHRIST)MAS from ur girl lwax to u with lots of luv ESP to my favourite writer 💝💝💝💖💝💖🖤💕🖤💕🖤🖤💝🖤💝💜💜🖤💝💜🖤💜🖤💜🖤🖤💝💝💜🧡❤️💓❤️💓💚💛💝💞💜💘💖💝💕💙💖🖤💖💋💋💋💋
Merry Christmas guys
What to expect in the year 2024, are new stories from me. I will have a series of I fell in love❤️ - currently I have, I fell in love with my kidnapper, there will be I fell in love with a convict and I fell in love with an abductor and another brand new story it will be A daughter of a kidnapper and then a part of Shattered Hope❤️😊.... I can't wait for you guys to see what I have in store for y'all😊😊❤️ The stories this time won't have any grammatical errors I pinky swear😅🤞🏽🙈 But be sure to wait cause yeah editing takes a looot of time and energy. Have a safe and wonderful festive season, I'll see you all next year🎄❤️
I forgot to say that part 7 is out, it has been out for a week now❤️
I have read the comments and I'm happy to say that I can't wait to read your books. So I'll just start with the one on the top. @Mbali Nyabane
It starts with Rise, late rise and then Night rise
Mbali how do the ...rise books work / go
You definitely should, I agree with Christy☺️
I wanna do that, hopefully next year I will be in that process of doing that🙈❤️
Hi cc,your writing is splendid!So like your stories online right.Then do start by writing it down with a pen and paper then publish it or....
I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 is out!!!❤️🎉
@Mbali ♥️okay thank you so much😍🔥
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Ok after Dusk 5 it is Dusk 6(Finale) Then after it is Dusk (1) Vol 2 Dusk (2) Vol 2 Dusk 3 vol 2 (I forgot to put brackets so it does nkt follow along the lome you have to scroll down a little bit and then the last one os Dusk (1) V 3
@Mbali Nyabane...so I read Dusk1-Dusk5 already and now I'm confused as to how I now read the Dusk Volumes🤕plzzz help🥺♥️
@Mbali Nyabane much love sweetie ♥️♥️♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥
Pinkk Panther♥️ Thank you so much, you have no idea how much this means to me🤞🏽💕🙏🏽🙏🏽 ❤️
Hey Mabli♥️great job hunn🥺🔥 you're such an amazing writer...your work is flawless and exceptional😍💕keep up the great work and keep on blessing us♥️🥺your stories inspire me and keep me going... especially after I read "If love was easy"...it was so moving and I relate to some parts of the story...big ups to you girl♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
-PS♥️your most devoted fan/reader🥺♥️
Sneak peak of Shattered Hope 2 is up on my page Mbali Nyabane-Author ❤️
Morgan Rice 🤣🤣 Yeah, writing is something I love doing more than anything in the world, it is my passion❤️ And thank you🙏🏽🙏🏽 I will keep the stories coming🤞🏽
Sithembiso Dube I didn't think people would like it, I was also testing the waters and seeing if I can write about our problems that we face, without adding fantasy parts or whatsoever but if you guys enjoyed it then I'll start with the part 2 right away🙏🏽❤️❤️
Yho you have been writing half your life 🙊❤️ You truly are an inspiration, I can't wait to read more of your stories😍😍
When will it be published I can't wait 🥺🥺
Mina I'm waiting for part 2 of Shattered Hope plz be fast Mbali 🥺❤
And I started writing actual novels when I was 14, that's when I decided to push my limits and I haven't stopped ever since actually I did stop when I was in grade 10 until matric but after that I carried on... I over explained🤣 but it's fine🤦🏽♀️🤣
I started writing actual stories, which were short stories at the time when I was 13 but my love for writing started when I was 10, I started off with Poems and I felt like poems weren't enough for me then I ventured into writing short stories❤️
Mbali may I ask.At what age did you start writing stories?
