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Hope because she's a decisive & intelligent girl

privy chibwe · 8 months ago

Hope and Nomu and Zach ❤❤❤❤❤

Kudz · 8 months ago

My favourite character is Hope she follows her heart

Heidelberg Hartenzburg · a year ago

Gosh, l reely luvd this story... please keep writing max.

Kue M🤩 · 2 years ago

Torn between two people, def. Hope

Kue M🤩 · 2 years ago

Lemme search for the new story this is amazing!!!!! Max you're an amazing writer wow bro♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

Maria Ndlangamandla · 2 years ago

It was just amazing gosh❤❤

Leean David · 2 years ago

My fav character is Zack❤omg what a darling😭where can I find a soul like him

Yellowstone · 2 years ago

Where do l submit the the writing?

Zimkita Kwanini · 2 years ago

My favorite is Zack

Alexismax · 2 years ago

I like all the girls but my dav is Hope and ofcourse her cutie Zack.

Redd88 · 3 years ago

Thumbs up to the author thanks for the book its amazing and awesome too looking forward to Awesomes 2

Rendanie · 3 years ago

The Awesomes...are really awesome ...My favourite character(s) were Hope and Zack Hope:Her love life was complicated when her bestie Deevya came to show her light from her living nightmare... Zack:He is very nice and finally he he had to talk with hope about mmmhmm

Thandoo · 4 years ago

Awesome story. My favorite character was zack. He's a really good person. My favorite awesome is hope. When deevya shows her the truth about Simon, zack comes to the rescue and saves both girls from their misery.

BeanJ · 4 years ago

Can't wait for your second book luv ya 💖💋❣️

Lady girl · 4 years ago

Like the last chapter is too much but its my type of romance 🤣🤣🤣🤣

ham…@gmail.com · 5 years ago

This book is interesting

JosieKeyz · 5 years ago

this is the best book ever???

Thobilee · 6 years ago

For me I could say I relate to all off them lol because firstly let me start with Hope, what hope feels abouth Zack is what I felt with my height school bf bt he ws nt my first kiss, den he started treating me like prankhas dd with Deevya, and I acted like Deevya, Dan I become lesbian(bisexual) like Nomusa. Bt nw I meat a wonderful guy and I feel like Hope again

ler…@gmai... · 7 years ago

Can't wait for this story to continue .. Awesome story

Roscoe Joseph · 7 years ago

Woow I enjoyed it please write more

maria tshudi · 7 years ago

This book is a WOW!

Hope sarima · 7 years ago

I can really relate to Deevyah because there's this 1 relationship that i was in and the Guy i loved him bt he ddnt seem 2 like or love me the 1day he was hot and the other 1 pretended nt 2 even knw me he really broke my heart ....n i dnt think guyz realize wat they do 2 us how deeply it affects us ,i mean after that relationship my self esteem dropped drastically bt then i guess this is something we all have 2 go through....BT wat i think is the best key is forgiveness ...because i 4gave him long ago n i feel free

Refiloe · 8 years ago

I relate more with deevya. Difficult situation I'm in right now - my supposedly knight in shining armour ' has his days, he confesses undeniable love for me and i has fallen for him so hard. I hardly see him we have been together since the start of high school. He is my first and I stll dont understand 'dating & relationships' he doesn't give me much time now because he is busy. But those days which he isn't he comes to me and i feel like I'm the most luckiest girl to have ever met him. I love him even in the distance.. . I like someone else though. Someone who has bee asking me out since primary. I don't think i should. But i am a teenager right?! Feelings are quite inevitable. I want this new guy. I need my boyfriend. I like this new guy. I love my boyfriend. What on earth shall I do?! Fool around or stay with my alleged 'knight'. ..again what is love?! I can't tell anyone because I believe I can get myself outta anything. Pride kills.????? I loved the story BTW.

thee1 · 8 years ago

I really love the love between Zack and Hope L'Amour with an exotic surname

basie · 8 years ago

Ncoooohhh:-* this is sooooo great!!!where is my Zack???

Nontokomalo · 8 years ago

Awesome story I luvit

Lawtress · 8 years ago

I love this book got me Inspired ?

thando · 8 years ago

I love this book hot me inspired well?

thando · 8 years ago

I really love dis story it's so romatic

Teddy4??? · 10 years ago

I love love stories but the thing that really gets me thinking is why do characters in love stories always have it easy whereas we don't.

Blessedlady · 10 years ago

The story is awesome (x)

*#ff0000+Aishwaria+''LUSHY''* · 10 years ago

I totally (x)d the story.it was awesum

Shahieda · 10 years ago

Lindi & Nomusa :P

LITTLE+SATANIST+MEMBER+OF+ILLU · 10 years ago

This is one hell of a story.......i mean its so amazing i feel like read it once everyday 4 the rest of my days......I JCT LOVE IT .:D

_*c'mphiwe*_+A.K.A+*_MCkhonto_ · 10 years ago

It ws amazing:*

Gabriella-Sommy · 10 years ago

Fuk ths y dd it end lyk dc kanti mxn fuk it

sphesheyonce3306 · 10 years ago

It waz a great nd rometic story!i loved it..

#FF2750.+.+mErCy*#ff1995(*)369 · 10 years ago

*WOW WHAT A NICE NOVEL THUMBS UP TO THE AUTHOR*

lola · 10 years ago

What a romantic story:}.i'm feeling the romance.eish the story was amazingly rocking.i loved it:}

SOUL+PROVIDER · 10 years ago

Wooooow im spechles,

perfectly+distilled.vodka · 10 years ago

wht a good one i loved it so mch keep up the good wrk

Ta+sweger+ · 10 years ago

I cnt w8 for new chapter...

