Last prayer | FunDza

A prayer…
A prayer to the all mighty
A prayer to the one who provided us with so much
A prayer to the most kindly
A prayer to the Lord.

Dear Lord…
I pray
I hope this is the “righteous” way.
It is my last one today.
I prayed since I first learned how to.
But now I see no reason to…
I always had myself to rely on
I am a man
A man.

Dearly God
Rarely Lord
I believed in you
but in me did you?

Heavenly father
My bags are heavy, father
I am not perfect –
This is a fact
But your love to me has no impact.
I’m ready and packed.
Watch me on your review
As I am now leaving you.
My review shows me no view of you.
I’ve known no you –
Neither did you.
I have seen no you –
When I needed the most of you.
Now it’s me without you.
I am my own man –
I am not your fan.

Halla looser
Hall is you ja
Halla moola
No more halleluiah.

7 Responses

May God forgive you, for he has never forsaken you, you just had to open ur eyes and realise All in all.....good luck

Ocean Pearl · 4 years ago

People never understand your pain, but they are fast to judge. I cant tell you what to do, but believe in God. Follow your heart. & remember to keep on writing poetry; expressing yourself helps. it helps me, it will do the same with you. Take Care! :)

Nondu Madela · 10 years ago

U wont wait long amzile. Its on its way

Zwelakhe · 11 years ago

To the writer I can't wait to read About the God who bleeds On the cross of calvery About the God who feels Your pain A God who sees Your mistakes And forgives About a God who doesn't mislead Untill then I'll be waiting to read

Amzile · 11 years ago

dear readers of this poem. silent, i wrote it. but theres a strong reason i did. judy, i know. and i believ he does but somtimes i doubt it.

zwelakhe · 11 years ago

2 whoever who wrote this poem.....GOD 4GIV HS SINS

SILENT · 11 years ago

God knowz every1,he created u so it meanz he knows u dnt ever give up

Judy · 11 years ago