20 years later
Junior bought a house and Elizabeth became a psychologist and junior became the best doctor in town
Unfortunately Justine died junior and Elizabeth were happily together
THE END HOPE YOU ENJOYED
22 Responses
Good story but,try to work on writing you know practice makes perfect.........You didn't include nobuhle
I loved thee story I feel you bruh junior I am also 13 and would like to write stories but I don't have where they say start writing but definitely loved thee story multiplied by 10000000000000000
Anabo Tshezi it because it my first time and am 10 years old you see you can't compare yourself with me thank you for your negative comment
Junior you where rushing the story was good and get this, the title of your story doesn't put your story together, it would have been really good if you made it into a book or a play, write what you feel and as my friend says,"Go with the flow." Just slow down and be a bit detailed as you are writing okay?😄 but your story was nice