I have already sent part 6, I just have to be busy with part 7 now😊 If you have not joined my facebook page you should do so, I posted a small peak of part 7 and also a chapter from part 6❤️❤️
I can't wait for all your new stories and part 6&7 of I'm in love with my kidnapper💗🤞 but I'll try to stay patient 🤞💗
Shattered Hope is out, thank God🤦🏽♀️ Fundza makes me so anxious sometimes... I will now start uploading my new stories on Visionary Writings and Tapas, they'll come to Fundza after a while, possibly after a few weeks of being published on other sides. After I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 and 7 I'll focus writing on other platforms❤️
I'll also start uploading my novels on Royal Road
I just sent the I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 to Fundza now all we have to do is wait for them to release it probably next month❤️
I released one chapter from I'm in love with my kidnapper 6, just so you know what to expect it is on my facbook page called Mbali Nyabane - Author go check it out❤️ I know I took a while to finish it but I hope this will make up for the fact that I took a whole month😭 but anyway you can go check it out
Good news I am done writing part 6, all I'm left to do is edit it
I thought the I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 would be the last one but I am thinking of bringing part 7🤣 I live for for drama, part 7 will be filled with shocking news plus drama which equals to fireworks 🎆
I'd like to address something, when I say there's a book coming I'm not saying I will write it in two days and finish it in 2 days and after release it, I have days where I get unmotivated to write, where there are just no ideas and no inspiration and NO I won't force myself to write cause I know I won't like it, when I say I am writing I am but don't expect me to make miracles and finish in just a few days, there are stories where I can't stop writing but there are some where I can't carry on until I am motivated to write, don't rush me, good things are meant to be waited for, and since I'm in love with my kidnapper is going to be the last one I am trying to make it to have everything that I want it to have, I want drama, tears, laughter and magical moments... You will get it when I am done with it but don't put me under unnecessary pressure to finish it, I don't wanna have to skip certain parts just cause I was desperate to finish it, I hope you understand😊
Congrats on being ranked no 1, I haven't read all of your books, I just read 2 which was Time and Time 2 you are good and if the rest of your stories are as good as the last two then you sure as hell deserve that🎉🎉🎉🥳❤️
It is ranked no 1 on Wattpad and it is on New and Trending on Visionary Writings😭❤️ If you get a chance please check it out cause it will take time for it to come here
Exciting news🎉🎉 If you have Wattpad please check out my new story called I fell in love with a convict, it is fairly new but it's moving like crazy, or if you have Visionary Writings please check it out🙏🏽❤️😭🥰
But I had sebt a story called Shattered Hope end of Juky and I have been waiting ever since for it to be publish but then🤷🏽♀️ They said I must wait until mid October so be prepared to wait for I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 until November or December
Anonymous Girl I'm currently a little bit sick but it's almost finished it I'll probably by next week I will finish it next week
Mbali I have been waiting for I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 and I'm starting to loose hope now
Micayla Swartz Yes, absolutely. There is a story that is supposed to come out but I don't know why it is taking this long for it to be released it will be almost 2 months now but anyways the story is called Shattered Hope
@Mbali, will you be writing more stories? Please do, cause I can't get enough of your stories😄😘🤞💗
Time 2 is out!
I don't know yaz, I am currently busy with I fell in love with a convict but as soon as I'm done with it, I'll continue to write it
Mbalz I am waiting for ( I am in love with my kidnapper chapter six ) when will it be published
I have created a Facebook page it is Mbali Nyabane - Author it has whatsapp group link we can talk there about upcoming books, anything you may want to know about me
I recently posted just search : If you have a problem with me text me (and after click on posts you'll see my profile at the top)
On my profile pic I have an afro, my bio I have written visionary writings and Fundza only
Mbali I looked for you how am I supposed to tell which one is you
Olwakhe Tembe🥰🥰🥰 Aww thank you.. And I'm just an ordinary person kanjan, I'm always indoors, I'm veryyyy shy lol until I get to know someone, and I like my space... For now you can see me on Facebook just search my name😊❤️❤️🙈
2 b honest Mbali ur like a celebrity 2 me , 1 that I am longing deadly 2 c ngi ya ku luva Mbali 💗💗💓💖💖
Luv u dress Mbali , akekk obala nje ngawe u r my no.1😍😍🤗
Which is why I wanna create a Facebook or Whatsapp group, so that I can share samples of the other stories and update y'all on whatever I'll be busy with when I'm unavailable here on Fundza. Just a place where you will be able to share your opinions, what kind of story lines you may want to read etcetera
It's Visionary Writings but the stories on that side will still come here - What is needed is for me to send a story that has not yet been published anywhere else so that they can put it on premium selection that's why I'll be taking a break here but it will only be for September maybe till October then when the books are added on the premium package I'll publish them here
Which one Mbalz❤️😭???
