Chapter 13 | FunDza

Authors Note -:

I want to thank you guys for the love you’ve shown me and also for the part 1 of this book hopefully you enjoyed this one too.

I thank you for the wonderful comments, I appreciate and love them all, after all you guys are the one’s who keep me going ❤️

I even remember a few names that were there from Dusk to here, I was glad to see your comments 🥺❤️❤️🙏🏽

Comments I received thus far >

This one and Dusk showing flames

Letty Hlambelo

What a lovely story! Please continue with part 2, i jusz cant wait😋😋😋😍😍

Desrey Motlasedi

Part 2 please!!!!!😥😥😥

Slindokuhle Mhlanga

When are you writing the second one ?

Lulama Vilakazi

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Wow You Deserve A Wooohh Shame

Trunishca Olyn

Yhoo bhabha your story is amazing please write part2 .❤❤🙏🏼

Asonele Busakhwe

❤❤❤❤u always deliver Mo Girl

Nompilo Ngubane

Good one mbalz as always you never disappoint mntase ❤️

Gugu Mphambani

Nice story, can’t wait for part 2

Letlhogonolo Maluka

♥️♥️♥️love is amazing yoh

Mercy Masemola

Can’t wait for part 2🙂❤️👌

Thuli Buthelezi

I’ve always loved your stories I will wait for more

Busie

Waiting for part 2👌

Chiliza lulamandwalane28@gmail.com

Thanks sweets waiting patiently for part 2👌

Tsholofelow Mokoaleli

All your stories ❤️👌. Waiting for P2

Viwe Sidubulekana

Wow whhat a Nice story♥️♥️♥️♥️👌

Busisiwe Biyela

When I said this story is boring I didn’t mean it 🤗 yho this was great can’t wait for part 2 😉😘

❤️lover❤️

I love your stories

Sphelele Zondo

Loved the story … it’s so great

Emihle Mgobhozi

Mbali this is exceptional. Who would have thought that love can find it way in this kind of situation. Brilliant 👏👏👏👏👏🙌

Song Wright

One of the best writer.i really enjoyed reading it book.if was love was easy ❤️dusk

Martha Matete

I really enjoyed reading this.. such great talent 🥺❤️🤸

Keitumetse Marishane

Nice one Mbali 🎆🎆🎆

terminater

Big up to you ..author❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️One of the best writers ….and by the way I already read all of the parts of Dusk and If. Love was easy

Nombuso Blose

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Mbali you’re so talented but my favourite stories are: Dusk and How u fell in love with my kidnapper. Continue writing and I’ll continue supporting you ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Thube Mbhele Shabangu

I sincerely apologise if I did not mention your comment🙏🏽

There’ll be no part 3, as for the next book I’ll see as time goes by if you wonder what I’ll write next keep checking my page mayhe twice a month and for the last time thank you all for the love and support ❤️

75 Responses

Great story darling ❤️‍🩹❤️

Sce…@gmai... · 4 months ago

Great story like always.....Mbali i love u🥰

Thuli Dweku · 6 months ago

Your truly talent your my second best since I read stories here in fundza 🥺🥰I love you 😊🙈

wes…@gmai... · 11 months ago

You are truly talented

mhl…@gmai... · 11 months ago

What I love the most about the story both part I and II your grammar, your line full of rhymes, I kept asking myself how did she managed to do it, wow! Nice story I will continue with part III and on keep up the good work!

Sthembiso Msezane · 11 months ago

This was amazing.lovely enjoyed it very much big up to u author ❤️❤️🤟

Duduzile Tembe · a year ago

Nc'oww this was very amazing soooo lovely Turns out love can unbend this n that n it can conquer anythin🌟g.Big up To u author ❤️❤️🤟

dud…@gmai... · a year ago

Wow nice story i so fortunate to read them back to back im drank in love with this story part 3 here i came