::::::::::::::::::+++++++o+l+g · 10 years ago

Its great and good as well as wounderful 4 us readers mcwah perfect story

#bb1997+sweet+barbie+bbz · 11 years ago

I lv da happy endin' wit zack and hope...OMG...i wish dat ws me

#dd0055//*/(H)NOLUTHNDOH(H)//* · 11 years ago

Wow l0ved da st0ry:)t trully relates 2 teenagerz...am a teenager maclf nd ths st0ry taught me alot

*#f…@ÃÂ · 11 years ago

It realy make me learn somethng

Mkhulu+bhekie · 11 years ago

It waz a great storry i rlly enjyed it

#ff0000.+.+.+*(H)(x)Hotdiva(H) · 11 years ago

Jojo jo nice 1

Belleza · 11 years ago

It was a great story

miss+jenniffer · 11 years ago

Hmmmn... This is one amazing, interestin & romantic story I've read.... Keep it flowing!!!!:D

Luvlybee · 11 years ago

Lindi n nomusa:? Damn datin a gal z. ........:~:}wordz cnt even describe t..... Les lyf z dope:P

.+*#800080/_%[:$]Thdï¿½ï¿½CuT · 11 years ago

THE BOOK WAS NCE THANX

(H)PRETTY(x)AKA(x)PRITT+GLUE(H · 11 years ago

Wow wht a brilliant story so well thought n creative

Mafuzeh · 11 years ago

This was one interesting story..just reflects a lot..nd i enjoyed d way it ended

Supa+Virus · 11 years ago

Lehlohonolo its a great story

(H)STEPHEN+BANTU+BIKO(x) · 11 years ago

tjo wt a story:)

:PLadyDâ¬urvez:P · 11 years ago

M nt realy into romantics. Bt i love a gud story and i cnt w8 for the next 1

<<+ROMâ¬Â¤+>> · 11 years ago

Wow,4me Zack z most fantabulus guy eva,he jst myd me realise dat patiance z d key 2d gate lv

Professor(fulpantie) · 11 years ago

There's one thing I am willing to know about all the exquisite characters. The RACE for each. Are they truely mixed up. I read different surnames. Can anybody help me out with that please:,

Chatterbox · 11 years ago

Wow dats the most awesome story ever. Really romantic.

(H)(*)fAsHioN+fReAk8-)(F) · 11 years ago

Irealy loved the story it was amazing:}and sweet

Nolih · 12 years ago

Dis stry ws epic,good,real n mst of all it ws awesome

#00c0c0LOV3(H)K!NG · 12 years ago

Wat a breath takng story i lvd it a lot great effords wel dne writer

Prudy · 12 years ago

The story was rily nyc,i(H)it very much,but i wud av prefrd a beta end to it,g8t job kip it up.

Sparkles · 12 years ago

Zacks is tln de truth...jst fllw ur heart.wht a nyc story

(*)KING+DUPE(*) · 12 years ago

Dat was a vry awosm story in deed iso lv it

Thando · 12 years ago

Its romantic. Tearz n laughter combined n its so real

Tina · 12 years ago

Tjo da stry ws gr8t especlly in da end

Mic+cute · 12 years ago

Gr8;)

2me · 12 years ago

Wat a gr8 story it was awesome

@Be…@;) · 12 years ago

I am Dissappointed by Simon, Hope was the one for him and now she is with the other boy too bad. I am happy for Hope and as for Nomusa the girly is secretive anyway great story...

LOTUS · 12 years ago

»woAh the story was great,i did not like end cause i want more,but anyway it was awesome.«

(*)princess+of+swagg(*) · 12 years ago

Wow i wnt mre it lft me speechls dats true i lve da storie its gr8 it shw hw lve tkes tym 2 find da ryt guy(H)

#8080ff*;-mrs+v.g+vandal+gal;- · 12 years ago

Great story loved it tooo bitesss

Lil+shorty · 12 years ago

It rocked!

Atash · 12 years ago

WOW WAT A STRY CLNDT LEAV MA PHN 4 A MINT BCUZ I JST CHLDNT STP RDNG.2 TUMBZ UP

Tears+of+happiness · 12 years ago

I loved it, it kinda reminded me of my 1st kiss.

8-)…@tÃ+bÃ¦bÃ¨8-) · 12 years ago

This story rocks bt 2 be fair im a sucker 4 romance storys like these 1s

DJ+Lovely+kid · 12 years ago

Geez wat waz dat dc z 1 hell of a stry it left me buzzng wt L.O.V.E

(H)Dynamite+:D+*black+pearl+al · 12 years ago

Wow gr8 story,it takes u on a journey u hev neva bin

Bonang! · 12 years ago

W0w... I l0ved it:'( totaly in tears

ZÃ¸ÃÂ¡Ã¤Ã§+LÃ¸Ã±ÃÃ½ · 12 years ago

It rockd..rly enjoyd t..hwp da nxt stry wl b gud...

