My last breath will be my pain reliever.
The silence will mean
The war is over, the battle is over.
You tried your best.
You gave your all.
You fought and lost.
You received and gave love.
You paid your dues.
You served your purpose on this earth.
Now it’s time to rest.
Mother nature m (the soil) will welcome my body, and there shall it be my final resting place.
My spirit will go back to the universe.
My spirit will go back to the spirit world.
The Spirit never dies.
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Yeah!!!! Our last breath....
Mmhhh smangele nyc poem..
Eix i dnt knw abt de day... when n how n where .. but i pray dat i must hv a true n pure account to God eix... we should play our role coz tym has eaten by dogs... guys...
hmm what you wrote its so deep,it shows that the wrote felt a lot of pain that nobody even myself i cant stand them,surely a death doesn't have to be a way of what youre feeling my friend,and i can think the same as like anybody coz the title is cold and scary. "my last breath" hmm i know sometimes death come naturally but i cant think of a death in that way,i can rather not talk about death but anything,i know i will die but talking about it its like rushing it to come.Thats what Edward opinion, nice poem but it hurts our heart.