Yeah there are😊, there are always stories coming but after I'm in love with my kidnapper 6 I'll be taking a break from writing here on Fundza just for a little while and I'll be writing on another platform
Mbail Nyabane are there still more stories coming I love your stories
Zanele Nhlapo, I really hope that happens yaz Zee, one day is one day ❤️🤞🏽
Olwakhe Tembe Fundza removed that option but I may create a page a F.B page and you guys can be able to see me and get updates on upcoming stories
Love your work Mbalz please continue writing ❤️wishing u all the best in the industry hope they get to c your work and appreciate it cos gal can't wait to c u collecting awards for best story , writer you truly deserve it🥂❤️❤️❤️
@Mbali Nyabane pls put a profile pic of urself pls🤲 n luv all ur stories specially if love was easy ❤️💚💛🧡💜🖤💙💝💞💗💖💕 luv u n wish u all the best
I'm in love with my kidnapper 5 is out🎉
But it's just copy and paste books from here but soon I will stop here at Fundza for a little while so that I can do original stories on Visionary Writings I'm just waiting on Fundza to publish the other 3 remaining books so that I can write on that other side and not just copy and paste
Visionary Writings
Hi Mbali,may I ask which other platform do you use to write stories?
Dusk 1 v 3 is out!
Expect nothing but drama👀🙆🏽♀️
Hi Mbali 😍 Are we be expecting a little Melusi or a mini Melo in I'm In love with my kidnapper 5???
Morgan Rice Every story that I write there are bits and pieces pieces of my life🙃❤️
I am curious @Mbali do all of the books that you write have any kind of connection with your everyday life?
That's like waiting a whole month😭😭
❤️❤️❤️😭😭 Your comments are really touching and inspiring. Thank you guys🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽😭 they really mean a lot to me🤞🏽❤️❤️❤️
I am done with I'm in love with my kidnapper 5❤️, come check it out after 2/3 weeks it shall be released then by Fundza
Mbali🌺🌺 . Friends with benefits really touched me when. I LOVE l😍ike in literally LOVE😍 all your books . They is no book I get tired of which you write. I've read your books for so long over and over again but it feels like I'm reading it for the first time. Your work is truly amazing ♥️♥️♥️
🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️❤️
Yoh Mbali you out did yourself with Friends with benefits shame jealous must fall down💕💌💋💖
@Mbali Nyabane aii shame I love all your work.I wish to be a writer like you one day.Keep on writing!
Did you guys see Dusk mara on the Fundza cover page🤭❤️
Sesona Cunge 🙏🏽🙏🏽🙏🏽❤️ Thank you so much
Lilly Mbuli If you have any ideas for part 5 you welcome tell me❤️
Love your work Mbali.My fave is I'm in love with my kidnapper ❤️🫂
Thank you Mbali 😍😘😚☺️ for releasing the book 📚 now let me sit back and read 💃🤸👯✨
I can't wait😩❤️
Stories soon to come out are Friends with benefits, Dusk 1 v 3 and then after it will be I'm in love with my kidnapper
Okays
I love her stories shame❤️
Queen lender K1 visa 🫣🤣 At least you won't get bored yabo mara
Hebanna so many stories hayi sham my holiday is going to be lit with these stories
I'm in with my kidnapper 4 is out!!!!!!! Go check it out❤️❤️❤️❤️
🤣🤣 YEAH I might have an attack, I'll also be keeping my fingers crossed🤞🏽
😅🤣🤣 You worried you will have an anxiety attack, is there even such a word. But I understand where you are coming from hun❤️ let's hope today they don't disappoint🤞🏼
I have no patience to be honest it is really hard for me to be patient🙈 maybe it is because I am always here and I constantly see the stories maybe that's making me more anxious😅 but if one of the stories is not published today I am seriously going to pull them down. Fundza is kinda having a lot of stories to publish or something along those lines, I get that but my anxiety just doesn't get it.
Noooo, please don't😞😭 I was really looking forward to reading them
Today I will be pulling down both Friends with benefits and I'm in love with my kidnapper 4. I have sent Friends with benefits 2 weeks ago next week it will be 3 weeks and I'm in love with my kidnapper 4 about 3 weeks ago, next week it will be a whole month since I last sent it and they are both still yet to be published, I'm honestly tired of waiting. You will find the stories on Visionary Writings (it is not data free though) I'll try August or September to publish them here again
I know hey, but I am waiting on Fundza to release them, the delay is on their side, hopefully next week they will be out❤️
When are the books coming out, I have been waiting since forever😭
Can't wait 😁😁😁😁
Update : I am done with the story I have been telling you about of Friends with benefits, I have also sent it to Fundza so you will be lucky if they both come out same week but different days.