…@dy+@e! · 12 years ago

Great story funny wat a lot happens wen 1 is nt payin attention.true lve story kasi way

(x)(m)8-)LIL+IMP:} · 12 years ago

Love is blind she ddnt realz dt the rite person ws dr al alng...dam i lv happy endngs, keep up de gd wrk yoza

GODESS · 12 years ago

Its stry rockd it was totaly awesome nd i cud totaly relate 2 hopes situation

Miss+unitd+bapey · 12 years ago

It's a gr8 story

Â»KiNg~CYRUSÂ« · 12 years ago

I think it was a really gud story u kn0w and uhm happy endings:)

Poetry(H)Devotee · 12 years ago

It was really really nice , romantic with all suspense to keep calling to read further wow wat an inspirational novelistic work of ART - Greaaaaaaat! (H)

Wabza · 12 years ago

It was great

Veronique · 12 years ago

Wow...lvly gud stoty...i fil lyk it was wrttn by me..i lyk it,keep it up

Â»FELE-GUYÂ« · 12 years ago

Dis waz a lvly story ,dat showz hw 2 get inlv wif sum1 nt 2 b atractd by hez/her beauty. U mst 1st knw de person very wel...it waz an interesting story

Lil+pheonic+0717349139 · 12 years ago

Wow wt a lvly story ...great endn

(x)(H)xQUEEN(H)B(x) · 12 years ago

Dis iz da amazng stry i lv it

sexy.diva · 12 years ago

Well what an amazing stry, we'd lyk 2 read more stories smilliar 2 dc one as teenagers.

**Hustin(+Scelo+)** · 12 years ago

Dìs iz a grt stry,it explnz teen lyf nd it shwz us wat hapnz in lyf.

LESTY+ROCK(x) · 12 years ago

An amazing story what a happy ending id lyk 2 read sm more plz

Brandilicious · 12 years ago

Well i did n0t c tht c0ming, zack and hope. But they r suit 2 be 2gethr.

T'cov!llï¿½ · 12 years ago

(F)This book is defnitly on my BEST BOOK FOREVA list really it was realy good. Thou what happend with nomusa and lindi? (F)

.+Toxic(x)Angel · 12 years ago

Yoh! Da story ws amaizing. U jst get involvd its hard 2 even stop reading. Even worse when sm1 interups, a phone cal or smthng! Thee best! Keep up da gud work!

Lessy{^^,} · 12 years ago

I can so relate to this story bcz alot,of wat hapend has hapend to me...ALOT! great book..waitng for e nxt one:)

Â®ue-Â®ue · 12 years ago

I strongly felt an instant connection with HOPE,that's one character i related to the most... I once liked the wrong guy but in the end i found my soulmate... Love you chocolate

/…@y-2/ · 12 years ago

The awesomes?...awesome...amazng....brilliant!!!!! Jst a few words 2 describe ths mobibook..

Alyson+Kanez · 12 years ago

I lv.. I lv d story, it ddnt cross my mide dt. Hope wll end up wth Zack. Interesting. :D

Mrs+Thango · 12 years ago

Wow....i mean wat more can i say...it was incridble...the drama...the love affairs ..and the KISS....:}...JST WISH THEY IS A PART 2 THOR..

>Â¤BLACK^BARBIEÂ¤< · 12 years ago

I thnk ix realy an exciting read,a bit sad but am sure there's more to it,the sadness will soon go away;now that zack is on the picture

#ff6523ThAnDoW8osWeEt+LiPZz:) · 12 years ago

THIS WAS EXCEPTIONALLY PERFECT:D IT WS AMAIZING YO WOW....IT JST GT ME SPEECHLESS

Lil+Missy · 12 years ago

I'm more related 2 Deevya,i can't let go my bf,i wana dump hm bt how i dnt knw.hs jst lyk Deevya's boyfriend

~Toxiq-Candy~ · 13 years ago

Deevya she was at the bad situation and i feel sorry for her. i also want to know dat zack and hope are in love or is dat hope has stress of simon. this story is so hot

Gotcha · 13 years ago

I lv it...cnt wait 4 1 february.

Nikiwe · 13 years ago

I enjoy ths story s mch nd i lv thm nd i wnt a story tht tlk's abt love nd hw 2 lv sm1

AYOBA+~+T · 13 years ago

Nt a cool ending,what hapened 2 Nomusa nd Deevya.I loved the story but what a STUPID ending jho.

:P....JaDÂ¡E+gAlz....:P · 13 years ago

Wow..im blown away :):}..wt a wndrful,simple,rmntc nd fun story..it made me what 2read more 2 knw wt hppnd nxt..nd i lovd da endn .so nyc ..wel dne...i cnt w8 4 ada 1:D

Retha · 13 years ago

Lovely story;)

Jada · 13 years ago

I knw the stories are nice but we want more this old ones are starting to bore us

Sexy+t · 13 years ago

gr8 n intrstng story.. so its true smtyms the love of ur lyf is jst ryt undr ur nose u jst need 2 figue thm out al in gud tym! big ups i lovd it!!

Sunshine · 13 years ago

I thnk ZARK has a gud eye 4 a gud gal ,nd i thnk deavya dserves better nd as 4 nomusa nd lindi u go gals overal th stry s ratd 10 out of 10

Jenifer+hudsn+bt+much+cuter · 13 years ago

This is one of its kind, i feel like reading it none stop. I wonder whats gona happen next wth our new couple. This is rocking. _/I LOVED THIS ONE/_

Thiboza · 13 years ago

That was the best and the most romantic story ever!!! I hope my first kiss will be the same like that only aot better(x)

(*)…@Ð§Ä@+B@B3Ð§(G)(* · 13 years ago

I love these storiez... They always get me into the mood

D.T.H.BOY · 13 years ago

I loved the story..the drama..the romance..nd the 3 awosomes friendship is jst amaizing...wel done

Jane · 13 years ago

Wow t wz vry kwl n so romantic..remindz me of Bella n Edward in twilight

Cutty · 13 years ago

Amazing story there,it was interestn enuf,kip it up tjo,mwa.GOD BLES

Lee Tshabalala · 13 years ago

stry was lekka n e endin was jus perfct..

