I liked the story and it was very fun. I wish I could always be reading and I can’t wait to read part 2 of the story. The thing I disliked about the story was that it had a very quick ending and I still wanted to read some more!

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I liked that there was a small amount of jealousy within the story. I also liked that Lerato was falling in love with Andile but was pretending that and telling Gugu that she wasn’t. I liked everything about the story I just wish that the writer had carried on writing more chapters. I found the story very interesting and realistic.

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I liked how the speaker read the story. The highlight of the story was that I could imagine as if I was in the exact same room as Lerato when she nodded her head. I would rate this chapter 5 out of 5.

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I really enjoyed the story – I wouldn’t change it for anything. I can’t wait for tonight when I read chapter two. Thanks guys! Big ups!

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I liked that Lerato told Gugu that she didn’t like the boy – she did like him but she didn’t want to say it because if she told Gugu, she was scared that she would go and tell the boy. I liked everything about this story – it was both sad and fun. I liked that Gugu and Lerato had the right kind of dreams.

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I like everything in this story – the way Lerato talks and loves her friend Gugu. She always gives her advice. Lerato is a lovely person, who Gugu loves so much!

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I think that Lerato is a good girl and likes her friends too much. She wanted to chat but Gugu ignored her. Lerato liked listening to other people and she was very confident.

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I like that the story tells us about Lerato’s feelings and her dreams in life. Lerato had a crush but she kept it in her heart and didn’t tell anyone. When Gugu was talking about Andile, Lerato became more interested in the conversation. I didn’t like how Lerato hid her true feelings – she was not good enough to express what she was feeling. I also didn’t like that Gugu always spoke about herself and never asked what her friends were feeling.

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I like the way Lerato acts and the way she spoke about when you were a child and boys played with you in the back garden. I liked that she was such a strong person. I also liked the fact that she was a dreamer, but I do think she was lying about not having feelings for Andile. What I don’t like about the story is when that guy buys her a present because that means that he wants something from her.

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I liked that in the story the two girls have come a long way together and they tell each other everything. Lerato is a writer and she loves people, she also has a huge crush on Andile but she doesn’t know how to tell her friend, Gugu. I didn’t like the fact that the story came to an end in the middle of nowhere.

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I liked the close friendship between Lerato and Gugu – they obviously love each other very much and know the other very well. I could see the love and how much their friendship meant to the other when you read about their interactions – it was very interesting.

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I loved Gugu; she loved Lerato so much and never pretended. I loved the story but she is what made it interesting. I also really liked Lerato and Gugu’s close friendship and how they know how to handle each other.

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I liked everything about the story – it was very plain and simple but still fun and exciting. I really liked the first chapter when Lerato was speaking to the couple and while she was doing this and they spoke, she was busy writing a story in her head. This fascinated me because I really love people who love using their imaginations as much as I do.

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I loved Gugu’s confidence, her positive outlook on life and her love for her job. Lerato on the other hand loves writing. I didn’t like that Lerato tried to hide her feelings for Andile because I don’t believe it is good to hide your feelings. I liked Gugu’s honesty with Lerato. She told Lerato everything she didn’t want to hear. Lerato didn’t want to agree with Gugu that she did actually like Andile.

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I liked Gugu because she made the story interesting. I also liked that when she asked Lerato questions about Andile she was very straight forward. I also loved the way that Sonja read the story out loud with all the actions.

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The story was captivating but I was confused because I thought Gugu was a man. I thought this until her character came to life after the first few lines. I liked the middle part of the story because there are lots of juicy bits, but I thought the beginning was very boring. It was a nice story and I liked it very much – I want to read more about it.

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I really liked Gugu in the story – she always spoke the truth to Lerato – she obviously knows Lerato very well. I liked the way the story was set out for the readers. I think Lerato likes Andile but doesn’t want to show it because they were childhood friends that grew up together.

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I liked the relationship between Gugu and Lerato but I didn’t like that Lerato wasn’t honest with Gugu.

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I liked everything about this story because it was very straightforward and always explained everything that was happening. I disliked Lerato because she was so edgy and got very defensive when Gugu was asking her questions about Andile.

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I loved the story and found it very interesting. There was nothing that I did not like in the story and I would like to read more.

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I liked everything about the story – I never stopped listening and there was never a dull moment. The thing that I didn’t like was not being able to carry on reading because it was so interesting! I loved the character, Lerato – she seems like a lovely person.

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I liked that I could relate to Lerato in the story when she is torn between her work and the guy she likes. It was good that she was more focused on her job than personal relationships.

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I think it was very well written and it really captured my attention because of the way the story had been set out. My only problem with the story is that I wanted to know more; I wanted to know what happens next – I didn’t want it to end where it did.

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It was a very interesting story because when you start reading it, you feel like you can’t wait to find out what happens next. The story also had a good meaning behind it.

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I liked the story because it was nice, once you got into the groove of the story. But, I did not like that the story had to come to an end. I would have liked to keep on reading. It was very interesting in the end – I loved it!

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The story was very interesting and I liked the way Lerato was very plain like me and Gugu. Everything in the story was lovely.

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I found the story very exciting but there was not enough romance in the story. Lerato should have gone for the guy that made her happy because not everything should revolve around money – money can’t buy you happiness and love!

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