I am crossing fingers that they will be out next week❤️
Yeah🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉🎊🎉 the book is finally finished. Thanks Mbali🌺🌺
Search for 2023 Fundza Fellowship / 2023 Flash Fiction🙏🏽❤️
Lilly Mbuli Of course, you guys inspired me❤️ After you read this part maybe you can give out more ideas for part 5 on what you may like to see or something
If I may ask did you use the ideas we gave you ☺️
Asbonge💃💃💃👏🎉☺️
Where can we find them
I am done writing I'm in love with my kidnapper 4 I just sent it to Fundza so now all we can do is wait for them to release it☺️❤️
Hey guys, I am part of the 2023 Fundza Fellowship programme and I have 2 stories under it which are called, A Second Chance and The Secrets of the night I would really appreciate it that you read them and also take a look at some of my fellowship companions stories❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
Yeah I can actually see that happening, I have already started writing and I have implemented the ideas you guys have gave me so if there are more ideas please free to tell me I will make sure that I write them down the best way that I know how
Yeah and also if Melusi falls for this woman let's say and she confesses but Melo doesn't know until she finds out and Melusi freaks out knowing he impregnated this woman
Twilly Sweet You not budging in at all anyone is welcome to share ideas, have you got anymore of the ideas?
Sorry to budge in but Lilly mbuli has got a point. Ok so in love with my kidnapper let's say they are in a honeymoon and stuff maybe let's say Paris and a woman secretly falls for Melusi or a guy who falls secretly for Melo and can't get his horses and befriends one of them and confess knowing that Melo is pregnant but Melusi doesn't know
Lilly Mbuli Yes please
Hi Mbali should I continue were I left off???
Masego M I'm surprised you still remember it but it is half written I just need to finish it. I kinda pushed it back because people showed lack of interest in it but I will definitely get on with it
Mbali are you going to release another part of Knightfall because we need to know what happened to Zobuhle and Londisizwe
It is actually pretty good
I'll continue were I left off now tell me what do you think???
Ok since they are now married take us on a ride on their honeymoon think of places like Paris, France New York, Mauritius etc and of cause add the juicy details then they'll come back then months later drop the bombshell... MELO IS PREGNANT but she doesn't know how to tell Melusi the news because she doesn't know what reaction she'll get from him, but eventually she'll tell him... Melusi will be over the moon but their happiness will be cut short......
Ok since they are now married take us for spin as we explore their honeymoon think of places like Paris, France,New York, Mauritius etc ... From there the juicy details, then they will come back,then drop the bombshell "Melo finds out months later that she's pregnant"... But she doesn't know how to tell Melusi the news because she doesn't know what reaction she'll get from him but eventually she'll tell him ... Melusi will be over the moon but their happiness will be cut short........
Hi Mbali eish my Facebook doesn't work
Lilly Mbuli I do wanna carry on with it but eyy inspiration dololo but you can tell me those ideas maybe they might spark some inspiration which I desperately need feel free to facebook me
I've got a lot of ideas that you can use... Just say the magic word 😉
What happened to what we discussed about I fell in love with my kidnapper???
Lilly Mbuli I am here I just don't have much inspiration to write anything lately but I am still here
Lilly Mbuli When you scroll down you will see my facebook name account the only thing I didn't leave was my number but you can message me on my facebook and it is been a while since i last saw your messages I was wondering were you went but please check on facebook my name is Mbali Nyabane my profile it is me wearing fundza clothes
Hi and how are you ....you been missed hope you been doing great. Phela update me 😉
Hee wee Mbali and you forgot about me your number one supporter ....I'm so disappointed 😟☹️😞
You should have a message by now
Yess if understood them then yes
Hey flo the numbers they are exactly like that?