Nash... · 13 years ago

i hv neva read a nyc teenage story like ds,wen lukin wth a difrent eye, i thnk it can also make a teenchick flick best south afrcn movie. ds s da best of da best. i rate it ten of ten. kip it up

Stunt · 13 years ago

Wow! It was realy awesome

Jaymaxi · 13 years ago

Wat a grt story nd plz plz du kp m intouch n sweat striez lyk thz

Lil+nicky · 13 years ago

Beautiful Story

*MaKhanyile* · 13 years ago

Wow! Wat a lovely,amazng,romantic story 2read this was 1opening story that wil make a person 2realise that u dnt hav 2go far 2find happiness &love cause if you take a closer look u may realise that what u want is exactly next 2u......thanx 4the story *wink*

Lazation · 13 years ago

Wow da storie rocked, i reali enjoyed da end n i wish der was part 2 of it.

Candy+lipz · 13 years ago

Quite consoling n vry interestn.i wish dt da book ws in my bare hands 2 read it in person

TWISTED · 13 years ago

THAT WAS THE BEST STORY OF MY LIFE! I NEVER EXPERIENCED SUCH A WONDERFUL THING I CAN RELATE TO!!!:):)

*_!!!aNgRy/CrAzY+bItCh!!!_* · 13 years ago

Tjo da story wz so nyc atlast hpe fwnd true lv

(H)love+portion(F) · 13 years ago

It was the most romantic story ever, cn tht happen in rly lyf nd telmi ws Zack hot, coz is a sweet nyc nd wndrful guy

(F)KIM(H) · 13 years ago

I wish Hope nd Zack date.nd Deevye finds anada gud man.

SWEETNES · 13 years ago

This book rocks i lvd it u guys r de best

Katlego · 13 years ago

Wow t ws interestng i enyd t a lot!u r da stars.cnt wyt4part 2.

Marvy · 13 years ago

THIS STORIE IT IS SO INTERESTING

Mr+knw-it-all · 13 years ago

That was the most amazing story. Gosh.. I love the end it makes me want to read more. Its so romantic

..Pr!nCess+ChUcKs.. · 13 years ago

Wow!!!! i was bord 1day in mxit and i red dis story i had found my self nt answerng my frnds coz i was busy readng dis amayzng story .i wll wait part 2

Garls+men · 13 years ago

I think i realised that i am not the only one whose heart have been brocken thank you for an AWESOM story

Vuyisile · 13 years ago

fantastic stry it had me hooked nw i jst need a prt 2...wht a stry sme of us cn relate 2

:}MiSs+AlL+aBoUt+LoVe:} · 13 years ago

Da bst stowi i'd eva read,big ups 2 da author

LEONARDO · 13 years ago

If only i could get my hands on prakesh*agitated* as for simon, it ws his loss newai. Da dude jus neva sees a gud thng whn he sees it.

Bukworm · 13 years ago

Quite interest and jaw droppin. Lv da drama. Cnt wait 4 part2

rudeboiP-) · 13 years ago

Wow gyz i rly enjyd da story, i jst wish dat there waz prt2 of t.... Thnx 2 da wrtr of da stry

$Nawty+gal$ · 13 years ago

The story ws very gr8:D,i realy enjoyd it

OkaShabba · 13 years ago

i so lvd th story! th awesome rocks! t so so super very awesome!:):):):):):) i lvd t i lvd t i lvd t!

(H)SEX+SPECIALIST(H) · 13 years ago

Omgawsh! Im nt a person 4 readn ani stories,, but yorr,, ths st0ry was klas:(:)!..

Â»(*)DrÂ¡zzÂ¥+*DÂ®Â£W*(*)Â« · 13 years ago

Wat a good story i neva ever heard write u a dbest

MR+NOKWANDA(H)(H) · 13 years ago

I loved it! I've been reading all my life and that was really good - and that's saying something.

Mia · 13 years ago

Wow!!:Oda storie rock guys,those galz they rilli sumthng

ï¿»SENYORE+ll · 13 years ago

W0w wt a st0ry i l0ved s0na evn th0u it ended in a wierd way n0musa is lyk thee best;)

X0x0 · 13 years ago

Wow im impressed.im speechless,da author i respect u coz u r da best.it ws awesome n hd a very happy ending.on a scale of 10 id say 10 out of ten.zack cn b a P.I,How cum Hope ddnt see da love Zack hs for her instead settle 4 simon?

Tbo+Touch · 13 years ago

Oh my wrd.the story is rockn n wow that feelng of being inlv its great n its educatnal at th sm tym.i

Heaven+sent · 13 years ago

Talk about cliche'

Wasp101 · 13 years ago

The story was very nyc i enjoy'>d it,nomusa n 'hope' rock..love u guys!keep da gud work

$upÃ¨r.s.w0mÃ¨n · 13 years ago

It ws jst simply AWSOME! da best story i hve ever read..thnx 4 a gud,funi,dramatic bt romantic story Max Coates nd YOZA, u guys r da best;) kp it up!

mimi · 13 years ago

Wow wt a lovely story i enjy it kept up the gud wrk n gve 10/10.

