This is the end for both Melusi and Melokuhle💔 and the end for I’m in love with my kidnapper.

This goes to show that when you have a good partner don’t mess it up because you will live to regret it.

I shall right about the 2 finding their way, and their relationships but their story will no longer fall part of I’m in love with my kidnapper meaning that their story will now have a different title.

Because for obvious reasons she will no longer be in love with her kidnapper.

Did you know that I have over 30 stories here on Fundza so go check them out😁❤️🙏🏽

To be honest if I was Melo I wouldn’t take back Melusi after he had cheated on me, but I want to give you guys a chance to decide on what should happen.

If Mel and Melo get back together then I continue their journey on the I’m in love with my kidnapper meaning there will be part 6 but if you decide that they don’t mend things then there will be a new title. (I hope I make sense)

Some of the comments I have received on part 4

Mbali Nyabane Can we get teasers of what will happen I’m eager to know what happens 😭😭😭

Vukosi Tshabalala

Part 5 please 😭😭

Vukosi Tshabalala

Awesome 👍 it’s been a really great story well done.

Joanne Smit

Waiting for part 5 .loving the story very much 🌹🌹🌹,keep up the good work ….

Thembeni Nzimande

Exe. I’m waiting for I’m in love with my kidnapper 5. It’s a good story. It’s my first time enjoying reading like this. It’s dope

Oratile Kwenji

yAZ ngabe waz ngendlela ngikthanda ngayo bbes🥺💖.. I luv u so mÜçH 😘💖🥺..

Bianca Mosia

I like the story,it is an eye opener and comforter,pls continue writing, you are the best author, God bless you.

Tebogo Modise

This story 🥰 was really good and I can’t believe I will be sleeping late and tomorrow the is school, I just know that your stories never disappoint

Thandy Pilusa

Please continue with the story please I beg

Daisy

What a very interesting story but reminding how cruel and ungrateful man can be

Tracy Mojapelo

But she doesn’t of course. I just think she deserves better then a man that knew what he was doing was wrong but did it anyway.

Micayla Swartz

The story was awesome. I’ll be waiting for part5. Maybe Melo could fall for a guy at university and Mel would do everything in his power to get her back.

Micayla Swartz

The story is and was amazing it was full of drama I loved it you do know your work @Mbali and you are a flower in writing indeed cause your blooming

Kanyi . N Kanyo

Can’t wait for part five well since you say we can suggest ideas I was thinking maybe Zandile falls into a coma or something after attempting to Kill melokuhle And Steve finds out and causes an explosion in Zandile’s car , Melo meets a new friend at varsity whom is a guy and they become close and Melusi tries everything to get her back in his life.

Kanyi . N Kanyo

It felt like i was watching a movie 💗💗can’t wait for part five

Celimpilo Mtungwa

Can’t wait for part 5

Zanele Mathonsi

I can’t wait for part 5 what a great story ,I enjoyed every word in it

Beauty Mashimane

NYC story Mbali I can’t wait 4 part 5.Ayabhala ntombazane I luv ur work keep it up💃😘engathi umsebenzi wakho ungaphumelel ungagcin lakuFunDza

Nelisiwe Ngema

It’s actually a nice story I have read at some point it’s our reality I can’t wait to read chapter five My suggestion is that before Melokuhle could give in let it be a struggle let it be more interesting but let it be a forgiving path ..

Roulina Ramotsoko

Wow ❤️☺️That was dope 😍 it was amazing and heart throbbing with every emotions 💜💘

Bavuyile Dzanibe

I was planning to read a chapter or two but ended up finishing the story. It’s 1:26 lol. I really enjoyed your story; you’re an amazing writer. I kind of don’t want Melokuhle to get back with Melusi though, I feel that she deserves better than someone who was happy to cheat on her on their honeymoon, but off course you are the author and I’ll be satisfied with whatever you choose to do. Keep up the good work.❤️

Londiwe Manzi

Bravo! Keep up doing the good work Mbali 🤍I enjoyed every chapter 🥰🤞😍🔥I really can’t wait for part 5 🤍. You are the best Mbali 🤍

Tlhokomelo Moeti

Ooh can’t wait for part 5❤❤☺

Farida Mokoatle

Bravo 👏🎉☺️🌟

Lilly Mbuli

Not as I planned but definitely worth it 😍

Lilly Mbuli

Cant wait for the next part very interesting and great story love it so much keep on writing good entertaining stories😊😊🔥🔥

Keegan Pieterse

Plz tag me when part 5 is ready 🥺❤️❤️💯🙏

Maserame Mosia

I loved the story ❤🔥, I can’t wait for part 5🥺❤🔥

Fargo III😈

Can’t wait

Cavier Cavier 💋

Cant wait ❤❤❤

Cavier Cavier 💋

Wow this was good but the end left me with a question mark btw I can’t wait for part 5

Masego M

I love your work 👌 I can’t wait for part 5❤️❤️❤️

Thembi Nkosi

Plz bring Melo and melusi together they belong together💖💖💖💖💖

Ashley Svinurai

Wow this story is wayy interesting+the father did this. I enjoyed the story really much but I thought Zandile was a reserved girlfriend, but anyways keep up the good work 👍👍👍

Twilly Sweet

I love this wow especially the explicit scenes just amazing

Jackoline M

I love you work Mbalz, you’re one oy favorite authors ❤️💯. I can’t wait for part 5..

Khanyo Majola

What a story, can’t wait for part 5🥰♥️

@ALORA💋

Or a fantasy novel

Tlhonolofatso Salomane

Could you please write a supernatural novel

Tlhonolofatso Salomane

You should definitely publish a book, I want hard covers of your books, I will read them until the papers get ruined😂 I can’t wait for Dusk I’m curious about Thandiwe

Morgan Rice

I meant part 5 eish didn’t notice

Thandeka Mphambani

♥️♥️♥️🔥 I was still enjoying the story can’t wait for part 6 keep up the good work nontombi intle into yakho nono

Thandeka Mphambani

Can’t wait for part 5 😘😘♥️

Khaukanani stella Nethenzheni

Youre a brilliant writer… i could imagine every line felt like i was watching a movie❤❤ We shall wait for part5 but dont take too long now… Lots of love❤

Dineo Masinga

This was just perfection, I can’t wait for part 5. You are very talent I don’t wanna lie😭👌❤️

Morgan Rice

I love this story can’t wait for part 5

Salvation Salane

Love the story❤❤we Mbali wena ave umuhle umsebenzi wakho…can’t wait for part5.

Chumza♡♡ Fumbata

I Can’t Wait For Part 5 , I Think Melusi & Melokuhle’s Marriage Will Survive This.♥️

L.E Masombuka

(Don’t get mad if you don’t see your name, you probably commented after I had already sent the story to Fundza to be published and I unfortunately can’t edit)

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