But my email is not working so I can't message you......sorry😖guess there is no hope left 😔
Yeah of course
May I help as well cause I also need help with my writing skills as I'm feel like I'm lacking 😖
Understood❤️❤️
And remember I will not be putting all the ideas, I will just pick with what I would feel goes well with my writing so don't feel left out if I don't use many of your ideas
And thanks to those who wana help ❤️🙏🏽
This is getting too big but what I want is for you not write for me, I just need ideas on what you would like to see or read on the book and I will try to incorporate them with my writing I just wanted to make that clear enough and I want you to help me edit since I can't read my own work no matter how much I try that's why I have so many errors. But even if you have no ideas just to help me edit will be just fine😊 right now I am busy with Timeless bonus chapters so you can help me there, it is not much it will only have maybe 3/4 chapters nothing to big and if I like your ideas then you can help with the main story that is currently pushed back because of my writers block which is Friends with benefits but your ideas may help me a lot
Okay my email is mbali nyabane 68 @ gmail . com fundza does not allow us to send personal numbers or emails but leave no spaces when typing the email
My messages are no longer getting through here but I'll try to find a way for you guys to help ☺️
This is amazing, can I hop in too??
I wanted to help you out Mbali but unfortunately I don't use the social media platforms you have mentioned below
Okay it's 0GA GFE ADEE
Yeah I understand
Well I can give you my number but I'll put it in a form of letters if you understand what I mean?
Ahh mara how did you propose we do all of this?
I don't have Insta as well😥😥 I'm sorry
I can't give out my personal number herr but you can search me on Instagram, Mbali P Nyabane. I am wearing a cropped shirt and have braids, you can send me a message
Don't have face book 😖😖😖😔😔
And maybe we can help each other out plus I have bonus chapters of Timeless that I want you guys to help me edit and maybe add a few other stuff that you may want to read on the story
Hi guys for those who want to help, you can search my name on Facebook which is Mbali Nyabane, my profile picture it is me, I am wearing Fundza t-shirt and their bucket hat you can hala at me there❤️
Hi Mbali. I am also a writer and it will be an honor to help you out .I am honest and I promise I won't steal your work and make it mine. So if you haven't found someone who will help you,I am available.
Ncooh man baby girl u are such a amazing author you are hearing this straight from Tee-sixx ❤️❤️🔥
May I help pls cause I want to also write a book and I also need help with my writing skills as well😊😊😁😁so if you don't mind may I help?
I need one person who will help me edit and read my stories before they can be published here on Fundza and I need someone who won't steal my stuff and publish it as theirs, I want someone who is trustworthy and I need an honest opinion not someone who will sugarcoat the truth, basically you will be a beta reader ... So who can help me out?😩
Yessss❤❤❤❤
Yes, I accept😊❤️❤️
Mbali love your stories 😊😊😊you know what I've never had a favourite author.....but now.....will you be mine ?❤❤😂😂❤❤
Wow Mbali Nyabane I don't know how to praise you but you the best amazing 💓💗 author ever ... your books are amazing
Thanks Morgan🙏🏽❤️❤️😊
Thanks Mbali, for always coming through with the stories🙏🏼🙏🏼❤️
Timeless is out❤️
Florence Ingwani Thank you❤️, It will probably be out this week
When are you realising the timeless or I just missed it ❤️❤️
Mbali you books are amazing.. You are one of the Authors 🤟❤️. I love all of your good works
So there's a book that I am writing but before it can come here to fundza I'll write it on Facebook book first it is called Friends with Benefits❤️ Maybe you will enjoy it
Thandy Pilusa Thank you so much🙏🏼❤️
Hy Mbali i am a big fan of your work and i am obsessed with reading all the stories you write
Masego M Thank you😊❤️ and High five✋🏼
Florence Oppong I write about what I fantasies about the most, how I would want my life to be like you know and how my boyfriend will be like, maybe sweet and caring, overbearing or kinda both
And I write what I wanna read, many books that I wanna read are not they I would want them so I write what I want to read but I also add some personal things. You should ask yourself, what types of books you want to read then you'll flow in whatever you decide to write
Mbali I love your books you should really consider publishing. I am now your new fan ❤.High five Mbalz🖐
Mbali your books are so cool 😭😭❤❤how do you write books help me pls if you don't mind -❤❤❤
I'm not even sure how Timid love came out so fast but anyway I have already sent Timeless it will probably be out next week maybe, maybe not but if not then try be ready for Tender love❤️
💃💃💃asbonge!!! ☺️
❤️😍🥺😔❤️😍🥰💞💞
Have you ever considered publishing? I for one will buy your books 🤞🏼🤞🏼
I love all your stories ❤️❤️
can't wait!
So I am about to put up a story that is totally differently from my point of writing but I love it and I enjoyed writing it hopefully you will also enjoy it
It is called Tender love, so be on the look out for that one❤️
Pastry lover I don't know, I already sent it to Fundza, it will be upto them but hopefully next week
Thanks Mbali 🤣❤
When is timid love coming???