Amanda · 13 years ago

Great but to short

Holy+Hustler% · 13 years ago

Ths stori was very nyc nd gud at da same tym.i even ignr my cntcts coz i wna read dc.bg up yoza! Ur da best

;…@+MkhÂ¿Zâ¬!;-)Â¤muhLâ¬;- · 13 years ago

zakes so glad i read dis its relates 2 my lyf so mch

@ngÂ£l+Â£Â¥?z · 13 years ago

t z gr8,it rocked ,i love t nd cnt w8 for da continuation;)

CUTE(X)(H):D · 13 years ago

This was a gr8 story

NGAMLA+$ · 13 years ago

Cool it was awsome

$NUNU+BIEBER$ · 13 years ago

Wow this is the most amezing story i'v ever red

$NUNU+BIEBER$ · 13 years ago

Wow!cudnt put an end to d readin. I had t read til da end...bravo bravo..a worthy gud read...:)

:...F...: · 13 years ago

It ws so awesoooome!! Sum tips wl b hlpful 4 me. Dz is realy a gud story. :)

Koppie · 13 years ago

Ths was lyk 1 of da most awwwwesomst stories i eva red!nd it jst shows dat url neva knw if ur mr/mrs is ryt nxt 2 u;)

:$:P:$|!|+m!Â§Â§+Â§unÂ§h!nâ¬: · 13 years ago

Amazing,Fantabulous story,i really enjoyed it,keep up the good work!!!

Djnanaa · 13 years ago

This book is the greatest i ever read n its very romantic i want al the awesomes books :D

DJ+Lovely+kid · 13 years ago

Dis story took my breath away i can relate to hw hopewz feelin nd her frnd to c de guy he luvs with anoyher chck dt guy does nt deserv denva

Tshireletso · 13 years ago

Wish u all da best guyz! Wat an amazing stowi:)

$(x)HOT-KISSER(x)$ · 13 years ago

Are you nutts?

Black+Force · 13 years ago

Wow i rly enjoyd ths story wish 2 knw wthr zak n hope dated or wat

Shanty · 13 years ago

The best!!

$(x…@ · 13 years ago

I totaly enjoyed the story BUT what about Simon? Was he dropped like that? Aren't thing going to be a bit complex between Hope and Zack now that they've crossed the line? I would have love it if Nomusa's kiss was elaborated. Like have her tell her friends about her relationship with Lindi or is that ALL forth coming?

_uTeasoul_Â® · 13 years ago

Thank 4 the storier

BEEFY+OR+CHEEZY · 13 years ago

Wat a w0w! Damn dats sum nice, t0uchng deep ish ryt ther!

*BARBIE+BITCH:P* · 13 years ago

Awsome

Monique · 13 years ago

Yow huh its g8t...jst myd me feel like a grl:'(ooohw ...

DARK++SOUL · 13 years ago

Y0w wat a macnifesant b0ok ,;)max im l0okng f0rward 2 c ya nxt b0ok

H0nda:}ch!ck · 13 years ago

Wow ths iz da best buk eva its reali gr8

(x)+Lucious+Lips+(x) · 13 years ago

Dis iz da best buk eva i luv it

Lil-z · 13 years ago

I realy love it

Chavo · 13 years ago

Asome

Blank · 13 years ago

Twz a great story iv evr rad so plz guyz jst kip on wrttng bcz uv proven 2 us tht u hv a talent dnt stp ur thng u wr born wth it

Lady+Antibellum+(;)) · 13 years ago

It was great

Icequeen · 13 years ago

Dats waz a great story i ever c it waz fabe, awesome continue abt it

MASTER+MND · 13 years ago

Its awesome jst lyk its nym. Its a gud story i enjoyed it

MASTER+MND · 13 years ago

its s0 c00l i just l0ve this st0ry it just sh0ws us that the 0ne y0u l0ve is under y0ur n0se y0u just d0nt kn0w it yet..xoxo

[(x)]TÂ¡NkErBeLL[(x)] · 13 years ago

I reli loved the stry i enjoyed it .

Cyc…@ · 13 years ago

Nomusa waz da beste charactr damn nd zack de smth talkr*

…@3ntho+tse+monate:@5 · 13 years ago

W0w!.. Th!s was 0ne 0f the m0st !nterest!ng st0r!es that !v read cant wa!t f0r 2..

VÃ…@nGâ¬L · 13 years ago

This story was very interesting.. I loved Nomusa's character.. She knew wat was goin on wit every1 at all tyms.. She helpd them wit der pwoblms bt she aso nva 4got bwt ha own lyf.. Its pwty weird hw she cn make a guy's knees freeze bt at da end she turns owt 2b lesbian or bisexual.. Basicaly dis story is teln u dat we shudnt rush in2 a relationship n we shudnt choose our fwnds ova a gal or boy.. Bcoz guyz n gals cum n go bt fwnds stay 4eva

{:Â¤:}Shamz0{:Â¤:} · 13 years ago

0w yoza my zester , i enjoyd many storiz 4m u nd dz Awesome z da bzt

T-3peat · 13 years ago

awesome was a nice story

Lwandile · 13 years ago

Wt a gr8 stry,i enjyd rdn it 4rm da bgn 2 da end n i jc lvd it.DA Awesomez hv dun a fn jb in2 ptn a stry lyk ds 2geda n fnly um hapi 4 Hope dt at lst he fnd The One.Wsh em da bst....um wtn 4 da nxt stry dnt cip us wtn 2 lng guyz! U rck bg tym (x)(x)(H)(H)(H)(H).