Sindi Zondi · a year ago

So today I spent my day reading your stories 🥰

Myeza Claire Luyanda · a year ago

Brilliant work.❤️

Siphiwe Sithomo · a year ago

Good job Mbalz

Chumza♡♡ Fumbata · a year ago

AMAZING

Masego M · a year ago

Part 3 please

Monique Adams · a year ago

Amazing love story ❤️❤️❤️❤️🦋

Velile Nhlapho · 2 years ago

Ncoo❤❤❤

Toroto Mkhize[Tyrœ] · 2 years ago

I ask sincerely for part 3 plz your stories are amazing

Daisy · 2 years ago

Wow.. amazing story indeed 😇❤️

Masesi Nkosi · 2 years ago

This is such a great story as they say love always conqueres all . ❤️🥺

Salvation Salane · 2 years ago

Ahh thank you ☺️🤗

Lilly Mbuli · 2 years ago

Wow😻 This story is amazing😻Part 3 plss❤️😻

Tshepiso Maphotho · 2 years ago

Wow you such an inspiration xeim😍

THANDEKA Ndaba · 2 years ago

Most*

Mbali Nyabane · 2 years ago

Lilly Mbuli, Unfortunately I have already submitted the story but you'll be gkad to know that I added modt of your ideas😊

Hi Mbali ok then as the story goes the will be a new character that will appear that will just turn things upside down its either it will be Melo's sister or one of Melusi's exes .....will continue later and sorry for replying late 🤗😘😍

It is an amazing story

Tinodaishe Mutanga · 2 years ago

Love this story

Please ignore Morgan🙄, she often likes to reply on my behalf when I don't see comments🙂 but yes you need to have sent everything by the end of next week

Just a quick update @Lily Mbuli I had started with the book and put yoyr suggestions 😊Since you said you had more ideas you can already share them❤️

I wanted something different not something that is already too out there, but I can see what I can do, how I can freestyle it with my writing.. But that is good you gave me something to think about actually and what's the rest of the idea???

Sorry,mistake at the end it's react.

Hi Mbali, thank you for replying so like I said I have lots of ideas so lets get started... Melo and Melusi their love is still strong,As time goes by Melusi realises that Melo is the one and decided to pop up the question,Melo agrees Melo is happy and emotional in this part They need to go and see the parents for their blessings as this a custom ,Melo still hasn't forgiven and gotten over what her parents did to her so this is hard to diggest but Melusi reaseans with her so at the end she agrees so they start the journey to seek blessings before they get married When they arrive it's time to face the music... The parents don't approve of the marriage. Melo leaves the house devastated by the news she and Melusi go back to where they came from . Weeks pass and Melo suddenly gains weight and later on gets sick, Melusi concerned and worried takes her to the hospital. Wait for it.... Melo is 16 weeks pregnant. They are both excited about the idea of being parents but Melo worries about how will the parents reach.....I'll continue so tell me what do you think??

@Lilly Mbuli You can start, I'd really love to hear some of your ideas❤️😊

Hi Mbali it's Lilly sorry I couldn't reply earlier I was at school... Ok I still can't believe you replied 😍😍I'm so happy I have lots of ideas just say the word and I'll brainstorm some ideas

...For the one's I didn't mention, if the reviews are going to cause havoc I might as well stop putting them🤷🏽‍♀️ hopefully that will solve the problem

Please note guys, I won't be able to put all of 50 something reviews, some are repetitive words I can't put one thing of for example *Part 2* over and over if I took one from all of those just know that I included your name in one of those words in my heart. It's like it's a competition whilst it's not, I just put reviews so that people can see that I noticed their comments but if it is going to bea thing of competition of whom I had put and whom I didn't then I can stop putting reviews, cause I literally can't put all comments and I did apologise for tge one

But it was good anyways ( from Sinikeziwe Gumede)

Nomusa Shezi · 2 years ago

Umh I don't see my name but it okay 💔🥲

Sinikeziwe Gumede · 2 years ago

Lilly Mbuli, Okay go on..