Ps. Love your books
Masego M Lol ofcouse😂, Dusk 1, 2, 3 , 4, 5, ^6 which is called Hunt in the dusk and then there is Volume 2 Of the Dusk which is Dusk 1 vol 1, 2 and the last one is volume 3 I hope that helps ❤️
💃💃💃asbonge!!!!
Mbali Nyabane :Hey please explain the dusk series in order because I am stuck I don't know which one is after what pls explain them in order 😅
Lilly Mbuli It is out🎉🎉
Lilly Mbuli I sent them an email, and they said they have a backlog so I guess there'll be a lot of waiting I guess
Mbali I'm extremely disappointed 😔even words cannot describe how I'm so disappointed I'm losing hope
Lilly Mbuli Me too
I'm so disappointed 😔😤😠
Yhooooo mbali Nyabane mina I love you and your stories. Angisena skhathi somjolo lately like your stories are keeping me busy shem. Since am doing matric, after studying and all shit ngiyaz ukuthi around 19:00 I must read your stories since it's a habit. Am now becoming a book worm. Ngapha nomumtu wam ucabanga ukuthi ngiyamjolela ngoba am frequently busy with my phone. Just wanna say we are all here for you. Please continue writing. I fuck'n love your stories.
Inam Inam I'll try to write it, maybe something will come to mind, probably soon.....
Lilly Mbuli I don't know why it is taking so long but what I know is that they don't work on public holidays so maybe next week but I am already losing hope cause well🤷♀️ but with I'm in love with my kidnapper I don't know basically my mind refuses to function when I see that there are parts of my stories that Fundza don't want to publish for some f'ed up reason😒 once they release that story of Time I can then allow myself to write the other parts of the stories, but I'll send them the email maybe after they will publish, but I'll be keeping my fingers crossed in the mean time
Ay ay ay Mbali! When is Time being released we are dying for it to be released and what are you going to do with I'm in love with my kidnapper will you continue writing it or part 3 was the last one? 🤔
Inam Inam you must be patient
Mbali can you plz release 🙏 Part 4 of I'm in love with a kidnapper
Ok Mbali 😍😘😘😘
Lilly Mbuli There is still another part of Knightfall I just haven't had the energy to write it not until they publish all the stories I have sent to them. After all the new stories then I'll be able to focus on the parts of other stories
Okay thanks for the explanation I get it now 💕...knightfall ended so unexpectedly so after finishing Time will you continue where you left off???
Lilly Mbuli I had an exam and I wanted to figure out what to write about and if I wanted a little bit more of a series type of stories like Dusk, or just standalone stories that kinda meet somewhere but even if the other part was not there it will still make sense you know... Basically the break was about that, but I'm back now😊❤️
💃💃💃I'm over the moon ☺️ I'm so glad to hear that you will stick with us iyoo imagine the pain and boredom I will be feeling it's a no no.... What was the break about???
Bokang Sedutla Hopefully this week, but when it is out I'll post here
Lilly Mbuli I was on a break for a little bit, but I am not going anywhere not anytime soon I promise
Mbali when is the next book of broken vessel going to come out???
Yoo Mbali you don't know how glad am I that you are back I thought I've lost one of the greatest authors in fundza geeez ...
Yoo Mbali you don't know how glad am I that you are back I thought I've lost one of the greatest authors in fundza geeez .... plz check out the comments below the broken vessel
Lilly Mbuli Hey eish I know but I have managed to publish Blood Vessel 3 weeks back and I sent through another story cakked Time just waiting for Fundza to publish since it will be almost a month now since I sent the story, hopefully they'll soon publish
Hi Mbali ☺️ how are you I hope you are well it's been a while since you last released any books and I am wondering when will you release books I'm dying of suspension and curiosity. Please reply and I have a lot of things that I would like to discuss with you 😏
Hi Morgan, Eyy not anytime soon. I am currently busy with my upcoming exams but after that stress of studying then I'll write❤️
It's been a while, are you writing anything or you waiting for the book to be released???? 😟
Search Mbali Nyabane
Yeah I do
Thanks mbals you are a great author
Thank you hun 2 books meaning I need to get comfy cause I about yo dive in right now!! 💃
And so is Knightfall 2, what a nice way to start a new year 🎉 Be ready for more stories ❤️
Night rise is out❤️
I'm in love with my Kidnapper 3 is out❤️ and happy holidays 🎉❤️
Fundza is understaffed, So don't come for me, I already sent all 3 books that needed to be sent, starting with I'm in love with my kidnapper, The night rise and Knightfall.. So bear with me but hopefully soon they'll publish one of the 3❤️❤️❤️
❤️❤️❤️❤️ Okay Lilly, I'll be waiting
Thanks alot your reply means the world to me... I'll try writing according to how you advised me to then I'll get back to you once I made progress ☺️
@LilyMbuli When I write I don't plan I just write, everything will come on my mind as I type, and I become the characters that I am writing, I bring out my feelings at how I would feel if such and such happened to me, If the character had to be sad then I become sad and so forth but mostly I write what I would want to read or see on TV and I try to relate to people.