Switi+P · 13 years ago

Awsme stori cnt w8 4 da sisterz n street skillz

Candy+gal+2 · 13 years ago

L0ved ths st0ry jst finish reading it ddn even wana put my ph0ne dwn cnt w8 4 the nxt 1

*Â…@l"...Â«* · 13 years ago

Gr8 story hope zack n hope wil b 2getha 4 eva wish u all de best:'(

Baby+blue · 13 years ago

D stori wz gr8 cnt w8 4d nxt 1...kip up d gud w0rk guyz :)

LADY+CEE · 13 years ago

#ff0000I mostly relate 2 hope,sumtyms u neva realise de thngs unda ur nose de story is wondaful cnt wait 4 de next stry lyn

<<<<^^^YOUNG+D^^^>>> · 13 years ago

Gr8 story tz, cnt w8 4 mor. Hope waz d best......

Me · 13 years ago

Mh!wat a story,i lvd ds one

Mr+NT+awe! · 13 years ago

I loved this story :) was an enjoyable read with a lovely ending :) cant wait for the next one :D

Morg* · 13 years ago

Lol its flippin'TYPICAL for these freakin-lame Yoza authorz to give us such freakin-lame-ish always mxm:o( rememba that lame story 'PAINKILLER'? Ag maan Yoza redeem urslvs

Ã¾RÃMÃTHÃZÃÃÃ · 13 years ago

It ws fyn bt i am waitin 4 the nxt sistaz story:)gud job

@..…@ · 13 years ago

Tjoh......... Fnd myslf alot in hopez shoez bt dat stry itslf waz da bomb big up 2 da author u ROCK MY WORLD!

Thuli · 13 years ago

M not realy a guy who reads stories bt dis 1 hs changed all dat , I realy diged dis story nd i cnt w8 4 da next 1 ... Thanx guys keep up da gud work , u rock...!!!!

goldHEART+(H) · 13 years ago

When do the nxt streetskillz story start?

MUNCHKIN · 13 years ago

Awesum story wita hapi endin

(*)…@Tï¿½+G@ï¿½.+.+.(*) · 13 years ago

Uh shame idon't wanna lie iluved da whole story 4rm start 2 da end hope was my star ican't wait 4 da next one luv u guys.......mwah ur story rocks

Glamarous · 13 years ago

Loved it, loved it, loved it, cnt wait . . .

Amber+Rose · 13 years ago

This is the best story line ever written. Can't wait for the next one. All the best..... Mwah

â�…@ndÂ¥+b@bÂ£ · 13 years ago

I luvd da st0ry 4rm beginin 2 end. Hope hs been thru al0t n finali g0t ha(x) n al da hard wrk payed off. Yoza cnt w8 4 feb mke dis 1 mre interesting(*)

SÃXÃ¬Â¤SHYNESS · 13 years ago

I so loved the story it was fantabulous and awes0me,i thnk i relate 2 deevya cos i lie alot 2 keep myself owt of trouble and i lyk 2 act lyk an adult,i cnt wait 4 the next chapter,thanx yoza pls keep the c0ming;-)

Mis+Marijuana · 13 years ago

hope is my star she went through a hard time,lying 2 her mada,gt injured

Dj+…@m · 13 years ago

Thz z 1 hell great story i love it nd i wud love 2 c nd read mre

$exclusive+p$ · 13 years ago

Wow...how disapointin,i wnt lie i lovd da story,bt da endin...ai,thr kis was suden,it needed mre suspense...chapter 25 jus ruind da whle awesomes 4 me

Â¤UR+0nâ¬+De$!REÂ¥ · 13 years ago

Stunning ending!l0ve da st0wi!big up 2 da author!u da b0mb!cnt wait 4 da nxt st0wi!:D

](z)[*~VicIoUs+AnGÂ£|*~](z)[ · 13 years ago

Wow,dis story was wow.u knw im nt much of a reader bt dis story made me lv readin so much,it rockd big tym i enjoyd it i lykd it,dis story ws vry vry vry awesum.big up 2 da author.keep the stories cumin.yeah u rock

Spangarapuka · 13 years ago

Deeyva

LOVELENAJ! · 13 years ago

Great story even thou it makes us guys look bad.it a bit of a girly stori.bt wen it cums 2 technq,i gve u full marks.its nt predictble n it neva gets borin.

(i)KasiNÃªrd8| · 13 years ago

Mhmm!nyc1 bt he stole t 4rm the other buk,eish d buk name i hv 4gttn,bt dawg u mst b creativ thanx

$(*)BORN+2B(*)$ · 13 years ago

Dis story is sayin a lot about my life. Its a gr8 story bt its also kinda sad. It rocks big time. Deevya's lyf is mre lyk mine, um hardly wit my fam. Nd as 4 lindi nd their other frnd is lyk me

~Â…@Tâ¬(H)N:}LLÂ¥~Â§( · 13 years ago

AWSUM story. Can't wait 4 part2. Both guys nd girls can relate and find themselves in the story. I have totally found myself in Hope. The person u would least expect is the 1. Hope just go with the flow Zack is great. Great work to the author just keep them coming;):D

GOSETH · 13 years ago

Never been so addicted to reading in my entire life......it was so good it reminds me of my friends nd i

<<*Â¤Â¤Â¤*$Vâ¬n0M+P0Iz0n$*Â¤Â · 13 years ago

It ws awesme...cnt w8t 4 the nxt story 2 start....keep up the gud wrk;)

/M!…@BbÂ¥+B@Pâ¬Â¥/ · 13 years ago

Comment on the stories anele wt other ppl sy is none of yo business

Lee · 13 years ago

Perfect ending u didnt leave us hanging n asking ourselves what wil happen. Keep it up,

Sweet-gal · 13 years ago

My rating for the story is 100% perfect story. dis shws wat gals g through coz of guys. Big up to da author.