Part 3 please there I think you should write about Melo and Melusi getting married with the parents not agreeing to the marriage only to find out that Melo is pregnant... please reply then I'll tell you more

Part 3 pls, this story was exceptional

Bokang Sedutla · 2 years ago

Exceptional just Exceptional ❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯

Bukh Mashalaba · 2 years ago

Seems like a lot of people want part 3, I'll consider writing it but I don't know how to start or where to start, since this story is for y'all I am open for any kind of opinions that you may have and I promise to write the book based on them, so how do you want it to be like? And no opinion is too little or too unimportant 🤞🏼 Besides this story is for all of you❤️

Nice story Mbali sweetheart ♥️part 3 please😘😘

Mandisa Blose · 2 years ago

Hey Mbalz please consider writing part 3 maybe you can write about Melokuhle's parents dying or whatsoever but I really enjoyed your story it's lovely 💘💕💘💕💘💕💘💕

Thube Mbhele Shabangu · 2 years ago

Mbalz👌🏽😘love ur wrk cc...ur writing brings out da bst in me🤗thnx fr ths exciting prt 2💁🏼‍♀️I hv an important decision to mk😉 thnx Mbalz✊🏾

Bridget Silindile Sibiya · 2 years ago

😅bathong melos parents are insane imagine going to a mental facility for loving someone haibo

Dineo Ntsanyana · 2 years ago

This was amazing as usual loved it😍😘

Leean David · 2 years ago

Ncoooh this was wonderful

Zanele Mantame · 2 years ago

Part 3 plssss

Kayak · 2 years ago

Can we pls have par

Awesome love your stories

Wendy Mncina · 2 years ago

Give us more plizzzz 😍😍😍

Wendy Chiya · 2 years ago

You've done it again Mbali excellent work. I believe any genre would suit you coz you are best at this. You are creative,you make a reader be emotionally connected with the character and I just love your imagination. Please keep writing more and more and more books! @Morgan Rice I couldn't agree more

Nombuh Nombuh · 2 years ago

❣❣❣❣❣I love this book can u give us more 💋💋💋💋💗💗💗💗

Yandiswa Daniso · 2 years ago

Wow what a nice story ♥️you really are talented

Hlengiwe Khumalo · 2 years ago

Morgan Rice, Taking a break? Nah. I'm writing a book a different kind, like I said before I want to experiment with my writing see which genres I like you know from romance, or fantasy etc and see what suits me the most and what I am comfortable writing. You guys must expect a book soon probably next week or a week after that 🙈 And thank you guys for the wonderful comments ❤️

Wow 😩 You are an exceptional writer 😌 I'll constantly check if you have released anything, are you writing something or you taking a break? Anyway wonderful book ❤️❤️❤️ It's amazing how it's like I can see the characters like I am part of the story😩❤️

Morgan Rice · 2 years ago

You welcome; Love love love this book❤❤❤❤and you ; One of the best writers❤❤❤✌✌

Nombuso Blose · 2 years ago

My gal you have become my hero.... when I write my stories I make use that I do it the Mbali way but I'm not yet there, I think the more I read your stories the more I'll learn from the best which is you I love love love love love ur work ♥️♥️♥️💟💟💟💟😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘💖💖💖💖

Busie · 2 years ago

U more than welcome lv ....... keep on shining Author

Snenhlnhla Mhlongo · 2 years ago

Thanks Author ❤️ waiting for ur nxt work bcs wow, uyayenz into yakho💯 darling. Keep it up ✨💝

Viwe Sidubulekana · 2 years ago

You never disappoint ❤❤❤❤

Lindy Theledi · 2 years ago

Such an nice story part 2 pretty please😢

Heidi Geitjie · 2 years ago

Amazing ❣️

Zanele Mathonsi · 2 years ago

I have been patiently waiting for part 2 amazing mntase keep it up lots of love from me❤️❤️

Gugu Mphambani · 2 years ago

Amazing story I even want a part 3 and now I'll even read all your stories. Great author

Jaylah Edlly · 2 years ago

Wow 😍😍

Slindokuhle Mhlanga · 2 years ago

Amazing 💝💝💝💝💝

terminater · 2 years ago

❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Nosipho Ngema · 2 years ago

Amazing Mbalzz👌👌

Tsholofelow Mokoaleli · 2 years ago

Thank you guys for having the patience of waiting for the part 2🙏🏽❤️

Nice

Philiswa Khumalo · 2 years ago

Loved it from part 1 to 2 now I'm gonna wait for more stories to come❤️👌🙂

Thuli Buthelezi · 2 years ago

OMG!!I loved it actually I am amazed pretty please part three💞💞❤️❤️

Siphokazi Cele · 2 years ago

I just love it

Sophumelela Saul · 2 years ago