I have read so many books about Americans and I wanted to write about our daily lives to be honest there ain't many books about SAns. I can suggest that when you write don't think too much cause you will end up not knowing what to write next, let the words come to you and if you are stuck take a break and do something else or read a book, watch a movie or something and you will get an inspiration and you will write again and put emotions in your story don't write for the sake of writing, write something that YOU would also want to read or possibly see on TV and don't try and copy other people's styles bring out your own, when you pen everything down put you in it and you will see that the stories will become much much better and you will flow more as you write and sorry for the looong text 🙏🏼😊 But I hope this will help you with your writing ❤️❤️
@LilyMbuli to be honest with the Night Riss I have started writing it but I don't know how to continue with it I have a writers block😭but I'll try to write it🤞🏼 As for the fan you will see when it is published I have mentioned their name❤️ Knightfall 2 is coming just that Fundza is slow at publishing they can spend a whole day without posting the stories which will mean I will have to wait another day or perhaps even another week, but I check every single day if they have published, because I want to be done with writing before Christmas, I'll continue again next year but I will push into making sure that all is written before next week❤️🤞🏼❤️
Hi Mbali ☺️ I wanted some tips and advice on how to write stories just like you do, how do you do it I've been trying to write my own stories but I just end up being clueless... You see I told you that you inspire me so much that I want to become a great writer just like you 🌼😍....
☺️ happy 😊 but why so long, wasn't it supposed to be the night rise first then the nightfall??? And if I may ask who is that fan please let me know I'm dying to know... Sorry I didn't great you first it's the excitement kicking in you know me and books are best friends... I hope that you are okay wherever you are ☺️😍❤️
Just a quick side note- I am excited to announce that there will be a 3rd part of I'm in love with my kidnapper, hopefully it will be out sometime this week, it has been inspired by one of the fans❤️
Lilly Mbuli, Okay, The night rise will be released after the Knightfall, it has been way over due😊
Hi Mbali ☺️ how are you hope that you're doing great.🌼😍 Eish sorry for the mistake it's a typing error... I left a comment under I fell in love with my kidnapper 2 tell me what do you think.... And if I may ask when are you releasing the night rise I am dying for it to be released 😢😢😭😭😓
Hi Mbali ☺️ hiw
Otshepiloe Rearabetswe Moeketsi ☺️☺️☺️☺️ Me too, It's one of my favorite too❤️
Emihle Maqoqa, ☺️ Don't worry soon probably next week or a week after, I submitted right this second, so there will be no more waiting ❤️☺️
Part 3 of I'm inlove with my kidnapper ❤️❤️🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏Pleaaase😭😭😭
@Mbali Nyabane I love dusk 💍🥺🥺
Hunted 2 is out♥️
It is Knight fall😂, Hunted 2 will be out this week I am waiting for Fundza to release it and Knightfall will follow right after❤️
Hello Mbali ,
When are you going to post hunted 2 and also that story about changing kings i forgot the name . Thanks
I used I'm in love with my kidnapper
Thato Bokgobelo Awww thank you ❤️ which story did you use
You're so talented I used one of your stories to retell at school and got full marks
❤️❤️❤️❤️ I saw them @Lilly Mbuli and tgey are really amazing
Hi Mbali how are you, hope that you're good.. No problem if I could do more to show my appreciation I would 😘 Yesterday you replied to my message so I left ideas for you to see under the comments of I'm in love with my kidnapper 2 tell me what you think about them
Love your no.1 fan
Lilly 🌼
❤️❤️❤️❤️🥺 You going to make me shed a tear, thank you for the kind words ❤️🙏🏽
Oh thank you you're the best you don't know how much I've been dying to hear this I'm so glad I love books so much and yours are the best you're talented shame 🌠😍😍
Lots of love from your number 1 fan
Lilly
Lilly Mbuli,😊😊 Soon I promise, I will release both of them🤞🏼
And part 3 of I'm in love with my kidnapper please 🙏
Please release the night rise😳😳I just can't wait any longer 😘😘
Which part 3 are you talking about