Sweet-gal · 13 years ago

I relate to Deevyn coz the guy i had we ddnt cut ties stl rnt n we keep or i keep goin bck bt 2 yrs ago tld myself yha am done ull gt ther

Lee · 13 years ago

It rocked

Lea · 13 years ago

THE BEST WAY FOR KIDS TO HAVE UNWANTED KIDS ANYWAY THE STORY WAS GREAT KEEP IT UP 0722873870.

DESERT_DAWN · 13 years ago

Hey the story ws great bt i ddnt lyk the ending it ws like u just cut short the story

Bhut+Ta-Mabra · 13 years ago

Wow, what a story! I love it beyond words- clever.

lil+oracle · 13 years ago

It ws such a gr3t stori i realy lvd it cnt wait 4 da next story

(*)+Miss+ROYALTY(*) · 13 years ago

Hey ths story was vry gud bt i wnt 2 knw wt wl happen to deeyva afta she saw prakesh with another gal ,i feel sory 4 her ey.

99.9%Angel. · 13 years ago

Kudos to the writer 4 his brilliant..as teen galz we can relate to either one of the galz,be it hope,deevya or nomusa. Big thumbs up!!

It's+barbie+biatch!! · 13 years ago

Fab st0rie. Lyk da fact dat it wasnt gl0ssy n sp0ke bowt thngz grls g0 threw bt da ending was abit cheesy. As if u gt b0red wit writing and decided 2 end it n jus ch0se dat

Missy · 13 years ago

Ja evry1 kipz say gr8 gd blah blah ag dnt sae anythng i3 u cnt sae anythn intrstn 2 sae bt yeah da stry ws wndrful

$*Lil*Miss:(Superb$* · 13 years ago

Hope cant believe her eyes when she sees her mom. The reason being that its in a club. Once again they had snuck in but hope never expected her mom there...now she is ducking and diving between tables hoping against all things good that she and the other awesomes can get out before her mother spots them. Finally hope can see the entrance to the club. But its packed with people. And although hope has dodged her mother. She has not dodged her aunt. Who sees her at the entrance...

fluffy!! · 13 years ago

Oh hmm.thats wow!!

Cute+monster · 13 years ago

Ive neva been ksd 2 bt i hope il enjoy my 1st kiss:) n da funny thng z i dnt knw whether am a gud kissr or nt bt lets hope am a gud kissr. Big applaus 4 da author tht wz an awesome story entitled i realy like it i mean i am so inlove wit it. I love it i love :} wish i cud gt a guy lyk zack:}

(x)FÃ¥Ãth+FÃbÃ»Â£ÃÃ$(x) · 13 years ago

I relate m0stly 2 deeyva c0z there is nthng worse dan 2 l0ve smbody nd nt 2 b lvd in return,dats clearly meanz dat ur inlv aln.gues it waz ol lust,neva eva trust a guy c0z ul end up in a c0lapsd world.

H0t+nd+sexi · 13 years ago

It ws a gud n entartainin story kpt me wonderin n guessin n i cnt wait 4 de nxt episode, it rockd big tym, thumbs up

Diggar · 13 years ago

I relate mostly to deevya bein in a situation wer u love somebody nd they hurt u all the time untill u finally reach a point where you give up

Â�…@+B0MBÂ§Hâ¬Â£Â£Â»Â» · 13 years ago

This story was great, ther was never a chapter that bored, i jus kept wanting to read more.

*?musiq:Ãice?* · 13 years ago

Ths waz a grt stori indeed.cnt wait 4 more.wel i cn relate 2 hope,everytng tht hapend 2 her,also hapend 2 me

Keo+ · 13 years ago

Awesome! Wow,i cnt w8 4 da next awesmes.. Dis story was jst gr8.

:PXhosaliciousss:P · 13 years ago

Da story startd wel bt end bdly

UPTWN+GAL+;-) · 13 years ago

Totally off d huk, ws supa gr8 cdnt ax 4 anythn beda! Cnt w8 4 d nex issue dou wow thumbzup yoza.;)

Imadiva. · 13 years ago

Great work 2 the writers. The story rocked. Couldnt wait to read next chapter awesome;)

Havoc · 13 years ago

WOW wat a story...its nt only wonderful bt it also teaches u sumthngs dat r hpng in a real world. it is nt easy 2 5nd da perfect match nd sumtymz dat perfect sum1 cn b sum1 u neva thot abt...we all go thru a rough tym b4 5nd da bst...thanx 2 yol guyz 4 shnwing us nd teaching us...surely we cnt w8 4 da nxt chapter...keep up da gud wrk we learnin 4rm it:D:D:D

:}LADY+ROCK:} · 13 years ago

Ohait enough of ths stories lol:o( lets make our own nw

Ã¾RÃMÃTHÃZÃÃÃ · 13 years ago

i thnk i relate 2 deevya bt by lyin coz i lie 2 get out of trouble bt then dis story has taught me alot especialy wen Hope told her mum da truth..and i learnt dat u mus always be ther 4 ur frandz nomater wat...rily loved da story great work

lee · 13 years ago

It waz filld wit advetures n its a very emotional story n i lyk wat zack dd in da last chapter,dats wat i cal winning a grl's heart.m a guy but i litteraly cried in da end,dats hw gud da story is.

Big+R · 13 years ago

Guys dat was w8n 4 mor dat was a fantastic story lukin 4wrd 2 awesomes 2

$fli+chq$ · 13 years ago

Dope story bt i thnk DEEVYA waz portrayed as d best charecter in d story. I mean shez introduced as dis bitchy jlous frnd bt in d end she saves d day 4HOPE. pity she had 2b d 1 wid a brkn hrt

$MR.CONGENIAL$ · 13 years ago

That was such a nyc romantic,emotional story, it so sweet of zac 2 do wat he dd,the last chapter i actualy made my cry:'( tears of joy:D, i can't wait 2 c wat happens next in da nxt chapter

Lizzie+mcguire · 13 years ago

Nco0 dat was jst 2 swt.

(c)Mis+sexy+by+nature(c) · 13 years ago

Co0L st0rY

.. · 13 years ago

What a way to end this story. Well done guys, keep up the good work. I really can't wait for the next one.

Busi · 13 years ago

It s0 gud yazi:?

Thandolwe2 · 13 years ago

Damn dis was a fantabul0us st0rie eva. Wish i ws h0pe ryt nw:-}

L0vej0y · 13 years ago

Da nym awesame explain itsself.da story is very gud dat u cnt even w8t 4 cmn episode.hu expected dat zack n hope wil b 2getha?

:)+Slender:-) · 13 years ago

I jst rel8t 2 Hope, rite nw im in a boy darama

M!�…@RB!â¬+B!TCH · 13 years ago

it was the best st0ry eva:-} me l0vd it l0ts mmmwahz

(H)Nay-Nay(F) · 13 years ago

Yoh:}:} wonderful,great infact AWESOME story. . . .!!! kip up da good work guys(F)(F). . . cnt wait 4 the next 1(G)(G)

$**...honey+babe...**$ · 13 years ago

Awwwww..........this story is soooooooooo AWDSOME!!! I cnt wait 4 da nxt 1! Thnx yoza u guys ROCK!:D(F)(G)

!+!…@tterbox+!+! · 13 years ago

I wasnt interestd in any of yozas stories bt after ths 1 tjo m cnt w8 2 read other stories 2 cum 1st feb tnx 2 u guys

â�…@be · 13 years ago

I only hav 1 word 2 decribe dis story AWESOME(G)!big ups 2 da author nd thank u 4 a great story!

<> · 13 years ago

I do nt lyk b00ks bt yoza hs gt my attenti0n with these st0ries n im very hard to please. Great endn to ds story!

(…@P@Ck@gEr(*) · 13 years ago

Dd it realy hv 2 end dis way? I ws strting 2 enjoy it...

PETER · 13 years ago

Da stry ws gr8 bt da endin ws jst 2 . . . Its lyk da wrtr jst lst wrds

$*Lil*Miss:(Superb$* · 13 years ago

Y0 damn dat waz s0 sweet .i l0vd da st0ry n y0 da end waz s0 sweet .f0l0win da st0ry i ddnt thnk ths wud happen.cnt w8 4 da 2nd 1:D

*$Ayobalicious+Chikita!$* · 13 years ago

Gr8 story cnt wait til the nxt chapter starts

Chris · 13 years ago

This story waz:[ id (H) to read the confesionz,sistaz nd streetskillz storiz

M!$…@NE · 13 years ago

M so hpy wit da ending of ths story hope n zack finally kissing even thou hope dd nt c zack in a romantic way at all now at least hope wil b hapy n she mst dump simon...

Gossip+gal · 13 years ago

Da eposote waz owesome jst lyk its name uhm i lvd ol da charectors an ja im lukn 4ward 2 da scnd apesote i cnt w8,bg up 2 yoza:)

$sexylicious$ · 13 years ago

The stori rckd i luvd evry chapter mwa nd thanx cnt wyt til da nxt 1 nd o i thnk im mst lik hope coz i havnt ben kissed yet nd i cnt tke it lyin 2 my parnts bt mstly im lik deevya coz im stylish nd i cn gt myslf out of bd thngs quickly

*TWÂ£â¬TÂ¥* · 13 years ago

i loved de story esp hope cz she is hnst n lyk 2 lok out 4 her frndz

Micra · 13 years ago

The awesum ws gr8. I cnt w8 4 da nxt episode.

CUTE+BABE · 13 years ago

Dat was a gr8 story big up 2 da yoza team luvd it thnx guyz shwr us wit more of thse

Crazy+ch!ck · 13 years ago

stories are gr8t bt the page is 2 lng nd itz so tiring 2 read,

Luc…@ · 13 years ago

Wow dat was rili awesum 4rm da beginnin 2 da end.Dis story made my days despite da stres im in.Been glowin wen i read it.Thumbs up 2 da author and yoza team.U guys rock my world big tym.Thanks

Siza · 13 years ago

ok lets just say i was in 2 gals 2 stil am it was hard schl coz i lied abt it was so nt wanting 2 get teasd and al that i lied alt got my self in a bg hole bt was nt happy til i went 2 my schl danc nt prom just a dance wif my gf whe stil dating 2 day gne get marrid 2

** · 13 years ago

Wow wow i ril lovd da story,i cant wait 4 da next one.ur stories rock guyz kep em cuming

2hot2resist · 13 years ago

Wow wat a great story cnt w8 4 february

SWEET+FANTASY · 13 years ago

Hope has been in a same situation as me n i dnt knw if i wil hv a happy endin.lyf is lyk a junkle only d fittest wil survive. Hope is very strng 2 live lyk she neva had a dad.

Mell · 13 years ago