Bokang Sedutla 😊😊😊😊 I'll definitely check it out❤️
Seems like a lot of people want part 3, I'll consider writing it but I don't know how to start or where to start, since this story is for y'all I am open for any kind of opinions that you may have and I promise to write the book based on them, so how do you want it to be like? And no opinion is too little or too unimportant 🤞🏼 Besides this story is for all of you❤️
@Mbali Nyabane remember when u said i must tell u ify poem is published well it's out and it's titled "bophelo ke ntwa"
Wow you're really talented ♥️
Morgan Rice, I don't know, when I write I be the character that I am writing in that moment, if at the moment the character is sad I shall bring out my own sadness too and so forth, I don't just write I become the whole book and see myself as the characters I guess that helps in a way I suppose 😊 I hope this helps❤️
How do you do it? Bringing each character to life, It's like I can see the characters and what they do, wow you are awesome 🥺❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I'm in love with my kidnapper 2 is out!❤️
Thube Mbhele Shabangu 😭😭 Me too, I'm crossing my fingers 😩
They must hurry I'm waiting for it
Lusy, I'm waiting for fundza to publish it hopefully during this week🙏🏽
@Mbali Nyabane , when are you posting I'm in love with my Kidnapper Part 2?
Usually I wait a week but if I opened it and edited it then I'll wait another week on top of that, so possibly I can say approximately 2 weeks the latest can be 3 full weeks, but if it takes longer than that I'll suggest you email them and they will publish it.
For it to be published
Wait for?
Mbali I have review a story how many weeks should I wait
Thanks
Sinikeziwe Gumede 😊😊😊 I'll definitely do that
Mbali I also write stories you can search my name ☺️
Can we please have the night rise.when is it coming 😭😭
Retshepile Masiteng, Probably next week or week after that depending on Fundza❤️❤️ Aww mara thank you🥺😩
When I 'm in love with my kidnapper part2 realised I am yearning for it anyway I love you the best writer ever after William Shakespeare
Sinikeziwe Gumede 😊😊😊 You making me blush yaz mara🤭❤️❤️❤️ Thank you
Thank you Mbali you are the best I am looking forward for your new stories I am a big fan when you publish a story just know I will read it and comment and like💖
Sinikeziwe Gumede sorry I missed your comment🙏🏽, no I write everything at once like I start a book from chapter 1 till the end, the chapters you see here are made by Fundza somehow I hope this helps I don't know how to explain it better
Mbali please answer my question
@Bokang Sedutla They take time to publish, it may take a week or two weeks depending on your luck, but they'll sure publish it❤️ when it is out please tell me I'll be happy to check it out😊
@Mbali Nyabane i already did that about a week ago and my poem is still in review so I'm wondering why it is taking so long. Pls continue I'm in love with my kidnapper and dusk cos i love them and if u continue writing such good stories i will support u cos u are now one of my favorite authors ❤️❤️❤️
Mbali Nyabane I love your stories you are awesome I am looking forward to your stories I want to ask you how do you do this do you write all this chapters and write again your stories?
Thube Mbhele Shabangu 🥺🥺😩 hearing such words keep me going don't worry I'll keep writing, hoping to see your name in my future comments ❤️❤️❤️🙏🏽🙏🏽
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Mbali you're so talented but my favourite stories are: Dusk and How u fell in love with my kidnapper. Continue writing and I'll continue supporting you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
@BokangSedutla click on menu you will see love writing and click on it and right at the top right corner you see start writing
I hope this helps
Mbali I love ur books, especially Dusk ❤️❤️. How do we get to write and publish books on FunDza?
👏👏👏❤️ you so talented , I'm a huge fan of your work 🔥😻 my fav is Dusk 🔥🔥🔥 you really went all out there!
I wonder what you have for us in store now? I love all your books ❤️ And I will definitely read another one if does come out ❤️❤️❤️❤️
for me it's all the parts of Dusk and If love was easy💜💖💜🦋
Dusk 5 please 😁
Dusk 5 plz❤️🥰
Lovely work❤❤❤
I really love your pieces 😊😊 plz give us part 3of "If love was easy"